英國是許多學(xué)子向往的留學(xué)國家,教育老牌,而且擁有頂尖的教育資源和名校。接下來出國留學(xué)網(wǎng)小編重點(diǎn)和大家說說英國留學(xué)申請需不需要準(zhǔn)備申請書?
首先來看看書寫的內(nèi)容。
【W(wǎng)riting about the course】
你為什么申請這一科目?
為什么這個(gè)科目讓你感興趣?
為什么你覺得自己適合學(xué)習(xí)這一科目?你有相關(guān)的能力和經(jīng)驗(yàn)去幫助你成功學(xué)習(xí)這一科目嗎?
你正在或者曾經(jīng)學(xué)習(xí)過相關(guān)的課程嗎?
你曾經(jīng)參加過有關(guān)你的課程并能展示你能力的的活動嗎?(例如講座、競賽等)
【Skills and achievements】
介紹有關(guān)你所申請課程的相關(guān)學(xué)習(xí)或生活能力
你所獲得的榮譽(yù)或擔(dān)任過的職位等(例如學(xué)生會主席)
【Hobbies and interests】
個(gè)人愛好及課外活動
【W(wǎng)ork experience】
相關(guān)工作經(jīng)歷(盡量與科目有關(guān))
【Mature students/ international students】
介紹你(成年學(xué)生/海外留學(xué)生)的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷
【Future plans】
未來的計(jì)劃
接著來看看書寫的技巧。
第一、你不必直接向管理導(dǎo)師致函,也不必吸引他們的注意力;
第二、不用使用俗語,俚語,或口語。你沒有義務(wù)裝酷;
第三、用英英軟件(而不是美英軟件)來檢查拼寫是否有誤;
第四、不要大肆贊美你所申請的學(xué)校及其專業(yè);
第五、不要使用標(biāo)題,除非與內(nèi)文嚴(yán)格相關(guān);
第六、解釋你申請?jiān)搶I(yè)和課程的動機(jī);
第七、別顯露出你所申請的專業(yè)只是你的次優(yōu)選擇。
最后來看看書寫的注意事項(xiàng)。
結(jié)合自身,列舉實(shí)例
學(xué)會利用鮮活的實(shí)例,讓讀者進(jìn)入你的情境中,讓大學(xué)申請部的老師們可以感覺到申請人的想法。多注意從英國留學(xué)申請文書中更小的細(xì)節(jié)上突出特色,結(jié)合實(shí)例,而不是一味的模仿范文。
依照自己的性格寫文書
在閱讀無數(shù)的文書后,閱卷老師已能分辨什么是誠實(shí)與不誠實(shí)的作答,可以區(qū)分什么是發(fā)自內(nèi)心回答,因而寫作時(shí)應(yīng)該讓文書有趣,卻又不可喪失自我,依照自己的的性格寫文書,凸顯出自我個(gè)性和與眾不同。
不要套用模板寫作
英國大學(xué)的入學(xué)體制不同于中國大學(xué),更加注重學(xué)生的個(gè)性與特質(zhì),或者說更注重學(xué)生是否具有未來成功的潛力。所以申請者不要一味套用規(guī)律的寫作模板回答問題,因?yàn)檫@樣很容易偏移原來大學(xué)文書的主題,而大學(xué)審查官也很容易察覺這種寫作方式。
認(rèn)真校對
即使已經(jīng)擁有了一篇充滿個(gè)性、與眾不同的文書,也一定要做最后一項(xiàng)工作——認(rèn)真校對。不要犯下愚蠢的錯誤,大學(xué)錄取審查官注重細(xì)節(jié),因?yàn)橐苍S一個(gè)拼寫錯誤都會造成無法彌補(bǔ)的損失??傊?,認(rèn)真核查校對,確保文章內(nèi)無拼寫等小錯誤出現(xiàn),保證文書完美。
參考范文。
As a child I often accompanied my father to his small coin shop and spent hours watching him work. When I was older, I sometimes set up displays, waited on customers, and even balanced the books. This experience instilled in me the desire to own and manage my own business someday, yet I understand that the business world today is more complex. This complexity requires more education, and with that in mind, I am applying to the Master’s of Business Administration program at Indiana University Bloomington (IUB).
通過一個(gè)故事開頭,講述自己為何對business感興趣。
In addition to my helping out in my father’s business, I have had numerous other work experiences that further enhance my qualifications for this program. My resume enumerates the various positions I have held at Kerasotes Theaters, Chili’s restaurants, and Indiana University’s new Student Recreational Sports Center (SRSC), and what all of these positions have in common is an emphasis on serving the public fectively. Further, as an assistant manager at the Showplace 11 and a staff coordinator at the SRSC, I have gained valuable expertise in managing employees and creating work schedules. Both of these positions have allowed me to develop my sales and people skills, which are extremely important in an increasingly service-driven marketplace.
講述自己的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷。但是感覺在談及經(jīng)歷時(shí)候不夠具體,應(yīng)該說明具體做了什么事情,從中得到什么經(jīng)驗(yàn)或者教訓(xùn)。
Not all of my work experience has been as a paid employee. Part of my volunteering experience at Middleway House, the local battered women’s shelter, involved extensive work on computers, including word processing, organizing databases and creating spreadsheets. Also, I recently participated in an internship program for academic credit with the Eli Lilly corporation in the personnel division. As a management intern, I was able to watch the workings of a major corporation up close and would like the opportunity to combine my experiences with the theoretical background available in the MBA program at IUB, with its emphasis on computers, marketing and human resources.
志愿者活動同樣值得在ps中講述。
My successful internship is one element of my overall academic success as an undergraduate here at IUB, yet I have also made time for a variety of extracurricular activities, including working for my sorority and competing in intramural basketball. My positive experiences here have resulted in my desire to stay in Bloomington to continue my academic endeavors; furthermore, continuing my education here would allow me to make important business contacts, with the career goal of opening my own computer consulting firm in the Midwest.

