2012高考英語(yǔ)作文沖刺:高考兩篇滿分作文欣賞

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    日前,教育部考試中心公布了《2002年普通高等學(xué)校招生全國(guó)統(tǒng)一考試說(shuō)明》。從英語(yǔ)學(xué)科來(lái)看,今年的《考試說(shuō)明》與2001年相比,在命題原則、考試內(nèi)容、考試題型、分值分配等方面基本沒(méi)有大的變化,體現(xiàn)了高考命題的穩(wěn)定性和連續(xù)性。
    有關(guān)寫作,我們首先看一看2000年和2001年高考中的兩篇滿分作文。
    Sample WritingI(2000)
    ①At 7:15a.m.on the morning of Feb.8th,2000,I was heading east on the south side of the Park Road,taking my morning walk as usual.②I saw an old man on the other side of the road outside the gate of the City Park.③He was just crossing the street when a car on the 3rd Street made a sudden right turn at the crossing.④The car was so fast that the old man even didnt have time to dodge and the car hit the elderly hard.⑤I thought the driver would have stopped to help,but she didn't.⑥Instead,she just drove off,leaving the old man still lying on the ground in pain.⑦Fortunately,I noted down the details:it was a yellow car,the plate number of which was AC864,and the driver was a young lady.⑧After that,I went over to check out the old man.(30分)
    Sample Writing II(2001)
    ①I'm very pleased to tell you the change s of my life since reduction of learning load was brought in.②But before that,I was often exhausted at weekends.③I attended school and had classes the whole day.④In the evening,I was often forced to do my boring homework and I could not go to bed until 11:30.⑤Since the program of reducing learning load was introduced,my life,however,has been much more interesting.⑥I frequently pay a visit to museums,drop in at computer rooms and draw pictures in my leisure(=spare)time.⑦After lunch,I watch TV,read stories and look through newspapers to enrich my horizon.⑧No longer do I stay up;on the contrary,I go to bed at about 10p.m.⑨Inshort,I am quite satisfied with my life now.(25分)
    上面兩篇文章都有一些共同的特點(diǎn):內(nèi)容充實(shí),要點(diǎn)全面;語(yǔ)言豐富,文字優(yōu)美;行文連貫,思路清晰,過(guò)渡自然,均為滿分作文。我們認(rèn)為,考生要想在高考寫作中取得理想的分?jǐn)?shù),必須明確高考寫作考查的形式。下面我們給出1990-2002(春)高考作文統(tǒng)計(jì)表。
    本人曾參加過(guò)2000年和2001年高考北京地區(qū)英語(yǔ)閱卷工作。從閱卷的情況來(lái)看,老師們更多地是從整體上或者說(shuō)從宏觀上把握整篇文章,比較側(cè)重于語(yǔ)言文字的運(yùn)用,但是這并不意味著考生要刻意去寫一些花哨的東西。要在寫作中獲取一個(gè)比較理想的分?jǐn)?shù),考生應(yīng)該從以下幾個(gè)方面入手:
    首先,考生要明確考試的寫作要求,主要是說(shuō)明文字型、圖表型和圖畫型三種類型,對(duì)寫什么(作文內(nèi)容或要點(diǎn)),怎么寫(行文和語(yǔ)言)在頭腦里面應(yīng)該有一個(gè)清醒的思路。從閱卷的情況來(lái)看,很多考生沒(méi)有認(rèn)真思考,動(dòng)筆就寫,在寫作的過(guò)程當(dāng)中或者在檢查的時(shí)候發(fā)現(xiàn)一些錯(cuò)誤,不得不進(jìn)行修改,由于考試時(shí)不準(zhǔn)使用涂改液和膠條,致使卷面多處用圓珠筆或鋼筆涂改,嚴(yán)重影響卷面整潔,也影響了考生的實(shí)際成績(jī)。
    其次,考生應(yīng)該從遣詞造句角度多下工夫。詞法上,要盡可能地運(yùn)用已經(jīng)學(xué)過(guò)的而且比較熟練的詞組、短語(yǔ)或成語(yǔ),要在使用動(dòng)詞、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、副詞和詞語(yǔ)活用等方面多用筆墨;句法句式上,要求變換各種句式,如強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句、感嘆句、省略句、各種從句和固定句型等,長(zhǎng)句和短句交錯(cuò)使用。需要強(qiáng)調(diào)的是,考生務(wù)必確保在沒(méi)有錯(cuò)誤的前提下作一些適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
    第三,行文連貫是閱卷教師比較看重的一個(gè)方面。為了使文章在整體上結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)密,渾然一體,增強(qiáng)文章的說(shuō)服力和感染力,考生應(yīng)該在句子與句子之間,甚至段落與段落之間,恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┻^(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)。
    另外,考生很容易犯的一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤是,在寫出若干個(gè)句子以后不使用連接詞或連詞,出現(xiàn)“run-onsentence”(連續(xù)句)現(xiàn)象,這是英語(yǔ)寫作的大忌??忌欢ㄒ斡?,在英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)中一定要用一個(gè)連詞或連接詞連接兩個(gè)句子(當(dāng)然,有時(shí)用一個(gè)分號(hào)要連接兩個(gè)句子),兩個(gè)連詞連接三個(gè)句子,三個(gè)連詞連接四個(gè)句子,依次類推。
    在交卷前,考生務(wù)必將寫完的作文閱讀兩遍,認(rèn)真檢查是否有語(yǔ)法和拼寫方面的錯(cuò)誤,是否有動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)方面的錯(cuò)誤,是否有中式英語(yǔ)等等,因?yàn)樯鲜鋈魏五e(cuò)誤都會(huì)影響考生的最后成績(jī)。
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