年輕人類(lèi)托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作話題開(kāi)頭段怎么寫(xiě)

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    年輕人類(lèi)話題題目:
    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
    思路分析:
    話題引入:選出作文命題中的關(guān)鍵詞(一般為名詞),進(jìn)行背景描述,引入話題
    他人觀點(diǎn):第二步有三種處理方法。陳述對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)、敘述雙方觀點(diǎn)或保留雙方觀點(diǎn)
    亮明觀點(diǎn):第三句話明確給出本文總觀點(diǎn)
    尾句過(guò)渡:用固定句式進(jìn)行開(kāi)頭段與主體段的過(guò)度
    開(kāi)頭段范文:
    ?With the development of society, people nowadays are living in a relatively complete mechanism, yet some tiny but important aspects, which may be overlooked, need to be ameliorated by discussion. ?Some people may argue that youth seems to have no influence on current society. ?However, in my opinion, youth should still be taken into consideration when determining the future of the society in the long time run. ?My view point is based on the following reasons and examples.
    范文解析:
    1.根據(jù)題干內(nèi)容,選取關(guān)鍵詞society 。開(kāi)頭句作為話題引入,先描述當(dāng)前背景,即隨著社會(huì)發(fā)展,人們現(xiàn)在生活在一個(gè)相對(duì)完善的機(jī)制中。然而一些微小但重要的方面被忽略了,需要進(jìn)一步被討論。
    2.該步驟采取了陳述對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)的方法,等于命題中的觀點(diǎn):青年對(duì)于決定整個(gè)社會(huì)的未來(lái)的決策沒(méi)有重要影響。
    3.此處利用in my opinion直接引出作者的態(tài)度,youth should still be表明自己是同意青年人是有影響力的,亮出文章的總觀點(diǎn)。
    4.最后一句,作為對(duì)整體段落內(nèi)容上的收尾,并且引出下文來(lái)支持作者觀點(diǎn)的理由。
    開(kāi)頭段所涉及詞匯講解(年輕人類(lèi))
    with the development of 隨著…的發(fā)展
    mechanism機(jī)制
    overlooked被忽視的
    be ameliorated by被…改善
    have influence on對(duì)…的影響
    current society當(dāng)今社會(huì)
    take into consideration把…列入考慮之內(nèi)
    in the long time run在長(zhǎng)期內(nèi)
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