作為留學(xué)申請(qǐng)文書(shū)中的一種，Essay寫(xiě)作也是很重要的組成部分，那么有哪些開(kāi)頭是同學(xué)們可以參考一下的，和出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)小編一直來(lái)看看美國(guó)留學(xué)Essay寫(xiě)作有效開(kāi)頭范例。
美國(guó)留學(xué)Essay寫(xiě)作有效開(kāi)頭范例1：
At my age， few people can genuinely claim that they have had a life-changing experience. After attending Leadership in the Business World （LBW） at the Wharton School last summer， I became one of those fortunate people to have experienced a life-changing academic program. Four weeks of meeting business executives， working with teammates through the night perfecting our professional business plan， experiencing the independence and responsibility that will come with college . . . none of this was advertised in the brochure for LBW， but all of this is what made it uniquely meaningful to me.
美國(guó)留學(xué)Essay寫(xiě)作有效開(kāi)頭范例2：
I TROD THE MUD IN THE misty spring rain. It was Qing Ming， the holiday in China when we honored our deceased ancestors. On the ground of the cemetery， drenched fowers lay in my grandfather＇s remembrance. That morning—a month before my sixth birthday—I clung tightly to my mother＇s sleeves and fnally learned why he passed away.
美國(guó)留學(xué)Essay寫(xiě)作有效開(kāi)頭范例3：
HE＇S IN MY ARMS， THE NEWEST addition to the family. I＇m too overwhelmed. ＂That＇s why I wanted you to go to Bishop Loughlin，＂ she says， preparing baby bottles. ＂But ma， I chose Tech because I wanted to be challenged.＂ ＂Well， you＇re going to have to deal with it，＂ she replies， adding， ＂Your aunt watched you when she was in high school.＂ ＂But ma， there are three of them. It＇s hard?。?BR> 美國(guó)留學(xué)Essay寫(xiě)作有效開(kāi)頭范例4：
Every first Thursday of each month I always look around the Van Muren Hall gymnasium looking at the sixty- and seventy-year-old men and wonder what I am doing there with them. They have lived through world-shaping events like World War II， the Korean War， and the Vietnam War， yet I sit there and interact with them as if there were no differences at all. The reason？ We simply share a similar hobby.
美國(guó)留學(xué)Essay寫(xiě)作有效開(kāi)頭范例5：
Only shock prevented the tears from streaming down my face. My cells were dead. After being accepted into the competitive Stanford Institutes of Medicine Summer research Program （SIMr）， and spending approximately 170 hours of the past month manipulating human embryonic stem cells （hESCs）， I was back to square one—with only one month of my internship remaining. How in the world was I going to make up for lost time？
美國(guó)留學(xué)Essay寫(xiě)作有效開(kāi)頭范例6：
The hindu god， brahma， seeing the plight of a society tainted by envy and greed， presents a boy with a drum that he can only hear， not see. This instrument， which is supposed to bring patience and discipline to humanity， is the foundation of Indian classical music. The boy has yet to discover that musicians use this tool to speak， allowing their minds to transmit messages through the vibrant pulsations of their notes.
以上就是給大家總結(jié)的美國(guó)大學(xué)申請(qǐng)Essay開(kāi)頭范例。Essay開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾之所以顯得那么困難，一部分原因是作者把它們想象的太難。申請(qǐng)人常常以為要在開(kāi)頭徹底清楚的表明全文的主旨，在結(jié)尾作出精銳的結(jié)論，文章才夠精彩。但這種想法的結(jié)果往往令作者太過(guò)緊張以至于把開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾寫(xiě)的過(guò)于夸張。你并不需要第一稿就寫(xiě)出一個(gè)很好的開(kāi)頭；往往作開(kāi)頭的最好的一句話就在第一稿的中間部分，只是一開(kāi)始你沒(méi)能夠發(fā)現(xiàn)它而已。