高考英語寫作中的七類一致性錯誤

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    一、比較對象不一致
    在英語的比較句型中,兩個待比較的對象應(yīng)具有可比性,這也就是語法上說的比較對象的一致性問題。有的同學(xué)在進行英語寫作時,經(jīng)常忽略這個一致性問題,從而寫出一些不合英語習(xí)慣的句子。如:
    誤:The population of China is much larger than Japan.
    正:The population of China is much larger than that of Japan.
    析:the population of China 應(yīng)與 the population of China比較,而不能與 Japan 比較,即誤句主要錯在比較對象不一致。注重,為避免重復(fù),正句中的the population of China用that of China代替。
    誤:The style of the new building is different from the old one.
    正:The style of the new building is different from that of the old one.
    正:The new building is different from the old one in style.
    析:用different表示比較時,也要注重比較對象的一致性。就本題而言,新的 style 應(yīng)與舊的 style 比,或新的building與舊的 building 比,而不能將兩者混在一起。
    二、主謂不一致
    在英語中,句子的主語和謂語動詞在人稱和數(shù)上必須一致。由于受漢語的影響,許多同學(xué)在寫作時經(jīng)常忽略句子的主謂一致關(guān)系,從而造成錯誤。如:
    誤:Anyone can borrow the books, and it cost nothing to borrow them.
    正:Anyone can borrow the books and it costs nothing to borrow them.
    析:第一個分句的時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時,故第二個分句中的動詞cost不可能是動詞的過去式,且由于句子主語是it,故謂語動詞應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時costs,而不能用過去式cost。
    誤:He as well as his parents have been to the Great Wall.
    正:He as well as his parents has been to the Great Wall.
    析:當(dāng)作主語的名詞或代詞后有as well as, in addition to, including, with, along with, together with, but, except等引導(dǎo)的成分時,謂語動詞的單復(fù)數(shù)仍由其前的主語決定。再如:My English teacher together with his family is from England.
    誤:Not only John but also I are going to Shanghai next week.
    正:Not only John but also I am going to Shanghai next week.
    析:在由not only…but also…, not just…but…, or, either…or…, neither…nor…連接主語的句子中及在there be句型中,謂語動詞的單復(fù)數(shù)按就近原則處理,即按與謂語動詞最靠近的那個主語來確定謂語動詞的單復(fù)數(shù)形式。如:Neither you nor she is a teacher.
    三、單復(fù)數(shù)不一致
    名詞有可數(shù)和不可數(shù)之分,而可數(shù)名詞又有單數(shù)與復(fù)數(shù)之區(qū)。在英語寫作中,名詞單復(fù)數(shù)問題也是許多同學(xué)經(jīng)常忽略的一個問題。如:
    誤:On the way home I took a lot of picture because since the scenery was so beautiful. I’ll have them developed this afternoon.
    正:On the way home I took a lot of pictures because the scenery was so beautiful. I’ll have them developed this afternoon.
    析: take picture中的picture為可數(shù)名詞,根據(jù)下文中的them可知,此處應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式pictures。
    誤:He has been working so hard recently that he has got good mark in all his subjects.
    正:He has been working so hard recently that he has got good marks in all his subjects.
    析:從后面的subjects來看,mark應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式,說的是在各科考試中都取得了好分?jǐn)?shù)。
    四、非謂語形式不一致
    動詞的非謂語形式一直是英語學(xué)習(xí)中的一個難點,而動詞非謂語形式的一致性問題更是許多同學(xué)經(jīng)常忽略的一個問題。如:
    誤:To know what is good and doing what is right are two different things.
    正:To know what is good and to do what is right are two different things.
    析:由and 連接的兩部分為并列主語,前一部分用不定式結(jié)構(gòu),后一部分也應(yīng)用相同的結(jié)構(gòu)。
    誤:Fishing is his favourite hobby, and to collect coins is also his hobby.
    正:Fishing is his favourite hobby, and collecting coins is also his hobby.
    析:誤句的問題就在于句子不平行(不一致),因為and前后都為句子,按英語習(xí)慣其結(jié)構(gòu)形式應(yīng)該一致。
    五、代詞不一致
    代詞一致的問題主要存在于性別一致、數(shù)的一致(單復(fù)數(shù)問題)和代詞的格等方面。如:
    誤:There are forty students in our class, and thirty of them are boys.
    正:There are forty students in our class, and thirty of us are boys.
    析:從前一分句可看出,本句談?wù)摰氖恰拔覀儼唷钡那闆r,故后一分句也應(yīng)用第一人稱。
    誤:Once one has money, we can do what he wants (to do)
    正:Once one has money, he can do what he wants (to do)
    析:誤句中前面提到的是one has money,面又有what he wants,we與前后代詞不一致,故應(yīng)改為he。
    六、搭配不一致
    搭配不一致主要指句中的固定搭配應(yīng)保持完整并與上下文一致。如:
    誤:He worked so hard as he could catch up with his classmates.
    正:He worked so hard that he could catch up with his classmates.
    析:從固定形式上看,有so…as…,so …that… 等。但從句意上看,此處應(yīng)該用so…that…,才能保持句意及結(jié)構(gòu)的一致。
    誤:I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.
    正:I was so tired that I fell asleep the moment my head touched the pillow.
    析:此處the moment是名詞用作連詞,表示“一……就……”,其前不能加at。
    七、邏輯主語不一致
    按英語習(xí)慣,當(dāng)非謂語動詞作狀語時,其邏輯主語應(yīng)與句子主語保持一致,否則便會造成錯誤。如:
    誤:After reading the letter, tears ran down his cheeks.
    正:After he read the letter, tears ran down his cheeks.
    正:After reading the letter, he burst into tears.
    析:after 引導(dǎo)動名詞作狀語時,要注重其邏輯主語與句子主語保 持一致。
    誤:Given more time, the work could have been done better.
    正:Given more time, we could have done the work better.
    析:在上句中,given 是 give(給)的過去分詞,given more time為過去分詞短語,在句中用作狀語,表示條件,相當(dāng)于 If we had been given more time。按照英語語法,分詞短語用作狀語,它的邏輯主語必須與句子主語保持一致