GRE作文是中國學(xué)生比較頭痛的，經(jīng)常準(zhǔn)備很多時間最后還是只得到3.5。我之所以得到6分，個人認(rèn)為我的文風(fēng)比較淳樸扎實，有科學(xué)性，寫的思路比較廣(正、反、特)，字?jǐn)?shù)也比較多(I800+、A700+)。
題目：
In an attempt to improve highway safety， Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hour on all county highways. But this effort has failed： the number of accidents has not decreased， and， based on reports by the highway patrol， many drivers are exceeding the speed limit. Prunty County should instead undertake the same kind of road improvement project that Butler County completed five years ago： increasing lane widths， resurfacing rough highways， and improving visibility at dangerous intersections. Today， major Butler County roads still have a 55 mph speed limit， yet there were 25 percent fewer reported accidents in Butler County this past year than there were five years ago.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
中文翻譯：
為了提升高速公路的安全性，p 市去年把所有高速公路的限速由55 降到了45.但是這樣的努力嘗試失敗了，事故發(fā)生的數(shù)量沒有下降，并且根據(jù)高速巡警的報告很多司機都超速駕駛。所以p市應(yīng)該采用b 市5 年前相同的道路改善計劃：增加車道寬度，重新鋪設(shè)不平路面以及改善危險交叉路口的能見度。今天，b 市的主要道路依然是55 限速，但上報的事故率卻比5 年前減少了25%.
寫一篇回應(yīng)，討論還需要何種具體的證據(jù)才能更好的評估上面的論證，并解釋這個證據(jù)是如何強化/削弱這篇文章的論證的。
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題目：
In an attempt to improve highway safety， Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hour on all county highways. But this effort has failed： the number of accidents has not decreased， and， based on reports by the highway patrol， many drivers are exceeding the speed limit. Prunty County should instead undertake the same kind of road improvement project that Butler County completed five years ago： increasing lane widths， resurfacing rough highways， and improving visibility at dangerous intersections. Today， major Butler County roads still have a 55 mph speed limit， yet there were 25 percent fewer reported accidents in Butler County this past year than there were five years ago.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
中文翻譯：
為了提升高速公路的安全性，p 市去年把所有高速公路的限速由55 降到了45.但是這樣的努力嘗試失敗了，事故發(fā)生的數(shù)量沒有下降，并且根據(jù)高速巡警的報告很多司機都超速駕駛。所以p市應(yīng)該采用b 市5 年前相同的道路改善計劃：增加車道寬度，重新鋪設(shè)不平路面以及改善危險交叉路口的能見度。今天，b 市的主要道路依然是55 限速，但上報的事故率卻比5 年前減少了25%.
寫一篇回應(yīng)，討論還需要何種具體的證據(jù)才能更好的評估上面的論證，并解釋這個證據(jù)是如何強化/削弱這篇文章的論證的。
感謝您閱讀《argument13 》一文，出國留學(xué)網(wǎng)(liuxue86.com)編輯部希望本文能幫助到您。