美國留學(xué)的申請并不是很簡單，那么有一些什么樣的注意事項(xiàng)呢，今天來談?wù)剛€(gè)人陳述的寫作，和出國留學(xué)網(wǎng)小編一起來看看美國留學(xué)個(gè)人陳述開頭的五種方式。
(一)開門見山法――先點(diǎn)出重點(diǎn)，再依據(jù)事件發(fā)生順序，將所見所聞寫出。
例如：
I was lucky in the fact that I picked chemical engineering and it turned out to be the right choice for me. However, my first semester at college was a rude shock - being away from home for the first time, being in a relatively male-dominated field.
I started in a test lab for airplanes, where I got to break things. That is called static and fatigue testing. Then I went into design for airplanes. I worked on all areas of commercial planes including the floors and windows. . I am most proud of my testing projects
(二)倒敘法
例如：
On the commencement I was deeply touched by myself. The reason I was so excited was neither the progress on my students’ study nor my excellent graduate thesis award. The only reason that made me in tears was that I am one of the few undergraduate students who attended many researches in the department and got guide on special knowledge and personal growth. During my four years study I established a good relationship with my instructors and classmates. When the leaving day came I was moved by my success and the strived life for all these four years.
(三)引用法――美國留學(xué)個(gè)人陳述開頭引用各種資料，加以引申，達(dá)到吸引讀者，幫助突出中心的作用。
例如：
When asked how to manage to mask remarkable statues, the French sculptor Auguste Rodin answered, “I choose a block of marble and chop off whatever I don''t need.” For me, life is just a block of marble---whether the marble can be turned into a remarkable statue depends on your natural talents, diligence and a sense of duty. During over four years’ my college life, I have been dreaming of being a perfect female researcher so that I can enhance more young girls’ confidence in scientific research and encourage them to promote the development of science as men do.
(法國雕塑家羅丹說：“給我一塊大理石，把多余的去掉?！比松褪且粔K大理石，而能否雕琢出精湛的藝術(shù)品，演繹出絕妙的人生靠的是天賦，勤奮和使命感。我確立并實(shí)踐著一個(gè)夢想,在接下來的生涯中我將繼續(xù)我的夢想：to be a perfect engineering girl and display this kind of perfect to all，激勵(lì)更多的女性樹立在科研領(lǐng)域有所作為的信心，充分發(fā)揮在科研上的潛能，和男性一起推動(dòng)科學(xué)的發(fā)展!)
(四)精辟設(shè)喻法――留學(xué)ps開頭設(shè)喻，以引起讀者對要說明的事物或道理的興趣。
例如：
“Life is just like the ocean----whatever choice you make as a steersman, you must be well aware of your favorite, namely, which is worthy of pursuing in your whole lifetime!”
Since I was admitted into ××× university three years ago, these words, just like a bright lamp, have been lightening my future and leading the way to my favorite career--- the studies of educational technology.
(“在茫茫大海中，對于一個(gè)舵手最重要的是‘方向’，是在大海中行進(jìn)時(shí)清楚的知道自己何去何從，人生就如同大海，不管你選擇的是什么，作為舵手你必須清楚的知道什么是你的至愛，是值得你一生都去追求的!”
三年前當(dāng)我坐在大海邊冥想之時(shí),母親對我講了上面的話語。這些話語就像是我人生中的一盞燈塔,引領(lǐng)著我一步步的尋找到了我事業(yè)的至愛―教育技術(shù)和追求它的航線。)
(五)背景漸入法
1、美國留學(xué)個(gè)人陳述開頭引入家庭背景
例如：
My father is a chartered accountant and my mother is a banker. During my days at Engineering College I used to go to my father''s office and help him manage his portfolio of equities and other financial instruments. This was the time I learnt the first lesson of finance from my father i.e. risk and return are proportionate. In 1998 when I was in the second year the China stock market crashed. But fortunately, my father had a well-diversified portfolio because of which our returns were protected from the downside risk. This was when I learnt the second principle of finance from my father i.e. diversification reduces risk. While I understood these two principles intuitively, it produced in me a strong urge to learn and understand the complex theory behind the working of Finance. This, I believe, was a turning point in my career. I made up my mind to pursue a career in Finance and hence decided to do a Masters program in Business Administration.