四六級(jí)考試越來越使模板無用武之地，閱卷老師在閱卷的過程中多的是關(guān)
注同學(xué)們
的用詞和句型的使用。
高分作文標(biāo)志
1 ：四級(jí)120-150 字；六級(jí)150 —180 字；
2 、是否長短句交叉；
3 、用詞是否恰當(dāng)，準(zhǔn)確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞
；
4 、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞；
下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng)：
1.適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)代替主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí)，句子開頭不要總是用we
/ I （比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be
paid to.）舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的后一段：It is ，therefore ，
high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service
industry like that. Thus， its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放
在主語、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入語放在中間，一般
放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。
比如說： Other individuals， however， take the attitude that …
3.一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的代替太寬泛的。（考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)
good， bad， many ， thing， think，
people， opinion等等）比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper， approaches
代替ways， implement代替carry out ， sharpen one‘s competitive edge代
替enhance one ’s competitiveness （提高某物競爭力）
下面舉一篇我南京六級(jí)班上一位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文（14分）的例子，看看他
是如何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換
和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I By Simmy
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought
me a computer as birthday present ， which exerted a tremendous fascination
on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information
i had expected，and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night
I was sleepless ， feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替換 very
thrilling 替換 exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in
sth.
google替換 search
an army of替換 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of
computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology，
computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing
to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged
by them ， in large measure ！
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個(gè)精彩句型，用來描述在某
個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情；
Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular
Coincident with …非常地道的詞匯，表達(dá)“與…一致”的意思，替換 With
…
Advancement 替換 development
Pour into （ flood into / swarm into）替換 enter into
Current （ currently）替換 now
Appeal to sb. 替換 sb. be interested in sth.
Growing individuals 替換 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say經(jīng)典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的
For a start ， we can ， freely ， search desired information at any
moment . Little by little ， our knowledge will be well enriched， and
our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally， we can get huge
recreations online by chatting， playing games， or delivering email.
For a start 替換 To begin with
We can， freely ， search 用了插入語的寫作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched ， and our horizons will be greatly
broadened.用了非常精彩的被動(dòng)
Additionally替換 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替換 send
There is no denying that， however， computers can function in the
disservice of human beings， in a way ， especially the growing violence ，
*** ， porn pictures， AV-films emerging on the screen， which leads quiet
a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that， however， computers can function in the
disservice of human beings，這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)精彩之處，首先There is no denying
that這個(gè)句型，還有however 作為插入語， function in the disservice of替
換 do harm to
Emerging代替 appearing（ fading 代替 disappearing ）
Net citizen 網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do
play a positive role in the development of people' lives， despite a slice
of unfavorable impacts. We should ，therefore ， take advantage of the
fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds替換 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play ，do強(qiáng)調(diào)
Positive替換 important / good 等
A slice of替換 a part of
Unfavorable 替換 bad
Impacts 替換 effects / influences
We should ， therefore， take advantage of…使用插入語
Fruits（而且fruits用的非常形象， merits/ virtues）替換 advantage
（defects 替換 disadvantage ）
Facet 替換 aspect
各位同學(xué)，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點(diǎn)，作文怎么會(huì)不得高分呢！
以下是30個(gè)經(jīng)典的替換詞，各位同學(xué)可以參考一下。（登錄即可觀看，歡
迎游客免費(fèi)注冊(cè)。）
1.individuals ，characters， folks代替（people，persons ）
2 ： positive ， favorable， rosy （美好的），promising
（有希望的），perfect ， pleasurable， excellent， outstanding代替
good
3 ：dreadful， unfavorable， poor ， adverse（有害的）代替bad
如果bad 做表語，可以有be less impressive代替
eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games，
enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.
When it approaches to graduation，as a result ， they find their academic
records are less impressive.
4.（an army of， an ocean of， a sea of ， a multitude of ，many，
if not most ）代替many.
注：用many， if not most一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。
Eg. Many individuals， if not most， harbor the idea that …。同理
用most， if not all ，代替most.
5 ： a slice of ， quiet a few， several代替some
6 ：harbor the idea that， take the attitude that ，
hold the view that， it is widely shared that ，
it is universally acknowledged that ）替think
（因?yàn)槭菚嬲Z，所以要加that）
7 ：affair，business，matter代替thing
8 ： shared 代 common
9.reap huge fruits代替get much benefit）
10：for my part ，from my own perspective 代替 in my opinion
11：Increasing（ly），growing 代替more and more （注意沒有g(shù)rowingly
這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用increasing/growing. 修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.
Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.
Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
12.little if anything ，或little or nothing 代替hardly
13……benefitial rewarding代替helpful be beneficial of
14.shopper，client，consumer，purchaser ，代替customer
15.exceedingly，extremely 代替very
16.hardly unnecessary ， hardly inevitable……代替 necessary，
inevitable
17.sth appeals to sb， sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb代
替sb take interest in
18.capture one's attention代替attract one's attention.
19.facet，demension ，sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ，be suggesteive of ，be fearful of 代 indicate
，suggest，fear
21.give rise to ， lead to， result in， trigger代替cause.
22. There are several reasons behind sth代替……reasons for sth
23.desire 代替want.
24.pour attention into代替pay attention to
25.bear in mind that代替remember
26. enjoy ， possess代替have（注意process 是過程的意思）
27. interaction 代替communication
28.frown on sth 代替 be against ， disagree with sth
29.to name only a few ， as an example代替 for example
30. next to/virtually impossible，代替nearly impossible
注同學(xué)們
的用詞和句型的使用。
高分作文標(biāo)志
1 ：四級(jí)120-150 字；六級(jí)150 —180 字；
2 、是否長短句交叉；
3 、用詞是否恰當(dāng)，準(zhǔn)確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞
；
4 、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞；
下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng)：
1.適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)代替主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí)，句子開頭不要總是用we
/ I （比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be
paid to.）舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的后一段：It is ，therefore ，
high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service
industry like that. Thus， its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放
在主語、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入語放在中間，一般
放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。
比如說： Other individuals， however， take the attitude that …
3.一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的代替太寬泛的。（考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)
good， bad， many ， thing， think，
people， opinion等等）比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper， approaches
代替ways， implement代替carry out ， sharpen one‘s competitive edge代
替enhance one ’s competitiveness （提高某物競爭力）
下面舉一篇我南京六級(jí)班上一位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文（14分）的例子，看看他
是如何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換
和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I By Simmy
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought
me a computer as birthday present ， which exerted a tremendous fascination
on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information
i had expected，and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night
I was sleepless ， feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替換 very
thrilling 替換 exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in
sth.
google替換 search
an army of替換 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of
computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology，
computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing
to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged
by them ， in large measure ！
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個(gè)精彩句型，用來描述在某
個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情；
Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular
Coincident with …非常地道的詞匯，表達(dá)“與…一致”的意思，替換 With
…
Advancement 替換 development
Pour into （ flood into / swarm into）替換 enter into
Current （ currently）替換 now
Appeal to sb. 替換 sb. be interested in sth.
Growing individuals 替換 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say經(jīng)典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的
For a start ， we can ， freely ， search desired information at any
moment . Little by little ， our knowledge will be well enriched， and
our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally， we can get huge
recreations online by chatting， playing games， or delivering email.
For a start 替換 To begin with
We can， freely ， search 用了插入語的寫作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched ， and our horizons will be greatly
broadened.用了非常精彩的被動(dòng)
Additionally替換 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替換 send
There is no denying that， however， computers can function in the
disservice of human beings， in a way ， especially the growing violence ，
*** ， porn pictures， AV-films emerging on the screen， which leads quiet
a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that， however， computers can function in the
disservice of human beings，這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)精彩之處，首先There is no denying
that這個(gè)句型，還有however 作為插入語， function in the disservice of替
換 do harm to
Emerging代替 appearing（ fading 代替 disappearing ）
Net citizen 網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do
play a positive role in the development of people' lives， despite a slice
of unfavorable impacts. We should ，therefore ， take advantage of the
fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds替換 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play ，do強(qiáng)調(diào)
Positive替換 important / good 等
A slice of替換 a part of
Unfavorable 替換 bad
Impacts 替換 effects / influences
We should ， therefore， take advantage of…使用插入語
Fruits（而且fruits用的非常形象， merits/ virtues）替換 advantage
（defects 替換 disadvantage ）
Facet 替換 aspect
各位同學(xué)，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點(diǎn)，作文怎么會(huì)不得高分呢！
以下是30個(gè)經(jīng)典的替換詞，各位同學(xué)可以參考一下。（登錄即可觀看，歡
迎游客免費(fèi)注冊(cè)。）
1.individuals ，characters， folks代替（people，persons ）
2 ： positive ， favorable， rosy （美好的），promising
（有希望的），perfect ， pleasurable， excellent， outstanding代替
good
3 ：dreadful， unfavorable， poor ， adverse（有害的）代替bad
如果bad 做表語，可以有be less impressive代替
eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games，
enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.
When it approaches to graduation，as a result ， they find their academic
records are less impressive.
4.（an army of， an ocean of， a sea of ， a multitude of ，many，
if not most ）代替many.
注：用many， if not most一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。
Eg. Many individuals， if not most， harbor the idea that …。同理
用most， if not all ，代替most.
5 ： a slice of ， quiet a few， several代替some
6 ：harbor the idea that， take the attitude that ，
hold the view that， it is widely shared that ，
it is universally acknowledged that ）替think
（因?yàn)槭菚嬲Z，所以要加that）
7 ：affair，business，matter代替thing
8 ： shared 代 common
9.reap huge fruits代替get much benefit）
10：for my part ，from my own perspective 代替 in my opinion
11：Increasing（ly），growing 代替more and more （注意沒有g(shù)rowingly
這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用increasing/growing. 修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.
Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.
Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
12.little if anything ，或little or nothing 代替hardly
13……benefitial rewarding代替helpful be beneficial of
14.shopper，client，consumer，purchaser ，代替customer
15.exceedingly，extremely 代替very
16.hardly unnecessary ， hardly inevitable……代替 necessary，
inevitable
17.sth appeals to sb， sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb代
替sb take interest in
18.capture one's attention代替attract one's attention.
19.facet，demension ，sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ，be suggesteive of ，be fearful of 代 indicate
，suggest，fear
21.give rise to ， lead to， result in， trigger代替cause.
22. There are several reasons behind sth代替……reasons for sth
23.desire 代替want.
24.pour attention into代替pay attention to
25.bear in mind that代替remember
26. enjoy ， possess代替have（注意process 是過程的意思）
27. interaction 代替communication
28.frown on sth 代替 be against ， disagree with sth
29.to name only a few ， as an example代替 for example
30. next to/virtually impossible，代替nearly impossible