不要總以有生命的名詞和人稱代詞開頭（受漢語表達習慣的影響, to use I, People and We, 開頭）；
• 不要千篇一律的使用主動語態(tài)；
• 不要總是用（如果）（因為）（當）等口語意味較重的句子，要注意使用書面語體的句子；
• 不要對動詞過分依賴，要學會用動詞名詞化來表達；
• 不用總是用肯定句來表達，要學會用否定句子表達肯定的意思；
• 恰當?shù)氖褂门疟染浜推叫芯?BR> • Many people think birth control is quite necessary in China.
• We are making great efforts to improve our English.
• If you compare bicycles with cars carefully, you will find bicycles are superior to cars.
• If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get good results.
• The style. of living has become more and more popular and accepted by more and more young people.
• Every young boy and girl wants to earn a little money to help cover higher college cost.
• Whenever you pick up a newspaper, you will always find advertisement
• 不要千篇一律的使用主動語態(tài)；
• 不要總是用（如果）（因為）（當）等口語意味較重的句子，要注意使用書面語體的句子；
• 不要對動詞過分依賴，要學會用動詞名詞化來表達；
• 不用總是用肯定句來表達，要學會用否定句子表達肯定的意思；
• 恰當?shù)氖褂门疟染浜推叫芯?BR> • Many people think birth control is quite necessary in China.
• We are making great efforts to improve our English.
• If you compare bicycles with cars carefully, you will find bicycles are superior to cars.
• If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get good results.
• The style. of living has become more and more popular and accepted by more and more young people.
• Every young boy and girl wants to earn a little money to help cover higher college cost.
• Whenever you pick up a newspaper, you will always find advertisement