英國留學申請個人陳述中盡量要少用的詞匯

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   據(jù)英國《電訊報》報道,英國大學學院招生服務中心(Ucas)負責人表示學生在個人陳述中被用爛的陳述不會被喜歡的哦。
    1. “自打記事起,我就……”(For as long as I can remember I have...)
    2. “我申請這個課程是因為……”(I am applying for this course because...)
    3. “我一直對…感興趣”(I have always been interested in...)
    4. “在我一生當中,我一直很享受…”(Throughout my life, I have always enjoyed...)
    5. “回顧我的教育經(jīng)歷,我……”(Reflecting on my educational experiences...)
    6. “護理專業(yè)是一門十分具有挑戰(zhàn)性的……”(Nursing is a very challenging and demanding [career/profession/course)
    7. “在學術上,我一直是……”(Academically, I have always been...)
    8. “我一直想從事…職業(yè)”(I have always wanted to pursue a career in...)
    9. “我一直對…充滿熱情”(I have always been passionate about...)
    10. “教育是充滿力量的武器,你可以用它來改變世界。”(Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world.)
    Ucas首席執(zhí)行官Mary Curnock Cook表示,個人陳述一定要個人化。70萬學生中有超過1,779名學生在個人陳述中喜歡用“最感興趣的是”(interested in)或“被…所吸引”(fascinated by)結尾。