成功類的話題也是托福寫作的高頻考點之一。面對這樣的寫作題目,同學們?nèi)绾文軌騽e出心裁,寫出新穎的作文來呢?下面出國留學網(wǎng)小編就來對這種寫作題目進行詳細的解析。來看看托福寫作成功話題詳細介紹。
成功的定義:第一種是通過努力,實現(xiàn)自己的目標的人是成功的人。另一種從一個人的身份,地位來判斷一個人是否成功。從以上兩種可以看出,一個人是否成功可以從內(nèi)部原因和外部原因兩種條件來判斷。內(nèi)部原因包括:一個人是否的熱情,是否誠實,是否堅持不懈,是否努力奮斗。外部原因包括:一個人的運氣,人脈。
在托福獨立寫作中,個人成功內(nèi)因思路分析,個人成功內(nèi)因包括他的智商和情商。智商包括智力,技能和能力。在托福獨立寫作中,能力ability強調先天擁有的,而skill技能是從后天獲得的。因此一個人成功跟一個人的記憶力,想象力,觀察力,適應力,分析能力和思考能力是息息相關的。情商包括堅持、人際關系和幽默感。
在托福獨立寫作中,個人成功的外因思路分析,成功的外因主要包括,運氣和來自別人的幫助。
關于成功的話題:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to succeed, we should be more like others than be different from others.(翻譯:為了獲得成功,我們是和別人不一樣還是和別人一樣。)
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People holding different views cannot achieve success as a team.(翻譯:持有不同觀點的人作為一組不能獲得成功。)
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It’s impossible to succeed if one cannot accept criticism in teamwork.(翻譯:如果一個人在團隊中不能接受別人的批評就不可能成功。)
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to succeed in doing a new job, the ability to adapt oneself to the new environment is more important than the excellent knowledge of this job.(翻譯:在新工作崗位上的成功來源于適應新環(huán)境還是擁有更好的知識。)
從這幾道題目就可以看出,老外對于成功看重的點包括:與眾不同(也可以理解為創(chuàng)新),團隊的重要性,有更多的技能,勇于承認問題錯誤,有無家長的幫助,懂得溝通交流,適應環(huán)境,知識儲備等。并且提出的問題基本上是針對如何成功,成功需要具備的素質,品質(成功的方法論)展開的,下面我們看看老外用了怎樣地道的語言對于成功總結出了哪些方法論:
You are the sum of the five people you spend the most time with. My mom always used say, “Tell me who your friends are and I’ll tell you who you are.” And she was right on—because millionaires surround themselves with other millionaires.
If we really are the sum of the people we surround ourselves with, it’s so important to surround yourself with the right ones. Successful people are always networking with each other at events, conferences and mastermind groups.
這個點論證了我們托福寫作成功的第一個要素:團隊對于成功的重要性,聰明的人不是一個人聰明,而是周圍一個團隊都聰明最終成果才會更遠大,這樣他們才能分享更好的資源,人脈,思想和創(chuàng)新,一個人的力量是遠遠不及眾人合起來的力量的。此外這一段中還使用了一些非常好用的短語和句子,如:You are the sum of the five people you spend the most time with. 這個句子傳達的意思是the outcome of team work is far more reaching than the outcome of personal efforts. 但是顯然這個句子要地道很多。because millionaires surround themselves with other millionaires這個句子告訴我們重復并不算是一種累贅,而是起著一種更好的強調作用。Successful people are always networking with each other at events, conferences and mastermind groups. “network”這個詞名轉動更加出彩。
Every entrepreneur and successful person I’ve met is a lifelong learner. They understand the importance of constantly improving, constantly growing.
Driven people self-educate through books, audiotapes, online courses, seminars…. They’re determined to always learn new skills, to keep developing as a person—to never become stagnant. They never stop.
You have a desire to everyone has a lot of ambition. They might be held back by fears that they can’t effectively deal with; they might not be creative enough or they might be lazy and used to settling for less if it means they don’t have to work too hard.
Then there are those that have a burning desire to constantly improve, learn new things, pick up new skills and sacrifice some fun and enjoyment now, so that they can be happier in the latter group is the one that keeps improving year after year, getting things done one step at a time.
這一小段回答了托福寫作成功話題的第二個問題,需要更多的技能野心和夢想。作為一個優(yōu)秀的創(chuàng)業(yè)者,不斷學習新的技能提升自己,才不會被淘汰,大部分的學習必須靠自己完成,可以通過書本,有聲讀物影像,在線課程,以及研討會,這里面許多詞使用得也是非常漂亮的,比如說“entrepreneur(企業(yè)家)”, “l(fā)ifelong(終生)”, “audiotapes, online courses, seminars(有聲書,在線課程,研討會)”, “stagnant(停滯不前)”, “hold back(阻擋)”, “settle for less(追求少)”, “burning desire(強烈追求)”。