英語專八改錯考前突擊訓練(6)

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    Exercise is one of the few factors with a positive role in long-term maintenance of body weight. Unfortunately,
    that message has not gotten through to the average American, that would rather try switching to __1__
    "light" beer and low-calorie bread than increase physical exertion. The Centers for Disease Control, for example,
    found that fewer than one-fourth of overweight adults were trying to shed __2__
    pounds said they were combining exercise with their diet.
    In rejecting exercise, some people may be discouraged too much by calorie-expending charts; __3__
    for example, one would have to briskly walk three miles just to work the 275 calories in one __4__
    delicious Danish pastry. Even exercise professionals concede half a point here.
    "Exercise in itself is a very tough way to lose weight," says York Onnen, __5__
    the program director of the President's Council on Physical Fitness and Sports. __6__
    Therefore, exercise's supporting role in weight reduction is vital. __7__
    A study at the Boston University Medical Center of overweight police officers and other public
    employees confirmed that those who diet without exercise regained almost all their old weight, __8__
    while those who worked exercise into their daily routine maintained their new weight.
    If you decide to start walking one mile a day, the added exercise could burn
    an extra 100 calories daily.In a year's time, assumed no increase in __9__
    food taken, you could lose ten pounds. By increasing the distance of your walks gradually __10__
    and making other dietary adjustments,you may lose even more weight.
    答案:1.that--who.that從句修飾的是the average American,而且它是一個非限定性定語從句,而that無法引導一個非限定性定語從句,所以應把that改為who。
    2.adults^--who.found后接的從句中主要的動詞應該是said,而不是try to shed pounds,所以應該在were前面加上who構成定語從句修飾overweight adults。
    3.expending--expenditure.由于caloric是形容詞,表示“屬于或者關于卡的”,它后面不能接動詞的-ing形式,而且expending和charts的關系也不成立,所以應該改為名詞expenditure。
    4.work^--off.work off有消耗之意,符合文義。
    5.in--by(直接把in 去掉也可以吧?).in itself 表示“本身,本質上”,而我們都知道鍛煉是一減肥的好方法,只是不能僅靠鍛煉,還需配之以適當?shù)娘嬍晨刂疲詰摪裪n itself換成by itself,表示“單獨”。
    6.the(program)--/.在用作同位語表示獨一無二的職位的名詞之前,通常用零冠詞。
    7.Therefore--Still/Neverthless.根據(jù)上下文,這里要表達的關系是讓步,不是因果。
    8.diet--dieted.這里敘述的是過去的一項研究。
    9.assumed--assuming.assume和you的關系應是主動的,所以應改為assuming。
    10.taken--intake.take in 表示“攝入,吸收”,它的名詞形式不是take in,而是 intake