因?yàn)閷W(xué)生們?nèi)チ魧W(xué)需要用到雅思考試的成績(jī)，所以需要去考雅思的學(xué)生就很多。在雅思的備考中，閱讀以往考試的真題及解析是幫助很多的。那么下面就到出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)來看看2021年7月24日雅思寫作部分真題及范文。
一、2021年7月17日雅思寫作真題解析
雅思大作文題目：
Some people think that in this modern world people are getting dependent on each other， while others think that people are becoming more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
寫作思路：
現(xiàn)代人變得更依賴還是更獨(dú)立，這個(gè)問題可以從不同的角度來看?，F(xiàn)代社會(huì)分工越來越細(xì)，每個(gè)人都需要依賴其他人的勞動(dòng)成果才能生存；在公司里面，有不同的部門，同事之間需要密切合作，才能完成工作任務(wù)，所以從這個(gè)角度來看，人們確實(shí)變得更加相互依賴。如果從生活角度來看，人們似乎越來越獨(dú)立，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)使得人們不用再求助鄰居朋友，也減少了面對(duì)面交流。更多的人選擇小家庭或者獨(dú)自居住，對(duì)于家人的依賴也越來越少。
二、雅思寫作參考范文
It is said that we are now living in an increasingly interdependent world， but on the other hand， more and more people appear to be independent in their lives.
Obviously， labor division is becoming highly advanced in the modern world， with everyone specializing in a certain field. It is impossible for a person to produce all necessities in his life by himself and he has to buy goods in the market， which means he needs to depend on the work of other people. In addition， cooperation has become a key element in our daily work. When a company consists of dozens of departments and a project becomes huge and complicated， it is hard to imagine that one person can finish his task without cooperating with his colleagues.
On the other hand， it is interesting to note that people today have a strong awareness of independence， which is particularly shown in their private lives. For example， many young people are reluctant to live with their parents， as they did in traditional extended families. Instead， they establish small families and some choose to live alone. Another example is that， in this network age， increasingly numbers of people become solitary， with less face-to-face communication in life. They can get answers to almost all questions by searching on the web， or get things done with the help of various Apps， not relying on neighbors and friends any more. So， in a sense， the advent of the Internet has contributed to their independent lifestyles.
Overall， I am of the opinion that individuals cannot live without communication and cooperation with others. As the economy develops， our work and lives are closely linked with others’ contribution to society. But it is also true that people have more independence in their personal choices.
三、雅思綜合寫作閱讀環(huán)節(jié)要注意的
1、閱讀不能只看段落首尾句
3分鐘時(shí)間看閱讀內(nèi)容，而閱讀內(nèi)容的篇幅還不短，在這種情況下很多同學(xué)會(huì)感受到一定的時(shí)間壓力，也因此會(huì)下意識(shí)地就把做閱讀的快速讀文章技巧給使用出來，也就是大家很熟悉的文章各段落只看段落開頭和結(jié)尾句子的做法。對(duì)于雅思閱讀文章來說，這種做法的確能夠有效幫助考生提升閱讀和理解文章的速度。但對(duì)于綜合寫作的閱讀卻并非如此。
大家需要明白的是，雅思綜合寫作的閱讀內(nèi)容和之后的聽力內(nèi)容是存在很強(qiáng)的對(duì)應(yīng)關(guān)系性的。也就是說閱讀文章中每一個(gè)分論點(diǎn)的論述，都會(huì)在聽力中被逐一反駁，而反駁的就是這些分論點(diǎn)在具體論證分析過程中存在的邏輯漏洞。而這些具體論述的內(nèi)容一般不會(huì)在各個(gè)段落的首尾句子中出現(xiàn)，都是在段落當(dāng)中展開的。如果大家只盯著各個(gè)段落的首尾句看，雖然能很快看完全文，但因?yàn)槿狈?duì)其中論述過程中的了解，就會(huì)給之后聽力中記錄反駁觀點(diǎn)以及寫作中闡述論點(diǎn)矛盾帶來很大的不便，省一時(shí)之力卻后患無窮，實(shí)在不是明智之舉。
正確做法是盡可能提升整體閱讀速度，保證在3分鐘內(nèi)較為完整地把整個(gè)閱讀部分的內(nèi)容都看一遍，并輔助以筆記記錄下論述的細(xì)節(jié)和重點(diǎn)，為之后的聽力和寫作提供參考信息。這樣才能有效保證對(duì)綜合寫作中閱讀部分包含信息較為準(zhǔn)確全面的抓取和把握。
2、閱讀1論點(diǎn)3理由不是固定結(jié)構(gòu)
做過一些雅思綜合寫作題目的同學(xué)可能會(huì)注意到，綜合寫作中閱讀部分的結(jié)構(gòu)是較為固定的，一般來說都是1個(gè)論點(diǎn)+3個(gè)理由的構(gòu)成形式，當(dāng)然這也符合標(biāo)準(zhǔn)學(xué)術(shù)性文章的結(jié)構(gòu)模式。但大家也不要想當(dāng)然的認(rèn)為所有綜合寫作的閱讀部分就一定都是這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)了。
根據(jù)討論話題的不同變化，這種1+3的結(jié)構(gòu)也有可能是1個(gè)話題主題+3種不同理論的展開，或是1個(gè)事物主體+3個(gè)問題缺點(diǎn)的形式。而由于對(duì)這些較為少見的結(jié)構(gòu)缺乏足夠的認(rèn)識(shí)和了解，考生在突然遇到這類變種1+3的文章形式時(shí)可能就會(huì)因?yàn)闆]有準(zhǔn)備而在記錄信息和行文展開上出現(xiàn)問題，如果還是按照原來練熟了的寫法思路來套用，就會(huì)在寫作邏輯和用詞方面出現(xiàn)一定問題。
為了避免這類問題，小編還是建議大家能夠多看多練綜合寫作，特別是多看這一點(diǎn)，有些綜合寫作題即使考生來不及或者沒有安排練筆環(huán)節(jié)，也請(qǐng)盡量把其中的閱讀文章讀一下，做一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的結(jié)構(gòu)分析。綜合寫作的閱讀內(nèi)容看得閱讀，大家也就能更為熟悉其結(jié)構(gòu)變化，并積累更多的應(yīng)對(duì)經(jīng)驗(yàn)了。