2012gre作文大講堂:入門和進階提高攻略(3)

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GRE寫作成為橫在中國學生的理想和現(xiàn)實之間的一大障礙,因此,如何攻克寫作這道屏障,成為擺在我們面前的首要任務。
    WHICH ONE類:題干中明確要求考生做“二選一”的選擇,比如:
    99."In any realm of life—whether academic, social, business, or political-the only way to succeed is to take a practical, rather than an idealistic point of view. PraGMATic behavior guarantees survival, whereas idealistic views tend to be superceded by simpler, more immediate options."
    由于是“二選一”,因而作文者有三種回應傾向:選A,選B或A,B中和。那么我們可以提煉出兩種基本模式:
    1、單選:1、選A(或B)的基本理由;2、選A的好處;3、相較之A,選B有什么壞處。
    2、雙選:1、選A的基本理由和好處;2、選B的基本理由和好處;3、A和B同時兼?zhèn)涞暮锰帯?BR>    由于GRE作文開放式的話題,很少有東西“全壞”或“全好”,所以奉勸考生盡量學會使用“雙選”模式,但是有志于“創(chuàng)新”的同學可以嘗試用“單選”,它往往讓你的作文“另類而出彩”,前面已有范文作過示范,請予以參照。下面的范文選用重點掌握的“雙選”模式,讀者注意其論證構思的過程。
    (范文)
    As one of the famous philosophers ever writes,“the dream leads our sights toward the future, and the practice make our sense recognize how far away we still have to strive for.”During the recent decades, experts gradually have been divided into two opposite cults respectively holds their own belief of idealism and empiricism, and through thousands of fervid controversies the latter seems having dominated the optimal status after showing the corroborative evidence stems from the practical exemplar in the process of society constructions. But, in my point of view, in this practical and competitive world, being practical is essential to one's survival, yet ideals give us a direction in our pursuit of success.
    We can with no difficulty to find out the obvious fact that any human undertaking irrespective of the hard facts and rules of reality is destined to failure. Under the nib of Cervantes,the well known Spanish fiction writer, we clearly see the antic portrait of an eccentric man named Don Quixote equipped with mid-aged sword and lance just like a cavalier following by his allegiant servant. Severe fantasy of warfare separated from the bucolic reality drives him to the desirous aspiration to shape himself to be a hero, which ultimately catalyzes his ingenuous thoughts into the abysmal hallucination that cannot be dispelled by anything directly results in his tragedy. The similar case also can be found in the early time of last century, when the efficient use of energy has been evolved to the most popular issue and its immense profits prospect incites thousands of top scientists devoted their life-long research into the study of“permanent mobile machine”, something that once being given even a minor ignorable energy can it operate eternally to produce endless energy as feedback, which at last after a long-range frustrated trials scientists find immediately contradicts the energy-permanence law, the natural principles applied to any existence in the world. Having realized the source of the failure, more attention should be threw onto the disciplines of action that focus on the conditional reality.
    However, ideals give us hope and enthusiasm, lifting us to new heights and helping us to overcome self-imposed limitations. Today, most of the nations who embrace the world's most sophisticated scientific technology ought to, in a sense, thank for the scientifically idealistic writers' sharing their affluent wisdom and imagination with the vast populace. The super-acoustic airplanes, the man-seated spaceship, and the artificial intelligence now all steps out of the exotic episodes of fictions into our everyday life, in that inspirations themselves cannot automatically drop off from the empyrean but be quarried from the deep soul of everyone, not just only the scientists because that's the common obligation for all members of community who are equal to them at this point of exploration. Scientists' contribution lies with the gift that using those descriptive originally materials in their efforts in trying to put them into actuality. Without the idealistic raw materials given by our writers or even ordinary citizens, I believe that even though we had much more experienced scientists no break-neck innovations would be worked out abruptly change every faCETs of human life. 感謝您閱讀《入門和進階提高攻略(3) 》一文,出國留學網(wǎng)(liuxue86.com)編輯部希望本文能幫助到您。