雅思作文想要獲得高分,一方面要有詞匯的積累,另一方面也是有一定的技巧和規(guī)律的。出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)雅思欄目為大家?guī)?lái)“2016雅思寫(xiě)作常犯錯(cuò)誤分析”,希望大家能有所收獲!
一、各種前后不一致
說(shuō)話(huà)肯定前面說(shuō)完了后面得跟上吧!比如:When one have enough money, she can do anything she want to do.
one是第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù),而且have應(yīng)改為has; want應(yīng)改為wants, 典型的主謂不一致,要改寫(xiě)的沒(méi)改寫(xiě);
改為:When one has money, she can do anything she wants (to do).
二、中式思維要人命啊!
中式化。比如:There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
分析:“there are many ways”以及“we get to know the outsideworld”。原本兩個(gè)句子很正常,但用中式思維把兩個(gè)句子一連起來(lái),感覺(jué)就不對(duì)了,而且一種濃厚的中式鄉(xiāng)村英語(yǔ)范襲來(lái);
改為:There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.
三、句子隨意添加
一般都是烤鴨們寫(xiě)完了一句話(huà)之后,咦,不對(duì),少寫(xiě)了一些東西,得加上去,然后就出現(xiàn)了這樣的句子。
There are many way to get the news. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and soon.
其實(shí)也很好改,注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的使用,news后面加了點(diǎn),就是句子的結(jié)束了,然后For還大寫(xiě),這樣后面就徹底成一個(gè)句子啦,不對(duì);
改為:There are many ways to get the news, for example, by TV, radio, andnewspaper.
四、詞性用錯(cuò)
這個(gè)還要解釋么,大家經(jīng)常犯的錯(cuò)就集中在這里
具體表現(xiàn)為:介詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用;形容詞當(dāng)副詞用;名詞當(dāng)動(dòng)詞用等。
None can negative the importance of money. negative是什么詞性呀,用到這里了,應(yīng)該用動(dòng)詞:否定,deny!
五、指代不清
比如:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
這個(gè)句子相當(dāng)于“我是誰(shuí)的誰(shuí)的誰(shuí)的誰(shuí)”。考官看到直接就蒙圈了…
改為:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
六、修飾詞錯(cuò)位
英語(yǔ)與漢語(yǔ)不同,放錯(cuò)一個(gè)位置,句子的意思就會(huì)完全發(fā)生變化啦!會(huì)造成了不必要的誤解。
比如:He believe him can do it well and he will better know the world outside the world.
分析:better位置不對(duì)啊,應(yīng)該是 he will know the world outside the world better,放到最后。
七、用詞不當(dāng)
比如:The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
顯然,把obstacles“障礙”,“障礙物”誤作substance“物質(zhì)”了。另外“the increasing use(不斷增加的使用)”應(yīng)改為“abusive use(濫用)”。
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