個人陳述:招生官最討厭的10大陳詞濫調(diào)

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    個人陳述:招生官最討厭的10大陳詞濫調(diào),跟著出國留學網(wǎng)一起來了解下吧,歡迎閱讀。
    Ucas數(shù)據(jù)顯示,“從小我一直是……”(From a young age I have always been...)是去年申請者最常用的開頭。70萬學生中有超過1,779名學生在個人陳述中喜歡用“最感興趣的是”(interested in)或“被…所吸引”(fascinated by)結(jié)尾。
    小編梳理了個人陳述中被人用爛的句子,各位準備寫申請的童鞋可要留心喲!
    1. “自打記事起,我就……”(For as long as I can remember I have...)
    2. “我申請這個課程是因為……”(I am applying for this course because...)
    3. “我一直對…感興趣”(I have always been interested in...)
    4. “在我一生當中,我一直很享受…”(Throughout my life, I have always enjoyed...)
    5. “回顧我的教育經(jīng)歷,我……”(Reflecting on my educational experiences...)
    6. “護理專業(yè)是一門十分具有挑戰(zhàn)性的……”(Nursing is a very challenging and demanding [career/profession/course)
    7. “在學術(shù)上,我一直是……”(Academically, I have always been...)
    8. “我一直想從事…職業(yè)”(I have always wanted to pursue a career in...)
    9. “我一直對…充滿熱情”(I have always been passionate about...)
    10. “教育是充滿力量的武器,你可以用它來改變世界?!?Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world.)
    Ucas首席執(zhí)行官Mary Curnock Cook表示,個人陳述一定要個人化。“學會介紹自己在求職面試中是一項很重要的技能,用那些陳詞濫調(diào)無法讓你的才能凸顯?!?BR>