GRE寫作部分將重點(diǎn)考察考生有針對性地對具體考題做出反應(yīng)的能力，而非要求考生堆砌泛泛的文字。具體說來，這些重點(diǎn)關(guān)注的能力包括：1、 清楚有效地闡明復(fù)雜觀點(diǎn)；2、 用貼切的事理和事例支撐觀點(diǎn)；3、考察/驗證他人論點(diǎn)及其相關(guān)論證；4、支撐一個有針對性的連貫的討論；5、控制標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書面英語的各個要素。寫作部分將聯(lián)合考察邏輯推理和分析寫作兩種技能，并且將加大力度引進(jìn)那些需要考生做出有針對性的回應(yīng)的考題，降低考生依賴事前準(zhǔn)備（如背誦）的材料的可能性。
Thebestideasarisefromapassionateinterestincommonplacethings.ThisissomethingIlearnedfromeverydayexperiences.IalwaysfoundthatthethingsIdecoratedmylifewithabundantly,werethethingsItreasuredmost.Itcouldbeamemory,apossesion,orjustaview.It’shardtocreateawholepicturewithoutfirstlookingatthepieceswithinit.Mywholelifeofschoolandstudieshavebroughtmetocollegeandhavesparkedmyinterestinapplyingtoagraduateprogram.NeverbeforedidIrealizehowtheselittleeffortswouldcreatethisdream.Inmyfieldofdieteticsmanywouldbeamazedtofindthatthefoodweeatcouldkillusorhelpusfromdisease.
TherearemanytimeswhereI’llbelookingatthebeautifulview,andIjusthavetogooutandenjoyit.Idothisbywalking,gardening,orjustlyinginthegrass.Thefeelingofthewarmsunmakesmedream.IknowI’mnottheonlyonewhotendstooverlookthebasicthings,likethetreeoutsidethatyouusedtoclimb,orthefoodyoueattogiveyouenergyandgrowth.Wejusthavetotakethetimefromourbusyschedulestostopandsmelltheroses.Everyone’slifeisdifferent,withourownexperincesandthoughtstomotivateus,andnomatterwhoweare,someofthesimplestthingscanbringgreatachievementsinourlives.
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Thisisalimitedresponse;itdoesnotadequatelyanalyzetheissue.Theessayisprimarilyconcernedwithdiscussingthewriter’sownpersonalenjoymentofcommonplacethings.Assuchitneverfullyengagesthetopic’scentralissue--thequalityoftheideasthatcomefromthosecommonplacethings.Earlyintheresponse,thewritermakesthefollowingobservation:"IalwaysfoundthatthethingsIdecoratedmylifewithabundantly,werethethingsItreasuredmost."Thisistypicalofthesimplisticanalysisthatcharacterizesthisessay.
Attheendofthefirstparagraph,thewriterdoesmakesomehesitantstepstowardadiscussionoftheideasthatmightcomefromtheseeverydayexperiences,mentioningthat"inmyfieldofdieteticsmanywouldbeamazedtofindthatthefoodweeatcouldkillusorhelpusfromdisease."Thisinsightisnotadequatelydeveloped,however,and,inthesecondparagraph,thewriterreturnstoadiscussionoftheideathatonemustenjoythelittlethingsinlife.Inshort,theessayislimitedinitsdevelopment,revealingonlyapartialunderstandingofthetopic’sassertion.
Ingeneral,theessaydisplayscontrolofstandardwrittenEnglish.Thereisnotmuchsyntacticvariety,butneitherarethereprofounderrors.Theessayreceivedthescoreof3becauseitsanalysisissimplisticandvague,anditsdevelopmentislimited. 感謝您閱讀《歷年GRE考試Issue主題范文及評析34 》一文，出國留學(xué)網(wǎng)(liuxue86.com)編輯部希望本文能幫助到您。
Thebestideasarisefromapassionateinterestincommonplacethings.ThisissomethingIlearnedfromeverydayexperiences.IalwaysfoundthatthethingsIdecoratedmylifewithabundantly,werethethingsItreasuredmost.Itcouldbeamemory,apossesion,orjustaview.It’shardtocreateawholepicturewithoutfirstlookingatthepieceswithinit.Mywholelifeofschoolandstudieshavebroughtmetocollegeandhavesparkedmyinterestinapplyingtoagraduateprogram.NeverbeforedidIrealizehowtheselittleeffortswouldcreatethisdream.Inmyfieldofdieteticsmanywouldbeamazedtofindthatthefoodweeatcouldkillusorhelpusfromdisease.
TherearemanytimeswhereI’llbelookingatthebeautifulview,andIjusthavetogooutandenjoyit.Idothisbywalking,gardening,orjustlyinginthegrass.Thefeelingofthewarmsunmakesmedream.IknowI’mnottheonlyonewhotendstooverlookthebasicthings,likethetreeoutsidethatyouusedtoclimb,orthefoodyoueattogiveyouenergyandgrowth.Wejusthavetotakethetimefromourbusyschedulestostopandsmelltheroses.Everyone’slifeisdifferent,withourownexperincesandthoughtstomotivateus,andnomatterwhoweare,someofthesimplestthingscanbringgreatachievementsinourlives.
COMMENTARY wｗw.ExamＷ.CoM
Thisisalimitedresponse;itdoesnotadequatelyanalyzetheissue.Theessayisprimarilyconcernedwithdiscussingthewriter’sownpersonalenjoymentofcommonplacethings.Assuchitneverfullyengagesthetopic’scentralissue--thequalityoftheideasthatcomefromthosecommonplacethings.Earlyintheresponse,thewritermakesthefollowingobservation:"IalwaysfoundthatthethingsIdecoratedmylifewithabundantly,werethethingsItreasuredmost."Thisistypicalofthesimplisticanalysisthatcharacterizesthisessay.
Attheendofthefirstparagraph,thewriterdoesmakesomehesitantstepstowardadiscussionoftheideasthatmightcomefromtheseeverydayexperiences,mentioningthat"inmyfieldofdieteticsmanywouldbeamazedtofindthatthefoodweeatcouldkillusorhelpusfromdisease."Thisinsightisnotadequatelydeveloped,however,and,inthesecondparagraph,thewriterreturnstoadiscussionoftheideathatonemustenjoythelittlethingsinlife.Inshort,theessayislimitedinitsdevelopment,revealingonlyapartialunderstandingofthetopic’sassertion.
Ingeneral,theessaydisplayscontrolofstandardwrittenEnglish.Thereisnotmuchsyntacticvariety,butneitherarethereprofounderrors.Theessayreceivedthescoreof3becauseitsanalysisissimplisticandvague,anditsdevelopmentislimited. 感謝您閱讀《歷年GRE考試Issue主題范文及評析34 》一文，出國留學(xué)網(wǎng)(liuxue86.com)編輯部希望本文能幫助到您。