俗話說(shuō)“題好文一半”，一個(gè)好的托福寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭絕對(duì)能夠吸引考官的注意，從而讓他對(duì)你的作文有個(gè)好印象，可是，如果你的托福寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭十分糟糕，那么，它足以害死你的這次托?？荚嚒Ｏ旅?，出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)小編就為大家整理10大“害死人”的托福寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭，大家要謹(jǐn)以為戒哦！
“害死人”托福寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭之一：廢話連篇不知所云(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆)
典型失敗案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?
This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……
修改方案：開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山 直奔主題
In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。
Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?
Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life。
Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection
Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!
“害死人”托福寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭之二：中式英文人見(jiàn)人暈(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆☆☆)
典型失敗案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life
In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……
Topic 2- The population problem
The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there。
Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?
I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”。
“害死人”托福寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭之三：觀點(diǎn)模糊態(tài)度曖昧(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆)
典型失敗案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
“害死人”托福寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭之四：偏離主題無(wú)軌電車(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆☆)
典型失敗案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places。
“害死人”托福寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭之五：語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤慘不忍睹(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆)
典型失敗案例：Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?
About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should。
“害死人”托福寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭之一：廢話連篇不知所云(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆)
典型失敗案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?
This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……
修改方案：開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山 直奔主題
In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。
Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?
Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life。
Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection
Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!
“害死人”托福寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭之二：中式英文人見(jiàn)人暈(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆☆☆)
典型失敗案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life
In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……
Topic 2- The population problem
The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there。
Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?
I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……
Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”。
“害死人”托福寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭之三：觀點(diǎn)模糊態(tài)度曖昧(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆)
典型失敗案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
“害死人”托福寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭之四：偏離主題無(wú)軌電車(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆☆)
典型失敗案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places。
“害死人”托福寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭之五：語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤慘不忍睹(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆)
典型失敗案例：Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?
About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should。