想要申請(qǐng)德國(guó)留學(xué)的小伙伴一定準(zhǔn)備了許多材料,而這些材料中,就包含有重要的動(dòng)機(jī)信。在德國(guó)大學(xué)的大部分碩士以及一些本科的申請(qǐng)及簽證申請(qǐng)中,動(dòng)機(jī)信的作用可謂是十分重要了。下面是出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)分享的德國(guó)留學(xué)動(dòng)機(jī)信模板。
德國(guó)留學(xué)動(dòng)機(jī)信模板
Motivation Letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to apply for the English-Taught Master degree in Communication Engineering, which starts in December 2019. I am a BSc(Eng) in Telecommunications Engineering with Management, which is a joint degree program between Beijing University of Posts & Telecommunications(BUPT) and University of London.
Reasons for choosing CE of RWTH Aachen
I had spent nearly two years seeking the way of my life from 2017 till 2019.
Initially, as a freshman, I concentrated on the work of Student union and Beijing IETYME (Institution of Engineering and Technology Yong Member Section). As a result of my hard work, I was elected vice president in the third semester. However, instead of feeling much pleasure and excitement, I could not work up too much enthusiasm for the iterative activities.
Then I understood that the work of organization management didn’t really fit me. Naturally, I transferred my focus to study. I was heartily satisfied when I overcame puzzles even though the two-year distraction brought me great difficulties at the beginning. Since then, I started to realize that this should be the way of my life.
I also found that I am most attracted by subject concerns with communication systems and excelled in courses such as Introduction to the Communication, Telecommunication Systems, Signals and Systems Theory, Internet Protocols, Digital Signal Processing and Microwave & Optical Transmission.
Through these courses, I learnt the simple infrastructure of communication system and basic theories such as Sampling, Quantization, Channel Coding, Queuing Theory, Fourier Transforms, Wireless Network, Digital Filter Design and Routing Protocol. However, I was still confused with questions like what parameters would influence the practical operation of equipment, how to integrate the single units, how can I make improvement to avoid disadvantages of existing theories.
In the summer of 2018, I participated in school laboratory which took charge of MIMO System optimization, one of national key scientific research projects. I keenly felt the lack of knowledge over that period, and was figuring how to exactly calculate the channel capacity in different conditions, how to instantly transfer channel state information (CSI) to transmitter antennas, how to apply the ideal model in the complex realities. I found these questions very fascinating.
Obviously, it is impossible to solve those questions with the current knowledge I leant in my undergraduate period, thus I decided to further my study. Another important reason is that what we learnt lags far behind reality, which can’t support me in operating advanced equipment. For example, the 8051 microcontroller I learnt in the course of ‘Microprocessor System Design’ was applied in 1990s.
While doing microwave experiment, my teacher mentioned that among the top three companies: Anritsu, ROHDE&SCHWARZ and Agilent, which produce VNA, R&S owns the unparalleled predominance compared with the other two companies.
Germany owns the most advanced technologies, the best research groups, first-rate industrial technology and rigorous elite education system, which strengthen my wish to continue my studies in Germany. RWTH Aachen University, which is among the best in Germany, enjoys an excellent international reputation and brings together many distinguished scholars.
動(dòng)機(jī)信常用詞匯與參考模板
sich bewerben 申請(qǐng)
motivieren 說(shuō)明...動(dòng)機(jī);激發(fā)
sich mit D auseinandersetzen 深入研究
überzeugen 說(shuō)服
abschlie?en 結(jié)束(常加Studium)
fortsetzen 繼續(xù)
verbessern 提高
sich interessieren für 對(duì)...感興趣
Gelegenheit erfassen 抓住機(jī)會(huì)
Sehr geehrte Damen und Herren,
Ich freue mich darauf, wenn Sie sich Zeit n?hmen, meinen Antrag zum Visum nach Deutschland zu prüfen.
Mein Name ist xx, ich komme aus xx. Hiermit bewerbe ich mich um xx. Ich habe schon mein Studium von der Uni xx abgeschlossen und mein Fach ist xx. W?hrend meines Studiums habe ich xx gemacht. (可以詳細(xì)闡述一下大學(xué)期間的經(jīng)歷)
Ich interessiere mich für xx und ich habe auch erfahren, dass das Fach an der Uni xx das beste ist. Im folgende werde ich auch die detaillierte Gründe und Ziele erkl?ren: Erstens, xx . Zweitens, xx. Drittens, xx . (詳細(xì)闡述申請(qǐng)的理由與目的)
über dieses Fach habe ich viele professionelle Bücher gelesen ,darüber hinaus habe ich manche Artikel ver?ffentlicht. Durch meine Erfahrung bin ich überzeugt, dass ich Qualifikation habe. (可以講講自己閱讀相關(guān)專業(yè)的書籍或發(fā)表研究的方向,以顯示專業(yè)性)
動(dòng)機(jī)信寫作小貼士
1.Rechtschreibfehler sind im Motivationsschreiben Todsünde.
正字法錯(cuò)誤在動(dòng)機(jī)信里是大忌。
2. Nicht oberfl?chlich sein, inhaltlich argumentieren.
不要流于表面,要深入論述。
3. Nicht angeben, authentisch sein – man muss sich bei Bewerbungen nicht hinter einer Fassade verstecken.
不要吹噓,而應(yīng)真實(shí)——申請(qǐng)學(xué)校時(shí)不應(yīng)藏在假象之后。
4. Zeit nehmen und andere Leute das Motivationsschreiben gegenlesen lassen – vier Augen sehen mehr als zwei.
多花時(shí)間,并把動(dòng)機(jī)給他人讀一讀——三個(gè)臭皮匠頂賽過(guò)諸葛亮。