申請(qǐng)澳洲留學(xué)并不是那么的簡(jiǎn)單，需要準(zhǔn)備出國(guó)留學(xué)動(dòng)機(jī)信。動(dòng)機(jī)信的最初幾行應(yīng)該用來(lái)說(shuō)明你寫這封信的目的，下面就和出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)小編一起來(lái)看看2020年澳洲碩士留學(xué)動(dòng)機(jī)信寫作指南，希望對(duì)你有所幫助。
書寫內(nèi)容一覽：
1.申請(qǐng)人原住國(guó)的條件；
2.申請(qǐng)人未來(lái)在澳洲的條件；
3.申請(qǐng)人的移民歷史；
4.課程對(duì)于申請(qǐng)人未來(lái)的價(jià)值；
5.其他有關(guān)可能導(dǎo)致申請(qǐng)人短期在澳洲停留的因素。
澳洲的留學(xué)動(dòng)機(jī)怎么寫合理
1.動(dòng)機(jī)信要樸實(shí)、整潔，使對(duì)方樂(lè)于閱讀
所寫句子要簡(jiǎn)潔明了，根據(jù)內(nèi)容進(jìn)行分段，不需要啰嗦很多。本文中，寫自己成長(zhǎng)于哪里哪里一句話帶過(guò)已經(jīng)足夠了，再多寫一些就是啰嗦。寫文書需要謹(jǐn)記每一句都是為整體服務(wù)，如果不是很需要，就說(shuō)明句子還能繼續(xù)優(yōu)化?？梢哉?qǐng)別人多次閱讀所完成的文書，一步步剔除不恰當(dāng)?shù)谋磉_(dá)。
2.避免幼稚，委婉表達(dá)
留學(xué)生的文書很經(jīng)常犯下幼稚的錯(cuò)誤，寫文書時(shí)候必須注意避免幼稚，避免太過(guò)直接，當(dāng)然也不宜使用。
3.不宜過(guò)長(zhǎng)，內(nèi)容精悍為佳
一份文書雖然需要包含多項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，但長(zhǎng)度仍需注意，不要太長(zhǎng)，不要發(fā)散地去講自己本身有多優(yōu)秀有哪些優(yōu)勢(shì)，這些是需要學(xué)校方面做出判斷的，不要對(duì)自身?xiàng)l件做夸大。
Dear Mr. /Mrs. ：
I appreciate that you can take time off your busy schedule to read my letter. This is a letter of my motivation to apply for the Master degree of Precision Manufacturing（MPM） of University of Applied Sciences of Southern Switzerland （SUPSI）.
First， allow me to introduce myself. My name is Liu Yang. I’m a first grade postgraduate of Guangdong University of Technology（GDUT）. My major is Mechanical Engineering and Automation. I get my bachelor＇s degree in Mechanical Engineering and Automation at Wuhan University of Technology in 7thJuly， 2007. After I graduated from my university， I worked in Jiangling automobile joint-stock company for about 1year. Then I took the Postgraduate entrance examination and was enrolled in GDUT at last.
There are some hearty reasons why I like SUPSI and the major of MPM：
First，I am interested in MPM， for I have been studying in Mechanical Engineer- ing and Automation since I started my university life. It’s well known that this major plays a foundational role of the developing of industry and it is easy for us to find a ， in my opinion，is a similar major with Mechanical Engine- ering and tly speaking， it’s the specialization and concretion of Mechanical Engineering and Automation. MPM in SUPSI based on a set of prominent and well balanced lectures that not only promote individual profess- nal skills and cultivate their ability but also their creativity， management level and shape attitude. I think I can get more professional knowledges than I can get inland and extend my knowledge fields to enhance my competitive strength.
Second， SUPSI can offer me good teaching quality. SUPSI is one of the eight Universities of Applied Sciences in institution focuses on education based on professional need and on applied research.