「要求」
寫一篇日記，記敘下午在回家的路上，見到一個(gè)迷路的男孩，他正站在一車站前哭泣。你上前安慰他，弄清他的住址后送他回了家。他父母都很感動(dòng)。盡管到家很晚，你仍然感到高興，因?yàn)槟阕隽四阍撟龅氖隆?BR> 「范文」
September 20th， Friday Sunny.
This afternoon， on my way home from school， I saw a boy standing in front of a bus station， crying sorrowfully. It was obvious that he had lost his way. His families must be worrying about him， I thought. I went over to comfort him till he stopped weeping. After finding out his address， I sent him home. His parents were deeply moved when they saw us enter their house. They thanked me over and over again. Though I got home very late， I felt very happy because I had done what I should do.
「評(píng)語(yǔ)」
本文記敘要素完整，心理活動(dòng)描寫也得體恰當(dāng)。沒有將漢字提示機(jī)械地譯成英文，而是寫得語(yǔ)句連貫，表意深刻。
寫一篇日記，記敘下午在回家的路上，見到一個(gè)迷路的男孩，他正站在一車站前哭泣。你上前安慰他，弄清他的住址后送他回了家。他父母都很感動(dòng)。盡管到家很晚，你仍然感到高興，因?yàn)槟阕隽四阍撟龅氖隆?BR> 「范文」
September 20th， Friday Sunny.
This afternoon， on my way home from school， I saw a boy standing in front of a bus station， crying sorrowfully. It was obvious that he had lost his way. His families must be worrying about him， I thought. I went over to comfort him till he stopped weeping. After finding out his address， I sent him home. His parents were deeply moved when they saw us enter their house. They thanked me over and over again. Though I got home very late， I felt very happy because I had done what I should do.
「評(píng)語(yǔ)」
本文記敘要素完整，心理活動(dòng)描寫也得體恰當(dāng)。沒有將漢字提示機(jī)械地譯成英文，而是寫得語(yǔ)句連貫，表意深刻。