托福寫作使用這些詞匯要慎重

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    大家都想一次和托福說拜拜,那么要怎么做才能拿到高分成績呢?當(dāng)然少不了平時的練習(xí)和技巧運用啦!出國留學(xué)網(wǎng)托福欄目為大家?guī)?ldquo;托福寫作使用這些詞匯要慎重”,希望對大家有所幫助!
    compare與contrast的誤用
    我們先從兩者的定義入手來看兩者的區(qū)別。 Compare的定義為:to examine people or things to see how theyare similar or different. Contrast的定義為:to comparetwo or more things to show the difference betweenthem.由定義不難看出前者側(cè)重于找到兩個或多個事物的異同,而后者則側(cè)重于它們的不同。
    看個例句:
    It is interesting to compare their situations to ours./It is interesting to contrast theirsituations to ours.
    前一句翻譯為:對比一下我們的情況與他們的情況會很有趣。
    后一句的翻譯為:我們的情況與他們的情況有很大的不同,這很有趣。
    再看一個引自O(shè)XFORD ADBANCED LEARNER’S DICTIONARY的例子:
    There is an obvious contrast between the culture of East and West.
    The company lost $7 million in contrast to a profit of $6.2 million a year earlier.
    When you look at their new system, ours seems very old-fashioned by contrast.
    不難發(fā)現(xiàn),Compare翻譯為“與……相比”而contrast可譯為“明顯不同的是……”,切記這種翻譯方式就不會用錯彼此了。
    其中最容易有問題的便是介詞的使用了,下面來看看幾種情況:
    1、普通介詞的誤用
    一般表現(xiàn)為固定搭配錯誤,如常把provide sb with sth用成provide sb sth; be satisfied with用成besatisfied for等等,雖然這樣的錯誤看似無傷大雅,但在考官眼里就是影響順暢閱讀的,根據(jù)托福學(xué)寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)當(dāng)然會影響最終成績。解決的辦法簡單而古老:把常見的固定搭配牢記于心,問題自然就解決了。
    2、 “to”作為介詞的誤用
    “to”最常見的用法是以動詞不定式符號的形式出現(xiàn)的,所以同學(xué)們也已經(jīng)習(xí)慣了“to do”的固定搭配。對于一些如walk to me、to the left等介詞to表方向等常見用法一般也不會出現(xiàn)錯誤。但是對于與動詞搭配的介詞to就會經(jīng)常犯錯:
    如:
    More and more students have taken to depend on their parents to make decision for them.
    這里的‘take to’ means ‘to begin to do sth as a habit’其中‘to’為介詞,所以后面只能接名詞或相當(dāng)于名詞的詞,如動名詞。所以黑體處應(yīng)改為“depending on”。“take to”的另一個常用用法也需要牢記:
    He hasn’t taken to his new school.(這里‘take to’ means ‘to start liking sb or sth’)
    Prefer A to B中的“to”也是介詞,會有prefer doing sth to doing sth/ prefer sth to sthelse,“prefer to do sth rather than do sth”中的“to”可是真正的不定式符號。
    類似的常用用法請同學(xué)們牢記:
    Be used to doing
    Be accustomed to doing
    See to doing
    Adapt to doing
    Adjust to doing
    prefer doing sth. to doing sth.
    等等,托福寫作請注意平時仔細積累。
    assume及claim使用不夠準(zhǔn)確
    我們知道, think, assume, claim是議論文中常用引出觀點的動詞。在實際作文中,同學(xué)們往往認為幾個詞的意思是一樣的,完全可以代換,所以拿過來就用。甚至還有同學(xué)把consider也拿過來與之混用。我們首先還是從定義來看這幾個詞的不同:
    Think: to have opinion or belief about sth.
    翻譯為“認為”,通常接賓語從句來表達比較確定的觀點。
    Assume: to think or accept that sth is true but without having proof of it.
    翻譯為“假設(shè)、假定”,是否有事實依據(jù)是不確定的。
    Claim: to say sth is true although it has not been proved and other people may not believeit.
    翻譯為“聲稱”,用這個詞往往意味著不贊同緊跟其后的觀點,所以很少用作‘I claim that…
    Scientist are claiming a breakthrough in the fight against cancer, but in fact, …。
    所以‘It is claimed that’通常翻譯為“有報道稱。。。”。和‘it is reported that ’的區(qū)別在于后者翻譯為“據(jù)報道”,往往代表著作者贊同報告的內(nèi)容,
    Consider: to think about sth carefully, especially in order to make a decision
    翻譯為“考慮”,一般不用作引出觀點,看個例子:
    We are considering buying a new car.
    所以,千萬不要在托福寫作的第一段(觀點表達段)就因為用詞把握不準(zhǔn)而導(dǎo)致對整篇文章的低分印象。
    表“建議”的詞匯后面忘記用虛擬從句
    這是摘自學(xué)生托福作文中的一個病句:
    I suggest he continues his study instead of working after graduation from high school.
    因為‘suggest’翻譯為“建議”,所以后面的從句應(yīng)該用虛擬語氣,黑體部分應(yīng)該改為“(should) continue”
    所以考生一定要牢記以下常見表“建議”的托福寫作詞匯,而且要記住這些詞接從句時要用虛擬語氣:
    Recommend, suggest, advise
    such as與for example的混用
    我們知道,在表示舉例子的時候,such as與like是完全等同的,如:Wild flowers such as/likeorchids and primroses are becoming rare.
    但是同學(xué)們對于Such as、for example的把握還是不夠準(zhǔn)確。我們都知道,后者接句子前者接詞語表示舉例子。于是就有了下面的寫法:
    There is a similar word in many languages, such as in French and Italian.
    這里的such as改為for example為好,因為“in French and Italian”其實是“there is a similar word inFrench and Italian”的簡化,所以要用for example來引出例證。再來看幾個類似的例子:
    It is possible to combine computer science with other subjects, for example physics.
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