新四級作文變動不大，仍重在考察考生的語言綜合運用能力，在備考中一定要重視基本詞匯，句型的綜合運用，模仿揣摩范文，研究真題。另外多從閱讀中吸取養(yǎng)份，每周保證一到兩篇作文，自己改也可以和學(xué)友們互相改，總結(jié)吸收。這樣才能穩(wěn)扎穩(wěn)打提高實力！在這里我們就從詞句段點滴做起，妙筆生花，笑傲四級。
NO.I ---英語作文之選詞策略
作文的第一環(huán)節(jié)是選詞,英語不像漢語那樣的選詞標準,后者更偏重文采,而英語作文講究平易,樸實,簡潔,堆砌辭藻不僅不能得高分,反而讓人覺得啰嗦. 漢語中多概略化的詞(general words),而英語中要求具體,明晰(specific & clear words )。
A.概略化與具體化
e.g ：作文中用的較多的概略化的詞,如good,bad，其實有很多具體化的詞可以代替它們，如:
1. It is beneficial to do physical exercises every day.(代替good )
2. It the weather is favorable,we are going to climb the mountain.(代替good)
3. This method has both positive and negative effects.(代替good &bad)
B 重復(fù)與簡潔
同樣的意思如果用在文章中的不同位置，就要考慮換詞了哦。如：“很流行”就有become popular, enjoy great popularity,gain increasingly popularity.etc..
e.g:Education is important to one’s career.Most of the young people hope to get higher education at college.
However,the tuiton for college education is quite high,it is hard for some students to afford the money.How can one get enough money to pay the tuition?
In fact,there are many ways to solve the problem.....besides these two ways ,one can get loan from the bank.
Among the three means mentioned above,I don’t think the second way is quite good.
這是一篇作文的三個不同片段。大家仔細讀會發(fā)現(xiàn)“get”出現(xiàn)了三次。所以老師的修改建議里，第一個和第三個分別用“acquire,obtain”代替。
在很多情況下我們會有意識到地避免重復(fù)名詞但副詞和形容詞的重復(fù)卻沒有引起重視，：歷史古跡/重要轉(zhuǎn)折點/寶貴財富，這些常被我們不假思索地寫成“historical relic,important turning point,valuable treasure”事實上，它們的意思都暗含在后一個詞當中
亮點詞匯--DIVERSITY?。ㄓ涀∨叮?BR> 網(wǎng)絡(luò): the net / the Internet / the web / the virtual world / the electronic world / the cyber world
地球: earth / the Planet earth / our Mother Planet / global village
電腦: the computer / the machine / the device
校園: the campus / the Ivory Tower / the relatively isolated place
社會: the society / the real world
中國: China / the Middle Kingdom / this ancient country
隨著...的發(fā)展: As... evolves
...變的越來越重要.. is becoming increasingly vital
...變的越來越普遍.. is becoming increasingly prevalent
人們對...越來越重視 People have a growing respect for sth.
人們重視/看中/珍愛某物 place a high value on sth.
增強競爭力 sharpen one’s edge
使某人具有優(yōu)勢力 give sb. the edge
...很重要 is vital / crucial / essential
起...重要作用 play a central role in
觀點類:
對...有好處 ... pays off / it pays to .. / sth. is beneficial (rewarding)
對...有壞處... have a negative impact on / do harm (damage) to sth.
好 top / superior students / favorable impact / positive impression
壞 poor / inferior quality / faulty goods / negative impression
促進/提高/增強/改善 give a boost to ，enhance
NO.I ---英語作文之選詞策略
作文的第一環(huán)節(jié)是選詞,英語不像漢語那樣的選詞標準,后者更偏重文采,而英語作文講究平易,樸實,簡潔,堆砌辭藻不僅不能得高分,反而讓人覺得啰嗦. 漢語中多概略化的詞(general words),而英語中要求具體,明晰(specific & clear words )。
A.概略化與具體化
e.g ：作文中用的較多的概略化的詞,如good,bad，其實有很多具體化的詞可以代替它們，如:
1. It is beneficial to do physical exercises every day.(代替good )
2. It the weather is favorable,we are going to climb the mountain.(代替good)
3. This method has both positive and negative effects.(代替good &bad)
B 重復(fù)與簡潔
同樣的意思如果用在文章中的不同位置，就要考慮換詞了哦。如：“很流行”就有become popular, enjoy great popularity,gain increasingly popularity.etc..
e.g:Education is important to one’s career.Most of the young people hope to get higher education at college.
However,the tuiton for college education is quite high,it is hard for some students to afford the money.How can one get enough money to pay the tuition?
In fact,there are many ways to solve the problem.....besides these two ways ,one can get loan from the bank.
Among the three means mentioned above,I don’t think the second way is quite good.
這是一篇作文的三個不同片段。大家仔細讀會發(fā)現(xiàn)“get”出現(xiàn)了三次。所以老師的修改建議里，第一個和第三個分別用“acquire,obtain”代替。
在很多情況下我們會有意識到地避免重復(fù)名詞但副詞和形容詞的重復(fù)卻沒有引起重視，：歷史古跡/重要轉(zhuǎn)折點/寶貴財富，這些常被我們不假思索地寫成“historical relic,important turning point,valuable treasure”事實上，它們的意思都暗含在后一個詞當中
亮點詞匯--DIVERSITY?。ㄓ涀∨叮?BR> 網(wǎng)絡(luò): the net / the Internet / the web / the virtual world / the electronic world / the cyber world
地球: earth / the Planet earth / our Mother Planet / global village
電腦: the computer / the machine / the device
校園: the campus / the Ivory Tower / the relatively isolated place
社會: the society / the real world
中國: China / the Middle Kingdom / this ancient country
隨著...的發(fā)展: As... evolves
...變的越來越重要.. is becoming increasingly vital
...變的越來越普遍.. is becoming increasingly prevalent
人們對...越來越重視 People have a growing respect for sth.
人們重視/看中/珍愛某物 place a high value on sth.
增強競爭力 sharpen one’s edge
使某人具有優(yōu)勢力 give sb. the edge
...很重要 is vital / crucial / essential
起...重要作用 play a central role in
觀點類:
對...有好處 ... pays off / it pays to .. / sth. is beneficial (rewarding)
對...有壞處... have a negative impact on / do harm (damage) to sth.
好 top / superior students / favorable impact / positive impression
壞 poor / inferior quality / faulty goods / negative impression
促進/提高/增強/改善 give a boost to ，enhance