舉例、比較、換言--作文主體段落三大殺手锏

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一、舉實(shí)例
    In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they film him or her.
    二、做比較
    方法:寫完一個(gè)要點(diǎn),比較與之相似的;又寫完一個(gè)要點(diǎn),再比較與之相反的;
    相似的比較:in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
    相反的比較:on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
    三、換言之
    I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
    I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.
    四、結(jié)尾
    結(jié)尾需要靈活創(chuàng)造。一般的習(xí)慣是,一些記敘文和描寫文經(jīng)常采用自然結(jié)尾的方法;但說(shuō)理性和邏輯性較強(qiáng)的說(shuō)明文和議論文則往往都有結(jié)束語(yǔ),以便使文章首尾呼應(yīng),結(jié)構(gòu)完整。
    1. 首尾呼應(yīng),畫龍點(diǎn)睛
    After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away, but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of others.
    2. 重復(fù)主題句
    3. 用反問(wèn)結(jié)尾
    How far can we go if the current situation is not to be changed?
    4. 指明方向,激勵(lì)讀者
    As we have said above, sports can be of great value. They not only make people live happily but also help people to learn virtues and do their work better. A sound mind is in a sound body. Let's go in for sports.
    結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式:
    一. 結(jié)論
    Obviously(此為過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
    二. 建議
    Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.(虛擬語(yǔ)氣用得經(jīng)典)
    更多句型:
    Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
    Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
    檢查四個(gè)重點(diǎn)部位,把好最后一關(guān)
    1) 是否切題(主題句)
    2) 是否連貫
    檢驗(yàn)的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)主要是句子是否通順,該用連接詞的地方用了沒有,以及所用的連接詞是否合適。
    3) 是否有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤
    主謂是否一致,動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、語(yǔ)氣的使用是否正確,詞組的搭配是否合乎習(xí)慣。為避免不必要的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤,對(duì)把握性不大的詞組、句型絕不要用。而應(yīng)使用那些自己熟悉的詞組、句型來(lái)表達(dá)相同或相近的意思。
    4)是否有大小寫、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤
    在這些細(xì)枝末節(jié)上,謹(jǐn)慎細(xì)心地處理,無(wú)疑會(huì)進(jìn)一步提高文章的整體質(zhì)量。在檢查、改錯(cuò)的過(guò)程中,切忌亂涂亂抹。保持卷面清潔,會(huì)給閱卷者留下好印象。
    Advantages and Disadvantages of…題型
    套路:
    Nowadays, …plays an important part/role in … //… has become a household word. Like everything else, it has both merits and demerits. Generally speaking, the positive aspects can be listed as follows:
    First,…. In addition,…. Above all,….
    But every coin has two sides. // But every advantage has its disadvantage. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with,…. To make matters worse,…. Worst of all,…. But obviously, the advantages of … outweigh its disadvantages, which speaks for its popularity.
    Application Letters
    1. Express your interest in the post you are applying for give reasons for your application.
    2. State personal qualifications and experience related to the post.
    3. References//Requests for further information.
    圖表:
    要對(duì)圖表進(jìn)行描寫和討論,首先要看懂圖表,弄清其反映的問(wèn)題或現(xiàn)象。注意:
    1. 圖表的類型:
    pie chart(表示各種事物在總數(shù)中所占比例)
    line graph(表示一種事物的上升或下降趨勢(shì))
    bar graph(表示幾種事物在同一時(shí)期上升或下降的情況)
    table(表示多種事物之間的關(guān)系)
    2. 抓住主要數(shù)據(jù),反映根本問(wèn)題:
    ①借助題目和要求 ②變化明顯的數(shù)字
    3. 掌握一些數(shù)字表達(dá)法:
    ① In the year…, it rose/increased/soared/jumped//decreased/dropped/fell by …percent
    ② In comparison with…, the figure/percentage has nearly/more than doubled/tripled/quadrupled.
    ③ By the end of the last decade, as many as three quarters/75 percent of/three out of four/three in four college graduates as against/as opposed to 1990, had …