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Thethoughtofapassion
InreadingsuchapassageastheonegiventomeasanassignmentIcan’thelpbutthinkofananalogythatenteredmymind.Itismyenduringinterestinthefieldofmultimedia.IsaythisbecauseoftheideasinwhichIcultivateasanartistofmanymediamaterialssuchaspaints,film,computeranimatedsoftware,etc.BeinganexpressionistItakeinmysurroundingsandpersonalexperiencesfromcommonplacesandthingsandtellastoryfrommyperspectiveusingthevarioustoolswhetheritbecomputeraidedorhanddrawn.Myideascomefrompeopleorthingsbecauseittellsastory.Thestorycanbeabstract,little,big,orevenstrange.Torecordstorieslikethesemaysparkideasthatmaycometomeinadominoeffect.It’sbeautiful]Isharedthiswithyoutoconcludethatsometimesevencommonthingssuchasapencilandanemptypagecanspellloutyourfateandunlimitedpossibilitieswhenyouhaveapassionoraninterestthatdrivesyourhungerforinnovation. 中華考試網(wǎng)
COMMENTARY
Thisessayisseriouslyflawedinitsanalysisoftheissue.Thewriterattemptstoaddressthetopicbyfocusingonhisorherinterestin"multimedia"art.Yet,whileisolatedwordsandphrasesfromthetopicappearthroughouttheessay,theessayneverclearlystatesapositionontheissue.Forexample,inadiscussionofmultimediaart,thewritermakesthefollowingobservation:"BeinganexpressionistItakeinmysurroundingsandpersonalexperiencesfromcommonplacesandthingsandtellastoryfrommyperspectiveusingthevarioustoolswhetheritbecomputeraidedorhanddrawn."Theessaycirclesaroundtheissue,withouteverreallyengagingit.
Theessayisalsomarkedbyseriousflawsinlanguageuse:inaccuratewordchoice("andtellastoryfrommyperspectiveusingthevarioustoolswhetheritbecomputeraidedorhanddrawn."),unclearpronounreference("Myideascomefrompeopleorthingsbecauseittellsastory"),and,ingeneral,adebilitatinglackofclarityandprecision.Theseerrorsfrequentlyinterferewithmeaning,acharacteristicofmanyessaysscored2. 感謝您閱讀《歷年GRE考試Issue主題范文及評(píng)析35 》一文,出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)(liuxue86.com)編輯部希望本文能幫助到您。
Thethoughtofapassion
InreadingsuchapassageastheonegiventomeasanassignmentIcan’thelpbutthinkofananalogythatenteredmymind.Itismyenduringinterestinthefieldofmultimedia.IsaythisbecauseoftheideasinwhichIcultivateasanartistofmanymediamaterialssuchaspaints,film,computeranimatedsoftware,etc.BeinganexpressionistItakeinmysurroundingsandpersonalexperiencesfromcommonplacesandthingsandtellastoryfrommyperspectiveusingthevarioustoolswhetheritbecomputeraidedorhanddrawn.Myideascomefrompeopleorthingsbecauseittellsastory.Thestorycanbeabstract,little,big,orevenstrange.Torecordstorieslikethesemaysparkideasthatmaycometomeinadominoeffect.It’sbeautiful]Isharedthiswithyoutoconcludethatsometimesevencommonthingssuchasapencilandanemptypagecanspellloutyourfateandunlimitedpossibilitieswhenyouhaveapassionoraninterestthatdrivesyourhungerforinnovation. 中華考試網(wǎng)
COMMENTARY
Thisessayisseriouslyflawedinitsanalysisoftheissue.Thewriterattemptstoaddressthetopicbyfocusingonhisorherinterestin"multimedia"art.Yet,whileisolatedwordsandphrasesfromthetopicappearthroughouttheessay,theessayneverclearlystatesapositionontheissue.Forexample,inadiscussionofmultimediaart,thewritermakesthefollowingobservation:"BeinganexpressionistItakeinmysurroundingsandpersonalexperiencesfromcommonplacesandthingsandtellastoryfrommyperspectiveusingthevarioustoolswhetheritbecomputeraidedorhanddrawn."Theessaycirclesaroundtheissue,withouteverreallyengagingit.
Theessayisalsomarkedbyseriousflawsinlanguageuse:inaccuratewordchoice("andtellastoryfrommyperspectiveusingthevarioustoolswhetheritbecomputeraidedorhanddrawn."),unclearpronounreference("Myideascomefrompeopleorthingsbecauseittellsastory"),and,ingeneral,adebilitatinglackofclarityandprecision.Theseerrorsfrequentlyinterferewithmeaning,acharacteristicofmanyessaysscored2. 感謝您閱讀《歷年GRE考試Issue主題范文及評(píng)析35 》一文,出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)(liuxue86.com)編輯部希望本文能幫助到您。