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【社會類】專業(yè)人士是否應(yīng)該比文體明星更加高薪
Some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers make greater contribution. So they should be paid more than those sport and entertainment persons. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 有人認為專業(yè)人士應(yīng)該比文體明星高薪，是否認同?
【作家立場】 對比文體明星， 專業(yè)人士(醫(yī)生，教育者，武警等)更有高薪的理由。
【頭腦風(fēng)暴】一個人的薪水應(yīng)該和其能力及對于社會做出的貢獻成正比，職業(yè)背景并非最關(guān)鍵的因素。無論文體明星還是專業(yè)人士，都有高薪的理由。然而，貧富差距加大，拜金主義盛行的重要的原因之一就是文體明星的驚人薪水。形成對比是，很多專業(yè)人士付出的辛苦更多，做出的社會貢獻更大，薪水反而相對較低。因此，專業(yè)人士更有高薪的理由。
范文賞析
【首段】首段：背景介紹 + 爭議焦點 + 作家立場
It is not rare to see that some worldly famous entertainers and athletes usually have a sort of comfortable salary compared with other professionals. People have been debating，for many years，whether or not top stars such as movie stars and professional players, should deserve more financial rewards. Personally speaking，they have no reasons to enjoy extremely high income in comparison with other professionals.
【二段】 讓步段：文體明星高薪的理由
Indeed, I have to concede that those famous entertainers and athletes have some reasons to have handsomely paid jobs. First, their arduous efforts can not only enrich people’s spiritual life but also help people relieve pressure triggered by modern life. Further, striving for stardom requires large amounts of industrious work. Their relatively finite career time may justify their excessive salaries, for high-paying salaries are the rewards of their honest hard work and the security of the rest of life.
【三段】反駁段：專業(yè)人士高薪的理由
What I want to rebut，however，is that other professionals’ endeavors might outshine super stars’ hard work. For a start, various professional workers make their unique contributions to the society. From our life, it is easy to find numerous examples. Armed Police Soldiers assume the obligation of defending the country, especially when a nation suffers from foreign invasion or natural disaster. A survey conducted by Vista has found that most respondents claimed that policemen or soldiers have sound reasons to get high economic rewards.
【四段】 反駁段：專業(yè)人士高薪的理由
This debate reminds me my parent, my farther is a teacher, and my mother is a doctor. My father deserves more income because he imparts knowledge and educate people，it is conceivable that efforts coming from educators could foster more talents, who can inject new vitality into the further mightiness of a nation. Likewise, doctors like my mother shoulder the responsibly of healing the wounded and rescuing the dying, therefore, comfortable salary could be considered as a returned favor and award for the painstaking works of those professionals.
【尾段】
In closing, it is my stand is that both extraordinary stars and other professionals have every reason to enjoy well-paid jobs, however, professionals’ efforts deserve high paying salaries
【經(jīng)典語料】
1. it is not rare to see that 這一點很常見
2. have a comfortable salary 擁有高薪
3. enjoy extremely high income 擁有高薪
4. have handsomely paid jobs 擁有高薪的工作
5. other professionals 其他的專業(yè)人士
6. worldly famous stars 世界著名的明星
7. famous entertainers and athletes 著名的演員和運動員
8. top stars = famous actors and sportsmen 明星
9. assiduous efforts = honest hard work辛勤的努力
10. relieve pressure triggered by modern life 緩解了現(xiàn)代生活的壓力
11. relatively finite career time 相對短暫的職業(yè)生涯
12. strive for stardom為了明星夢奮斗
13. Armed Police Soldiers shoulder the obligation of defending the country. 武警官兵保衛(wèi)祖國。
14. have sound reasons to get high economic reward 有充分的理由得到高薪
15. Lawyers usually play the role of safeguarding the dignity of law. 律師扮演了維護法律尊嚴的責(zé)任。
16. Educators impart knowledge and educate people. 教育者教書育人。
17. Doctors shoulder the responsibility of healing the wounded and rescuing the dying 醫(yī)療工作者承擔(dān)救死扶傷的責(zé)任。
18. top stars are definitely over-paid 明星明顯薪水過高
19. Striving for stardom requires large amounts of industrious work. 為明星夢奮斗需要大量辛勤的工作。
20. deserve high paying salaries 應(yīng)該得到高薪
21. Other professionals like doctors, researchers, scientists, are making substantial contribution to our community. 其他的專業(yè)人士，諸如醫(yī)生、研究者、科學(xué)家，對于我們的社會作出的貢獻更大。
22. Personal wealth is not in proportion to realization of social value 個人財富和社會價值不成正比。
23. discourage the initiative and zeal of people in other fields 打擊了其他行業(yè)人士工作的熱情。
24. Both famous stars and other professionals have every reason to enjoy well-paid jobs. 明星和專業(yè)人士都有高薪的理由。
25. The key to the problem depends on one’s personal ability and the devotion to the society. 個人的能力和對于社會的貢獻是關(guān)鍵因素。
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