GRE寫作部分將重點(diǎn)考察考生有針對性地對具體考題做出反應(yīng)的能力，而非要求考生堆砌泛泛的文字。具體說來，這些重點(diǎn)關(guān)注的能力包括：1、 清楚有效地闡明復(fù)雜觀點(diǎn)；2、 用貼切的事理和事例支撐觀點(diǎn)；3、考察/驗(yàn)證他人論點(diǎn)及其相關(guān)論證；4、支撐一個有針對性的連貫的討論；5、控制標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書面英語的各個要素。寫作部分將聯(lián)合考察邏輯推理和分析寫作兩種技能，并且將加大力度引進(jìn)那些需要考生做出有針對性的回應(yīng)的考題，降低考生依賴事前準(zhǔn)備（如背誦）的材料的可能性。
Issue 8
"Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct."
The speaker asserts that governments of countries where lesser-known languages are spoken should intervene to prevent these languages from becoming extinct. I agree insofar as a country's indigenous and distinct languages should not be abandoned and forgotten altogether. At some point, however, I think cultural identity should yield to the more practical considerations of day-to-day life in a global society.
精華：The speaker asserts that…
I agree insofar as… At some point, however, I think…
這第一段非常清晰地點(diǎn)明主旨，邏輯性也很強(qiáng)，是難得的好開頭。接下來的就是闡釋為什么作者持這觀點(diǎn)了。
On the one hand, the indigenous language of any geographical region is part-and-parcel（重要組成部分）of the cultural heritage of the region's natives. In my observation we humans have a basic psychological need for individual identity, which we define by way of our membership in distinct cultural groups. A culture defines itself in various ways--by its unique traditions, rituals, mores, attitudes and beliefs, but especially language. Therefore, when a people's language becomes extinct the result is a diminished sense of pride, dignity, and self- worth.
不要說我滅絕人性的話，我認(rèn)為這一段絕對應(yīng)該背下來！太經(jīng)典了。
One need look no further than continental Europe to observe how people cling tenaciously to their distinct languages, despite the fact that there is no practical need for them anymore. And on the other side of the Atlantic Ocean, the French Canadians stubbornly insist on French as their official language, for the sole purpose of preserving their distinct cultural heritage.Even where no distinct language exists, people will invent one to gain a sense of cultural identity, as the emergence of the distinct Ebonic cant among today's African Americans aptly illustrates. In short, people resistlanguage assimilation because of a basic human need to be part of a distinct cultural group.
精華：One need look no further than… to …
此外，我們還要學(xué)習(xí)作者的遣詞和造句，看他是如何組織復(fù)雜句的。
Another important reason to prevent the extinction of a language is to preserve the distinct ideas that only that particular language can convey. Certain Native American and Oriental languages, for instance, contain words symbolizing spiritual and other abstract concepts that only these cultures embrace. Thus, in some cases to lose a language would be to abandon cherished beliefs and ideas that can be conveyed only through language.
On the other hand, in today's high-tech world of satellite communications, global mobility, and especially the Internet, language barriers serve primarily to impede cross-cultural communication, which in turn impedes international commerce and trade.（這一句應(yīng)該背掉?。?Moreover, language barriers naturally breed misunderstanding, a certain distrust and, as a result, discord and even war among nations. Moreover, in my view the extinction of all but a few major languages is inexorable--as supported by the fact that the Internet has adopted English as its official language. Thus by intervening to preserve a dying language a government might be deploying its resources to fight a losing battle, rather than to combat more pressing social problems--such as hunger, homelessness, disease and ignorance--that plague nearly every society today.
作者的語言運(yùn)用能力在這一段里得到了淋漓盡致的體現(xiàn)了！各位猶應(yīng)觀摩他的排比，使到節(jié)奏感加強(qiáng)了很多，而這也是ets最為欣賞的。 In sum, preserving indigenous languages is, admittedly, a worthy goal；maintaining its own distinct language affords a people a sense of pride, dignity and self-worth. Moreover, by preserving languages we honor a people's heritage, enhance our understanding of history, and preserve certain ideas that only some languages properly convey. Nevertheless, the economic and political drawbacks of language barriers outweigh the benefits of preserving a dying language. In the final analysis, government should devote its time and resources elsewhere, and leave it to the people themselves to take whatever steps are needed to preserve their own distinct languages. 不太夸張的話，這一篇范文是絕對的范文了。6分?。。?作者顧及了正反兩面來論述dying languages should not be preserved 這一觀點(diǎn)。無論從邏輯的嚴(yán)密性還是語言的精煉度，甚至論據(jù)的陳列，均堪稱上乘之作！這一篇有比4.18號貼出的那一篇略勝一籌！ BTW, 曾經(jīng)有g(shù)友提出這280篇均出自一人之手，這一點(diǎn)吾難以茍同！根據(jù)這幾日來的分析，想必大家也能觀出端倪一二了。 感謝您閱讀《6分范文點(diǎn)評 》一文，出國留學(xué)網(wǎng)(liuxue86.com)編輯部希望本文能幫助到您。
Issue 8
"Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct."
The speaker asserts that governments of countries where lesser-known languages are spoken should intervene to prevent these languages from becoming extinct. I agree insofar as a country's indigenous and distinct languages should not be abandoned and forgotten altogether. At some point, however, I think cultural identity should yield to the more practical considerations of day-to-day life in a global society.
精華：The speaker asserts that…
I agree insofar as… At some point, however, I think…
這第一段非常清晰地點(diǎn)明主旨，邏輯性也很強(qiáng)，是難得的好開頭。接下來的就是闡釋為什么作者持這觀點(diǎn)了。
On the one hand, the indigenous language of any geographical region is part-and-parcel（重要組成部分）of the cultural heritage of the region's natives. In my observation we humans have a basic psychological need for individual identity, which we define by way of our membership in distinct cultural groups. A culture defines itself in various ways--by its unique traditions, rituals, mores, attitudes and beliefs, but especially language. Therefore, when a people's language becomes extinct the result is a diminished sense of pride, dignity, and self- worth.
不要說我滅絕人性的話，我認(rèn)為這一段絕對應(yīng)該背下來！太經(jīng)典了。
One need look no further than continental Europe to observe how people cling tenaciously to their distinct languages, despite the fact that there is no practical need for them anymore. And on the other side of the Atlantic Ocean, the French Canadians stubbornly insist on French as their official language, for the sole purpose of preserving their distinct cultural heritage.Even where no distinct language exists, people will invent one to gain a sense of cultural identity, as the emergence of the distinct Ebonic cant among today's African Americans aptly illustrates. In short, people resistlanguage assimilation because of a basic human need to be part of a distinct cultural group.
精華：One need look no further than… to …
此外，我們還要學(xué)習(xí)作者的遣詞和造句，看他是如何組織復(fù)雜句的。
Another important reason to prevent the extinction of a language is to preserve the distinct ideas that only that particular language can convey. Certain Native American and Oriental languages, for instance, contain words symbolizing spiritual and other abstract concepts that only these cultures embrace. Thus, in some cases to lose a language would be to abandon cherished beliefs and ideas that can be conveyed only through language.
On the other hand, in today's high-tech world of satellite communications, global mobility, and especially the Internet, language barriers serve primarily to impede cross-cultural communication, which in turn impedes international commerce and trade.（這一句應(yīng)該背掉?。?Moreover, language barriers naturally breed misunderstanding, a certain distrust and, as a result, discord and even war among nations. Moreover, in my view the extinction of all but a few major languages is inexorable--as supported by the fact that the Internet has adopted English as its official language. Thus by intervening to preserve a dying language a government might be deploying its resources to fight a losing battle, rather than to combat more pressing social problems--such as hunger, homelessness, disease and ignorance--that plague nearly every society today.
作者的語言運(yùn)用能力在這一段里得到了淋漓盡致的體現(xiàn)了！各位猶應(yīng)觀摩他的排比，使到節(jié)奏感加強(qiáng)了很多，而這也是ets最為欣賞的。 In sum, preserving indigenous languages is, admittedly, a worthy goal；maintaining its own distinct language affords a people a sense of pride, dignity and self-worth. Moreover, by preserving languages we honor a people's heritage, enhance our understanding of history, and preserve certain ideas that only some languages properly convey. Nevertheless, the economic and political drawbacks of language barriers outweigh the benefits of preserving a dying language. In the final analysis, government should devote its time and resources elsewhere, and leave it to the people themselves to take whatever steps are needed to preserve their own distinct languages. 不太夸張的話，這一篇范文是絕對的范文了。6分?。。?作者顧及了正反兩面來論述dying languages should not be preserved 這一觀點(diǎn)。無論從邏輯的嚴(yán)密性還是語言的精煉度，甚至論據(jù)的陳列，均堪稱上乘之作！這一篇有比4.18號貼出的那一篇略勝一籌！ BTW, 曾經(jīng)有g(shù)友提出這280篇均出自一人之手，這一點(diǎn)吾難以茍同！根據(jù)這幾日來的分析，想必大家也能觀出端倪一二了。 感謝您閱讀《6分范文點(diǎn)評 》一文，出國留學(xué)網(wǎng)(liuxue86.com)編輯部希望本文能幫助到您。