對于留學(xué)生來說，個人陳述的準(zhǔn)備是必不可少的，那么英國留學(xué)個人陳述怎樣寫更出彩呢?下面和出國留學(xué)網(wǎng)小編一起來看看英國留學(xué)個人陳述書寫指南吧。
英國留學(xué)個人陳述應(yīng)避免這幾類開頭。
1.重復(fù)簡歷型
個人陳述中不要去重復(fù)簡歷上的東西，這在很多學(xué)校的PS要求中有明確提到，個人陳述的寫作要具體到事件上，事件解決上，而不是單純地重復(fù)已有的內(nèi)容。
2.學(xué)校介紹型
有的同學(xué)的開頭等于是一個申請學(xué)校的簡介，這好像是在幫學(xué)校做宣傳，或表達(dá)你有多了解該學(xué)校，而不是寫個人陳述了。這是沒有意義的開頭，白白浪費了字?jǐn)?shù)，最容易被秒拒掉。
3.抄襲句式型
一些開頭的句式不知道大家是從哪里學(xué)到的，很多同學(xué)有用過。但同學(xué)們要知道，老外最恨抄襲，最喜歡原創(chuàng)，所以利害關(guān)系大家想想吧！
4.救世主型
一副救世主的形象，小時候就受富蘭克林的影響，立志改變世界。個人陳述的寫作一定要個人化、具體化，別吹牛，甚至帶一種霸權(quán)主義思維。
5.猶抱琵琶型
重點放在自己要做的重大決定上了，人生的轉(zhuǎn)折點，然后寫上幾句所謂名言警句。浪費字?jǐn)?shù)，有限的字?jǐn)?shù)里，同學(xué)們應(yīng)該學(xué)會直接，并且抓住重點，突出自己最有優(yōu)勢的方面、最有特色的方面。
6.言語幼稚型
一上來就回憶童年、少年時，自己有著怎樣的遠(yuǎn)大抱負(fù)，誰在乎。個人陳述字?jǐn)?shù)有限，卻用那么多話描述童年，沒有任何意義。學(xué)校想知道你如何看待未來，而不是如何度過過去。
個人陳述寫作技巧
保證真實
招生官每天看上千份PS，你寫的是否真實，是否有撒謊的成分，招生官一看便知。所以，學(xué)生在寫PS的時候，不要故作聰明，去編造一些你沒有的經(jīng)歷，夸大自己實力。PS一定要和簡歷保持匹配。
詞藻過于華麗
想要把PS寫的有水平一些，這是每個學(xué)生都應(yīng)該展現(xiàn)的。但是，不要為了達(dá)到這種效果，用過于生僻的詞匯，來顯示自己的高級，以至于招生老師還要去查字典才知道是什么意思。IDP君可以坦白的告訴你，招生官也是沒有太大耐心的哦！
內(nèi)容泛泛可陳
也就是說，內(nèi)容要實在，不要太空泛。你或許談到你的理想，你對未來的規(guī)劃，切記不要談到太過不切實際，太過難以實現(xiàn)。說出你真實的想法，以及你將為之的規(guī)劃就好。
簡單羅列活動經(jīng)歷
在英國留學(xué)申請個人陳述中，羅列自己的成就是非常危險的行為。招生官想要看到的不是你參加活動的量，而是你在這個活動中的成長，所扮演的角色，以及你的品性和各種潛力。
參考范文。
Personal Statement
This is applicant -- from China. As an aspiring dreamer, I have been enthusiastically fond of accounting and finance and aspired to make a difference in this domain. However, I clearly know that there is a long way to go from an aspiring dreamer to a talent in the field of accounting and finance. In striving for my goal, I pursue constant progress and self-transcending to become a best me. After entering Wuhan Institute of Technology in 2010, I chose Accounting as my major without hesitation. Now, to perfect my knowledge system and sharpen my vision, I am sincerely applying for the postgraduate programme in your esteemed university.
Through the extensive study at university, I not only enriched my professional knowledge but also enhanced my independent thinking, logical thinking as well as computing skills. Also, the undergraduate study enabled me to get a general understanding of accounting. my interest in finance and management was strengthened. With strong enthusiasm, I made full use of time to watch economic reports and read financial books. Driven by my self-motivation, I learned the specialized courses assiduously and achieved satisfying performance. To be more competent, I obtained the Accountant Qualification Certificate. I am convinced that the knowledge storage will serve as a strong support for my further study.
I regard your esteemed university as my dream place to pursue a higher degree. With favorable learning environment, eminent faculty, abundant resources and sound facilities, your distinguished university attracts me a lot.
After my completion of the postgraduate study, I intend to find a job relevant to accounting and finance in a large scale enterprise. Then, I will endeavor to be a distinguished accountant who can make a difference. I know that the postgraduate study demands hard work and commitment; it is a real investment of time and money, but I’m getting fully prepared to embark on the learning journey. I am not afraid of challenges. And I always regard myself as a fighter with an unconquerable will to upgrade and develop myself.