2020年托福獨(dú)立寫作高分指南

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    托福獨(dú)立寫作對于中國考生來說是一個很大的考驗,那么接下來就和出國留學(xué)網(wǎng)來看看2020年托福獨(dú)立寫作高分指南。
    段落分析
    一、審題、確定托福立場、列出理由
    (只需要在草稿紙上用英文單詞或漢語列出各個理由,防止遺忘),最少3分鐘最多5分鐘。
    要避免兩個極端:
    a.用時太少,理由沒有想清楚就開始寫,不僅造成文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)不清,還會引起行文中頻繁的修正,欲速則不達(dá);b.用時太多,不要追求一次思考就能把每一條理由及相關(guān)例證都想出來。其實想出兩條之后就可以動筆,各個理由的例證可以寫到該段時邊思考邊寫。這一點你不必懷疑,只要你的思維還是正常的,一定能做到。
    二、托福正文寫作最少22分鐘最多26分鐘:
    a.各段寫作時,注意對段落的不同部分給予不同的重視。主題句給予最大重視,注意煉句,別說你不想寫主題句,主題句可以使讀者和筆者本人更清晰該段落寫什么。各段中支持性細(xì)節(jié)寫作不必遵循相同的模式。
    有n種選擇可供參考:1.舉具體事例;2.說對方相對缺點;3.使用數(shù)據(jù);4.使用假想例子;5.使用類比、比喻、引用等修辭手段來論述。哪一種你最容易想出來,就用哪一種。
    b.考前將文章開頭、結(jié)尾、例證、讓步等各種句型背熟練,并且練習(xí)和模考時把他們用熟,要象做完型填空一樣對待考場作文。別試圖在考場上再去臨時決定比如哪種開頭好,怎樣結(jié)尾好。使用自己選種的套話。
    c.當(dāng)被告知還有5分鐘結(jié)束時,一般你應(yīng)該已經(jīng)寫到最后一條理由,或者已經(jīng)在做結(jié)尾。要確保文章有結(jié)尾段(不排除將它和最后一條理由的末段結(jié)合在一起的可能性)。
    三、檢查需要1-3分鐘,有側(cè)重點地檢查:
    a.句法:確保每句話是完整的,有謂語,且簡單句只有一個謂語。
    b.時態(tài):文章絕大部分使用的是一般現(xiàn)在時;一般現(xiàn)在時第三人稱要使用單數(shù);使用過去發(fā)生的事例時用的是過去時;
    c.主謂一致按此三步,持續(xù)練習(xí)5篇以上,可以確保時間問題。
    如何在30分鐘行文的整個過程中保持書面整潔:
    A、TWE要求必須用鉛筆寫作文,你要自己準(zhǔn)備好鉛筆和橡皮。橡皮要有韌性,太硬會擦破紙,有錯誤要擦干凈再改;
    B、第一遍寫作時要求字跡不要太大也不要太小,通常一行寫10-12個左右單詞為宜。如果書法不好,可以在考前練習(xí)寫一下斜體的26個字母。
    開頭方式
    一、用副詞開頭
    (1) 副詞修飾全句
    Luckily, he didn’t know my phone number; otherwise, he would bother me.
    Incredibly, Helena got straight A in her school report this semester.
    Interestingly, cats and dogs can hardly get along well in a house.
    修飾全句常用的副詞有:
    obviously / undoubtedly
    apparently / fortunately
    clearly / unfortunately
    incredibly / luckily
    unluckily / surprisingly
    frighteningly
    這些副詞大多數(shù)表示說話人對全句的看法,在意思上相等與 “It is ... 形容詞that ...” 。
    舉個例子:
    Obviously, he is nervous about the test. =It is obvious that he is nervous about the test.
    Unfortunately, he tripped over and fell in the mud. =It is unfortunate that he tripped over and fell in the mud.
    (2) 強(qiáng)調(diào)副詞
    Hurriedly, the man drew me a scratch map to show me the direction.
    Dangerously, the drunkard sped down the street.
    Slowly and gently, snowflakes were drifting down from the sky.
    (3) 副詞表示某一領(lǐng)域
    Geographically, Canada is the biggest country in the world.
    Financially, she is independent, but emotionally she is dependent.
    二、用插入語開頭,表示說話人的態(tài)度,或使句子的意思更加準(zhǔn)確
    Strangely enough, Jennifer does not enjoy sunshine and beach.
    Generally speaking, winter in Vancouver is gloomy.
    類似的插入語有:
    no wonder,no doubt
    in other words,in my opinion
    in conclusion,in fact
    as a matter of fact
    三、用形容詞、并列形容詞或形容詞短語開頭,修飾句子的主語,表示主語的特征或狀態(tài)
    Frantic, the young mother rushed out the door with the baby in her arms.
    Tasty and crisp, potato chip are a favorite snack for both children and adults.
    Happy at his good marks at school, the little boy skipped on his way home.
    Desperate and hopeless, the poor man committed suicide.
    四、用分詞、分詞短語開頭
    (1) 修飾句子主語,表示主語所處的狀態(tài)或主語同時進(jìn)行的另一個較謂語動詞次要的動作。
    Scared, the girl moved timidly and cautiously into the dark room.( 狀態(tài))
    Chased by my dear pet cat, the mouse dashed into a small hole.( 狀態(tài) )
    Spoiled by his parents, the naughty boy always insists on things he wants.( 狀態(tài))
    Puffing and hugging, he finished his run.( 另一動作)
    Looking at herself in the mirror, she fingered her silk scarf on her shoulder.( 另一動作)
    (2) 修飾謂語動詞,表示原因、時間等。
    Lying down on the couch, he felt much relaxed.( 時間)
    Feeling bored, she turned on the TV and switched from channel to channel.( 原因)
    Wanting to find out the business hour, she called the store.( 原因)
    Having completed the form, he mailed it out immediately.( 時間)
    五、用介詞短語開頭,表示句子謂語動詞發(fā)生的時間、地點、方式、原因、條件
    On seeing him approach, the girl immediately turned her face to a shop window
    pretending to look at something there.( 時間)
    Around the corner, a crowd gathered.( 地點)
    Unlike his father, Peter touches neither cigarettes nor alcohol.( 方式)
    Due to the limit of seats, he was not accepted.( 原因)
    In case of fire, use the stairways.( 條件)
    六、動詞不定式開頭,強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語動詞動作的目的
    To celebrate the arrival of the Millennium, we held a grand party in the hotel.
    To show my trust on him, I deposited $ 10,000 into his bank account.
    七、用獨(dú)立分詞短語開頭,使句子有正式的味道
    Birds singing in the tree, another routine day starts.
    Sea gulls flying over the water, the old fisherman flung his fishing meat into the open sea.
    A dog following them, the police searched every suspect.
    八、用過渡句開頭,表示此句與上下句的關(guān)系
    Consequently, I slowed down to avoid a fine ticket.
    In fact, she was a kindhearted woman.
    九、用同位語開頭,表示主句位于動詞發(fā)生的時間、地點、原因、方式、條件等
    A signing officer of the bank, Jane signs her name hundreds of times each day at work.
    A TV addict, Jim watches TV movies one after another every evening until after midnight.
    十、用副詞從句開頭,表示主句謂語動詞發(fā)生的時間、地點、原因、方式、條件
    When you are in need of help, give me a call.
    Wherever you go, I follow.
    Since your children love hamburgers and fries, we might as well eat in MacDonald.
    As if it were summer, everybody wear shorts and a T-shirt.
    In case that you get lost, call me at this number.