工作還得一張一馳呢,老讓讀者讀長(zhǎng)句,累死人!寫(xiě)一個(gè)短小精辟的句子,相反,卻可以起到畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末,不也可以揭示主題,讓讀者一目了然,必會(huì)平安無(wú)事!
2019年英語(yǔ)六級(jí)寫(xiě)作技巧
英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文“七項(xiàng)基本原則”
1、長(zhǎng)短句原則
工作還得一張一馳呢,老讓讀者讀長(zhǎng)句,累死人!寫(xiě)一個(gè)短小精辟的句子,相反,卻可以起到畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主題:
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 如此可見(jiàn),長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合,抑揚(yáng)頓挫,豈不爽哉?牢記!
強(qiáng)烈建議:在文章第一段(開(kāi)頭)用一長(zhǎng)一短,且先長(zhǎng)后短;在文章主體部分,要先用一個(gè)短句解釋主要意思,然后在闡述幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)的時(shí)候采用先短后長(zhǎng)的句群形式,定會(huì)讓主體部分妙筆生輝!文章結(jié)尾一般用一長(zhǎng)一短就可以了。
2、 主題句原則
國(guó)有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否則會(huì)給人造成“群龍無(wú)首”之感!相信各位讀過(guò)一些破爛文學(xué),故意把主體隱藏在文章之內(nèi),結(jié)果造成我們稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉勸各位一定要寫(xiě)一個(gè)主題句,放在文章的開(kāi)頭(保險(xiǎn)型)或者結(jié)尾,讓讀者一目了然,必會(huì)平安無(wú)事!
特別提示:隱藏主體句可是要冒險(xiǎn)的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam(主題句). Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
3、 一二三原則
領(lǐng)導(dǎo)講話(huà)總是第一部分、第一點(diǎn)、第二點(diǎn)、第三點(diǎn)、第二部分、第一點(diǎn)… 如此羅嗦??僧吘惯€是條理清楚??脊賯兛次恼乱脖厝灰ㄟ^(guò)這些關(guān)鍵性的“標(biāo)簽”來(lái)判定你的文章是否結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,條理自然。破解方法很簡(jiǎn)單,只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)前就清楚了。
1)first, second, third, last(不推薦,原因:俗)
2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally(不推薦,原因:俗)
3)the first, the second, the third, the last(不推薦,原因:俗)
4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推薦,原因:俗)
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(強(qiáng)烈推薦)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(強(qiáng)烈推薦)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(強(qiáng)烈推薦)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況)
10)for one thing, for another thing(適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況)
建議:不僅僅在寫(xiě)作中注意,平時(shí)說(shuō)話(huà)的時(shí)候也應(yīng)該條理清楚!
4、 短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則
寫(xiě)作時(shí),尤其是在考試時(shí),如果使用短語(yǔ),有兩個(gè)好處:其一、用短語(yǔ)會(huì)使文章增加亮點(diǎn),如果老師們看到你的文章太簡(jiǎn)單,看不到一個(gè)自己不認(rèn)識(shí)的短語(yǔ),必然會(huì)看你低一等。相反,如果發(fā)現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)—精彩的短語(yǔ),那么你的文章定會(huì)得高分了。其二、關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維短路,只有湊字?jǐn)?shù),怎么辦?用短語(yǔ)是一個(gè)辦法!比如:
I cannot bear it.
可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá):I cannot put up with it.
I want it.
可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá):I am looking forward to it.
這樣字?jǐn)?shù)明顯增加,表達(dá)也更準(zhǔn)確。
5、 多實(shí)少虛原則
原因很簡(jiǎn)單,寫(xiě)文章還是應(yīng)該寫(xiě)一些實(shí)際的東西,不要空話(huà)連篇。這就要求一定要多用實(shí)詞,少用虛詞。我這里所說(shuō)的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說(shuō)一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候,不應(yīng)該之說(shuō)nice這樣空洞的詞,應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之類(lèi)的形象詞。再比如:
走出房間,general的詞是:walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):slip out of the room
小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):sail out of the room
小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):dance out of the room
老人走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):stagger out of the room
所以多用實(shí)詞,少用虛詞,文章將會(huì)大放異彩!
6、 多變句式原則
1)加法(串聯(lián))
都希望寫(xiě)下很長(zhǎng)的句子,像個(gè)老外似的,可就是怕寫(xiě)錯(cuò),怎么辦,最保險(xiǎn)的寫(xiě)長(zhǎng)句的方法就是這些,可以在任何句子之間加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。比如說(shuō):
I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者并列的,我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式:
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
其它的短語(yǔ)可以用:
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2)轉(zhuǎn)折(拐彎抹角)
批評(píng)某人缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候,我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說(shuō)說(shuō)他的優(yōu)點(diǎn),然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題,再說(shuō)缺點(diǎn),這種方式雖然陰險(xiǎn)了點(diǎn),可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢,我們說(shuō)話(huà)的時(shí)候,只要在要點(diǎn)之前先來(lái)點(diǎn)廢話(huà),注意二者之間用個(gè)專(zhuān)這次就夠了。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
The coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多的短語(yǔ):
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding
3)因果(so, so, so)
昨天在街上我看到了一個(gè)女孩,然后我主動(dòng)搭訕,然后我們?nèi)タХ葟d,然后我們認(rèn)識(shí)了,然后我們成為了朋友…可見(jiàn),講故事的時(shí)候我們總要追求先后順序,先什么,后什么,所以然后這個(gè)詞就變得很常見(jiàn)了。其實(shí)這個(gè)詞表示的是先后或因果關(guān)系!
The snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短語(yǔ):
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)失衡句(頭重腳輕,或者頭輕腳重)
有些人腦袋大,身體小,或者有些人腦袋小,身體大,雖然我們不希望長(zhǎng)成這個(gè)樣子,可如果真的是這樣了,也就必然會(huì)吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現(xiàn)這樣的句子,就更會(huì)讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實(shí)就是主語(yǔ)從句,表語(yǔ)從句,賓語(yǔ)從句的變形。
舉例:This is what I can do.
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
同樣主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)、表語(yǔ)可以改成如下的復(fù)雜成分:
When to go, Why he goes away…
5)附加(多此一舉)
如果有了老婆,總會(huì)遇到這樣的情況,當(dāng)你再講某個(gè)人的時(shí)候,她會(huì)插一句說(shuō),我昨天見(jiàn)過(guò)他;或者說(shuō),就是某某某,如果把老婆的話(huà)插入到我們的話(huà)里面,那就是定語(yǔ)從句和同位語(yǔ)從句或者是插入語(yǔ)。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
其實(shí)很簡(jiǎn)單,同位語(yǔ)--要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個(gè)句子的構(gòu)成;定語(yǔ)從句—借用之前的關(guān)鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個(gè)句子插入其中,但是whom or that 關(guān)鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過(guò)于此,如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話(huà),那么我希望你引用一個(gè)個(gè)的排比句,一個(gè)個(gè)得對(duì)偶句,一個(gè)個(gè)的不定式,一個(gè)個(gè)地詞,一個(gè)個(gè)的短語(yǔ),如此表達(dá)將會(huì)使文章有排山倒海之勢(shì)!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (氣勢(shì)恢宏)
要想寫(xiě)出如此氣勢(shì)恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、 挑戰(zhàn)極限原則
既然十挑戰(zhàn)極限,必然是比較難的,但是并非不可攀!
原理:在學(xué)生的文章中,很少發(fā)現(xiàn)諸如獨(dú)立主格的句子,其實(shí)也很簡(jiǎn)單,只要花上5分鐘的時(shí)間看看就可以領(lǐng)會(huì),它就是分詞的一種特殊形式,分詞要求主語(yǔ)一致,而獨(dú)立主格則不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
文章主體段落三大殺手锏:
一、舉實(shí)例
思維短路,舉實(shí)例!提出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn),舉實(shí)例!提出一個(gè)方案,舉實(shí)例!而且者也是我們揭示一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)最好的方式,任何情況下,只要我們無(wú)法繼續(xù)文章,不管三七二十一,盡管舉例子!
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.
更多句型:
To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
二、做比較
方法:寫(xiě)完一個(gè)要點(diǎn),比較與之相似的;又寫(xiě)完一個(gè)要點(diǎn),再比較與之相反的;
世界上沒(méi)有同樣的指紋,沒(méi)有相同的樹(shù)葉,文章亦同,只有通過(guò)比較,你才會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)二者的相同點(diǎn)(through comparison)和不同點(diǎn)(through contrast)。下面是一些短語(yǔ):
相似的比較:
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比較:
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
三、換言之
沒(méi)話(huà)說(shuō)了,可以換一句話(huà)再說(shuō),讓你的文章在多一些字,或者文鄒鄒地說(shuō),是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點(diǎn)。
實(shí)際就是重復(fù)重復(fù)再重復(fù)!下面的句子實(shí)際上就三個(gè)字 I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.
或者上面我們舉過(guò)的例子:
I cannot bear it.
可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá):I cannot put up with it.
因此可以這樣說(shuō):I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.
更多短語(yǔ):
in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply
1. As is shown by the graph/in the table。。(概述圖表)
正如曲線(xiàn)所示,最近54年來(lái)該國(guó)人口飛速增長(zhǎng)。
As is shown by the graph,there has been a rapid increase in the population of the country in the past five years.
2. It can be seen from the table that … (得出結(jié)論)
shown graph
concluded figures
estimated statistics
A. 從表中所給的統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)字可以看出,從1985年到1990年中國(guó)的人均收入迅速提高。
From the statistics given in the table it can be seen that the average personal income of the Chinese people increased (grew 、rose) rapidly from 1985 to 1990.
B. 從曲線(xiàn)圖可以得出結(jié)論,最近5年來(lái)中國(guó)人口的出生率已經(jīng)大大下降。
It can be concluded from the graph that there has been a great decline in birth rates in China in the past five years.
3. … amount to … (數(shù)量總計(jì))
add up to
come to
sum up to
全部費(fèi)用合計(jì)200美元。
All the expenses (costs) amount to (= add up to) $ 200.
4. … increase from … to … (數(shù)量增減)
decrease
rise
fall
drop
A. 這個(gè)工廠(chǎng)生產(chǎn)的彩電已由1986年的5000臺(tái)增加到1990年的21000臺(tái)。
The number of colour TV sets produced by the factory increased (rose , grew , climbed) from 5000 in 1986 to 21000 in 1990.
B.參加者的人數(shù)增加到30萬(wàn)。
The number of paticipants grew up to 300000 persons = increased , reaching 300000 persons).
C. 這個(gè)學(xué)校的教職工人數(shù)已減少到700人。
The number of teaching staff members in this school has decreased to 700 persons.
5.(be)three times as + 形容詞 + as 總產(chǎn)量 total output 鋼的年產(chǎn)量 the annual output of
上升17% rise by 17per cent steel
日產(chǎn)量 the daily output 導(dǎo)致產(chǎn)量下降 result in a
diminished output
現(xiàn)在我們地區(qū)的糧食產(chǎn)量相當(dāng)于1970年的3倍。
The grain production (= output)in our area now is three times as great as that of 1970.
6.Compared with … , …
與去年相比,今年13項(xiàng)主要產(chǎn)品的產(chǎn)量都有大幅度增長(zhǎng)。The factory has an output of 9 million cigarettes daily.
Compared with that of last year,the output of 13 main products (= items) this year has increased to a great extent.
7.There is (was) a rapid rise in … be on the rise
has been sharp increase on the increase
sudden decrease on the decline
steady decline
gradual fall
slow drop
slight
最近幾年來(lái)這個(gè)地區(qū)的棉花產(chǎn)量有了迅速增長(zhǎng)。
The cotton output in this area has increased rapidly in the past few years.
——“結(jié)尾”段落中常用的句型:
1. In my opinion, … 2. Personally, I … 3. In short (= In brief), …
4. In conclusion, … 5.As far as I’m concerned, … 6. To conclude , it seems clear that …
至于說(shuō)到我,我贊成前一種觀點(diǎn)。所以,我的結(jié)論是,只要我們堅(jiān)持正確的東西,改正錯(cuò)誤的東西,我們就一定能成功。
As far as I’m concerned ,I’m in favour of the former view.Therefore,my conclusion is that we are certain to succeed as long as we stick to what is right and correct what is wrong.

