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題目：
The following was written as a part of an application for a small-business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe.
"A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. Currently， the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away； thus， the proposed new jazz club in Monroe， the C-Note， would have the local market all to itself. Plus， jazz is extremely popular in Monroe： over 100，000 people attended Monroe's annual jazz festival last summer； several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe； and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly，' which airs every weeknight at 7 P.M. Finally， a nationwide study indicates that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1，000 per year on jazz entertainment."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
中文翻譯：
在Monroe 建立爵士樂俱樂部將會是非常盈利的產(chǎn)業(yè)。當前，最近的爵士俱樂部也在65 英里以外；因此，我們籌建的俱樂部C Note 將會占有全部的本地市場。而且，爵士樂在Monroe 非常流行：去年夏天10 萬多人參加了Monroe 的爵士音樂節(jié)，若干知名爵士音樂家居住在Monroe，Monroe 獲評價最高的廣播節(jié)目是平時每天播出的Jazz Nightly.最后，一項全國性研究表明典型的爵士愛好者每年花費近1000 元用于爵士娛樂。
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題目：
The following was written as a part of an application for a small-business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe.
"A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. Currently， the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away； thus， the proposed new jazz club in Monroe， the C-Note， would have the local market all to itself. Plus， jazz is extremely popular in Monroe： over 100，000 people attended Monroe's annual jazz festival last summer； several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe； and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly，' which airs every weeknight at 7 P.M. Finally， a nationwide study indicates that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1，000 per year on jazz entertainment."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
中文翻譯：
在Monroe 建立爵士樂俱樂部將會是非常盈利的產(chǎn)業(yè)。當前，最近的爵士俱樂部也在65 英里以外；因此，我們籌建的俱樂部C Note 將會占有全部的本地市場。而且，爵士樂在Monroe 非常流行：去年夏天10 萬多人參加了Monroe 的爵士音樂節(jié)，若干知名爵士音樂家居住在Monroe，Monroe 獲評價最高的廣播節(jié)目是平時每天播出的Jazz Nightly.最后，一項全國性研究表明典型的爵士愛好者每年花費近1000 元用于爵士娛樂。
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