托福寫作考試范文:You can learn about people by clothes they wear!

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            托福寫作是中國(guó)考生在托福考試中的弱項(xiàng)之一,其中語(yǔ)法、用詞以及邏輯思維是寫作的問題所在,只有在日常生活中多讀些范文,了解托福寫作中應(yīng)該具備的的邏輯思維,從哪方面考慮問題更容易寫,各種問題都要先想好再開始寫。下面我們一起學(xué)習(xí)下托福寫作怎樣安排寫作結(jié)構(gòu)。
    托福寫作考試有個(gè)題目,叫做:You can learn about people by clothes they wear!
    根據(jù)GRE閱讀強(qiáng)化和新概念四冊(cè)文章的架構(gòu),按照上面托??荚嚨念}目,寫了下面這篇文章,供大家參考。
    文筆拙劣,不揣淺薄,望各位朋友斧正、指教!主要是拋磚引玉,給大家提供一個(gè)托福和GRE寫作結(jié)構(gòu)的思考方向。
    此外,閱讀文章可以從寫作的角度去思考、學(xué)習(xí),寫作的文章則反其道而行之,會(huì)有新的啟發(fā)。
    Sages have been chattering all the time about the danger and devastation of judging a book by its cover. Admittedly, there is some truth in their effort, as it would be unsophisticated and misleading to calculate one’s moral character and dignity solely by his “cover”, be it his look, stature or even the quality of clothing.A closer study of the issue, aided by an acute sense of customs and convictions, however, reveals quite indisputably that one can learn, more or less, about people by the clothes they dress. The most significant information thus gathered is personal identity and cultural inclinations.
    Coming first to indicate the affinity between the people and their clothing is the identity issue, which serves as a solid, identifiable evidence to my argument. With different styles of dressing, one intends to articulate his own identity, thus conveying some cultural subtleties, say, his likes and dislikes, his convictions and taboos. The example of Hippies and Yuppies comes readily to one’s mind. Their unconventional, rebellious dressing code, in a non-verbal manner, remained their counter-cultural manifesto. It is also true in the case of politicians and business people, whose clothing undoubtedly helps to differentiate them from those with different pursuits and occupations.
    With one’s dress, a sensitive, well-informed mind could also gather crucial information about the customs, beliefs and other cultural inclinations of the community the person lives in, though, in some cases,the knowledge thus gained might be insufficient, but certainly not dismissible. As we are invariably conditioned by our customs upon the very moment of our birth, we grow up to be little creatures of our communities and convictions. Their beliefs are our belief, their impossibilities our impossibilities. Quite understandably, personal clothes, as an important ingredient of its cultural ambience, definitely speak with a tangible, visible language. The only difference is whether the “reader” is aware of this cultural cue or not. But it is forever out there: substantthing. Instead, a perceptive and reasonable mind forever knows how to explore more, but always by starting with proper knowledge and orientation from what they dress!
    以上是托福寫作怎樣安排結(jié)構(gòu)的解析,寫作題一部分是考的用詞用句,還有很大一部分考驗(yàn)的是寫作思路與邏輯思維,要多方面思考,才能寫出最優(yōu),最有想法的文章。