08年6月四級(jí)寫作預(yù)測(cè)-收入差距

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Income Gap. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
    1. 有些人認(rèn)為收入差距的存在是合理的;
    2. 有些人認(rèn)為收入差距的存在是不合理的
    3. 收入差距對(duì)社會(huì)的影響
    ●審題概述●
    議論文,根據(jù)題目要求文章可分為三點(diǎn):收入差距的合理性;收入差距的不合理性;對(duì)社會(huì)的影響。在敘述第一、二點(diǎn)時(shí),可適當(dāng)?shù)氐恼归_一兩個(gè)小點(diǎn)。注意各點(diǎn)之間的銜接,以及論證的邏輯。
    ● 范文●
    Income Gap
    ①There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap now. Some people hold that the gap is natural because it ②reflects different contributions that different people make in their work. ③In their view, those people with high income work hard and long. Besides, these people bring high ④efficiency, and create more wealth. Accordingly, they deserve high pay.
    ①On the other hand, there are always some people who view this gap negatively. They believe that a lot of crimes happen as a result of this income gap. Some people make so little from their work that they ②risk taking criminal acts to get rich. In fact, experts have long found out that most cases of crime are directly related to low income. There is ③another point to ④back up a negative view against income gap. For most people, income gap may destroy the satisfaction that they obtain from work.
    ①As anything has two sides, so has the problem of income gap. Personally, I believe that this gap may ②motivate people to compete better in job market. When this gap is growing too wide, however, our government should make some policies to ③get rid of its negative consequences.
    ◇第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng):
    收入差距的合理性
    ◇語言點(diǎn)提示:
    1 There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap: 直接點(diǎn)題
    2 reflect 意為“反映”
    3 in one's view 意為“在某人看來”(分析觀點(diǎn)時(shí)常用詞組)
    4 efficiency 意為“效率”
    ◇第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng):
    收入差距的不合理性
    ◇語言點(diǎn)提示
    1. On the other hand:意為“另一點(diǎn)、另一方面”(提出相反觀點(diǎn),與上文銜接)
    2. risk doing something 意為“冒險(xiǎn)做某事”
    3. another point: 提出另一小點(diǎn)
    4. back up 意為“支持”
    ◇第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng):
    收入差距的影響
    ◇語言點(diǎn)提示
    1. As anything has two sides, so……… 議論文常用句式
    2. motivate:意為“激勵(lì),刺激”
    3. get rid of:意為“擺脫,除去”