Directions 3
Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the drawing,
2. analyze the reasons why it is difficult for university graduates to find a job, and
3. point out the possible ways to solve the problem.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
審題：
《招員工七名》這篇文章關(guān)注的是當(dāng)前重要的就業(yè)難問題。它的要求非常明確，在描述圖畫后，先給出原因，再給出解決辦法，這是非常常見的文章模式。
Sample:
The recruiting fair in the above drawing is filled with young graduates each holding a pile of resumes in their hands. Around a desk in the front of the drawing, there are dozens of students waiting to hand in their resumes but only seven are wanted by the company as is written on a board beside the desk.
It is clear that the drawer wants to draw our attention to the difficulty that today’s university graduates are faced with in finding a job. In fact, in many universities and colleges, the employment rate of graduates is lower than 50% and much fewer can find a satisfactory job. The reasons for this situation can be listed as follows. In the first place, the enrolment expansion of universities and colleges has resulted in a great increase in the number of graduates every year, which has exceeded the increase in positions in the job market. What makes things worse is that quite a lot of students like to choose those hot majors when they enter the university and to look for jobs in big developed cities when they graduate. So it is even more difficult for them to find a suitable job.
From my point of view, the society and the graduates need to join their hands in the endeavor to solve this problem. On the one hand, the society should continue to focus on economic development so as to provide bigger employment chances for the graduates. On the other hand, the students should choose the majors that they are really interested in and well capable of and broaden their horizon when looking for jobs. Only in this way can they gain larger space for their future career.
點(diǎn)評：
該文分為三段，第一段描述圖畫，第二段對此問題進(jìn)行了小結(jié)，而后給出了原因。第三段提出了解決問題的辦法。
第一段共用兩句話，第一句是遠(yuǎn)景，第二句由遠(yuǎn)及近，展示了求職者之多與實(shí)際招聘人數(shù)之少。第二段共分六句話，前兩句總結(jié)了大學(xué)畢業(yè)生就業(yè)難這一情況，第三句話是原因類的模板句。第四句話說擴(kuò)招帶來的影響。第五句話和第六句話說大學(xué)生選擇熱門的專業(yè)，使就業(yè)難的矛盾更加突出。第三段共分四句話，第一句話是總括句，說社會和畢業(yè)生應(yīng)攜起手來解決問題，而后分兩句話分別說明。最后一句話是總結(jié)，使用了語氣強(qiáng)烈的倒裝句。
心得：
這是?？嫉哪Ｊ?，望大家用心。
Directions 4
Study the following table carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the table,
2. suggest possible solutions to the problem of the heavy burden of university tuition in China.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
國家大學(xué)年平均學(xué)費(fèi)國民人均年收入比值
美國4，700美元35，000美元1/8
英國1，500英鎊15，000英鎊1/10
中國7，500元7，500元1
審題：
在審題的環(huán)節(jié)中，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)將讀圖表(圖畫)和看提綱有機(jī)地結(jié)合起來。有的時(shí)候，提綱中會把文章的主題直接給出來，這時(shí)我們文章的整體布局就會容易得多。在這道題的提綱中，就出現(xiàn)了“中國大學(xué)學(xué)費(fèi)負(fù)擔(dān)沉重的問題”的字樣，這就是該文的主題，我們的文章應(yīng)該圍繞它展開。
Sample:
From the above table we can see that in America and Britain the ratio of average annual tuition of universities to gross national income per capita is about 1 to 10, but astonishingly that in China is 1. That is to say, the burden of university tuition on Chinese families is nearly ten times heavier than that on American or British families. As a matter of fact, most Chinese families feel it difficult to afford the high tuition of their children, and some absolutely cannot afford it, which has received more and more concern from all over the country.
In order to solve this problem, I strongly suggest the following solutions. First and foremost, it is a must to reduce the cost of higher education. We need to cut down the staff in universities, most of whom now have a disproportionately large number of administrators. The now widespread corruption should also be eliminated in universities, such as unnecessary tours and banquets at public expense. Moreover, much importance should be attached to the reform of management system of higher education. The national government should not only increase financial investment in higher education but also optimize the distribution of such money.
To sum up, it is high time to pay enough attention to the problem of the heavy burden of university tuition in our country, and to solve it a comprehensive educational reform is essential.
點(diǎn)評：
該文共分三段，第一段是描述表格，第二段是給出解決辦法，第三段是總結(jié)。
第一段是對表格進(jìn)行描述——這時(shí)我們不一定要把每個數(shù)據(jù)都描述出來，而是要抓住問題的關(guān)鍵。這個表格的關(guān)鍵就是體現(xiàn)我國大學(xué)學(xué)費(fèi)太高，依據(jù)就是學(xué)費(fèi)與國民人均年收入之比。美國與英國處于差不多的水平，所以放在一起說就可以了。該段共分三句話，第一句將比例描述出來，第二句作出比較——中國家庭負(fù)擔(dān)的大學(xué)學(xué)費(fèi)是英美國家的十倍之多。第三句進(jìn)一步說明我國大部分家庭感覺負(fù)擔(dān)較重，有些家庭根本就負(fù)擔(dān)不起。
第二段提出解決辦法，第一句是模板句，之后分兩方面來說。第一方面說的是減少高等教育的成本，分為兩個方面，一是減員增效，二是消除腐敗。第二方面說的是高教管理體制的改革。國家應(yīng)加強(qiáng)高等教育的投資，并合理配置這些資金。
最后一段是總結(jié)，說解決大學(xué)學(xué)費(fèi)成為沉重負(fù)擔(dān)問題正值其時(shí)，全面改革勢在必行。
心得：
提綱中如果出現(xiàn)文章主題，一定要把握住，這直接了文章的謀篇布局。
描述圖表時(shí)不一定要面面俱到，只要抓住重點(diǎn)即可。
寫原因或解決辦法的段落時(shí)條理一定要清楚，一般分為三點(diǎn)(也有兩點(diǎn)或四點(diǎn)的情況)，不一定是權(quán)威的，我們并非是專門研究該問題的專家，閱卷老師也不會太苛求，只要符合情理即可。關(guān)鍵是語言表達(dá)一定要準(zhǔn)確，如果要拿高分就一定要有出彩的。
Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the drawing,
2. analyze the reasons why it is difficult for university graduates to find a job, and
3. point out the possible ways to solve the problem.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
審題：
《招員工七名》這篇文章關(guān)注的是當(dāng)前重要的就業(yè)難問題。它的要求非常明確，在描述圖畫后，先給出原因，再給出解決辦法，這是非常常見的文章模式。
Sample:
The recruiting fair in the above drawing is filled with young graduates each holding a pile of resumes in their hands. Around a desk in the front of the drawing, there are dozens of students waiting to hand in their resumes but only seven are wanted by the company as is written on a board beside the desk.
It is clear that the drawer wants to draw our attention to the difficulty that today’s university graduates are faced with in finding a job. In fact, in many universities and colleges, the employment rate of graduates is lower than 50% and much fewer can find a satisfactory job. The reasons for this situation can be listed as follows. In the first place, the enrolment expansion of universities and colleges has resulted in a great increase in the number of graduates every year, which has exceeded the increase in positions in the job market. What makes things worse is that quite a lot of students like to choose those hot majors when they enter the university and to look for jobs in big developed cities when they graduate. So it is even more difficult for them to find a suitable job.
From my point of view, the society and the graduates need to join their hands in the endeavor to solve this problem. On the one hand, the society should continue to focus on economic development so as to provide bigger employment chances for the graduates. On the other hand, the students should choose the majors that they are really interested in and well capable of and broaden their horizon when looking for jobs. Only in this way can they gain larger space for their future career.
點(diǎn)評：
該文分為三段，第一段描述圖畫，第二段對此問題進(jìn)行了小結(jié)，而后給出了原因。第三段提出了解決問題的辦法。
第一段共用兩句話，第一句是遠(yuǎn)景，第二句由遠(yuǎn)及近，展示了求職者之多與實(shí)際招聘人數(shù)之少。第二段共分六句話，前兩句總結(jié)了大學(xué)畢業(yè)生就業(yè)難這一情況，第三句話是原因類的模板句。第四句話說擴(kuò)招帶來的影響。第五句話和第六句話說大學(xué)生選擇熱門的專業(yè)，使就業(yè)難的矛盾更加突出。第三段共分四句話，第一句話是總括句，說社會和畢業(yè)生應(yīng)攜起手來解決問題，而后分兩句話分別說明。最后一句話是總結(jié)，使用了語氣強(qiáng)烈的倒裝句。
心得：
這是?？嫉哪Ｊ?，望大家用心。
Directions 4
Study the following table carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the table,
2. suggest possible solutions to the problem of the heavy burden of university tuition in China.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
國家大學(xué)年平均學(xué)費(fèi)國民人均年收入比值
美國4，700美元35，000美元1/8
英國1，500英鎊15，000英鎊1/10
中國7，500元7，500元1
審題：
在審題的環(huán)節(jié)中，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)將讀圖表(圖畫)和看提綱有機(jī)地結(jié)合起來。有的時(shí)候，提綱中會把文章的主題直接給出來，這時(shí)我們文章的整體布局就會容易得多。在這道題的提綱中，就出現(xiàn)了“中國大學(xué)學(xué)費(fèi)負(fù)擔(dān)沉重的問題”的字樣，這就是該文的主題，我們的文章應(yīng)該圍繞它展開。
Sample:
From the above table we can see that in America and Britain the ratio of average annual tuition of universities to gross national income per capita is about 1 to 10, but astonishingly that in China is 1. That is to say, the burden of university tuition on Chinese families is nearly ten times heavier than that on American or British families. As a matter of fact, most Chinese families feel it difficult to afford the high tuition of their children, and some absolutely cannot afford it, which has received more and more concern from all over the country.
In order to solve this problem, I strongly suggest the following solutions. First and foremost, it is a must to reduce the cost of higher education. We need to cut down the staff in universities, most of whom now have a disproportionately large number of administrators. The now widespread corruption should also be eliminated in universities, such as unnecessary tours and banquets at public expense. Moreover, much importance should be attached to the reform of management system of higher education. The national government should not only increase financial investment in higher education but also optimize the distribution of such money.
To sum up, it is high time to pay enough attention to the problem of the heavy burden of university tuition in our country, and to solve it a comprehensive educational reform is essential.
點(diǎn)評：
該文共分三段，第一段是描述表格，第二段是給出解決辦法，第三段是總結(jié)。
第一段是對表格進(jìn)行描述——這時(shí)我們不一定要把每個數(shù)據(jù)都描述出來，而是要抓住問題的關(guān)鍵。這個表格的關(guān)鍵就是體現(xiàn)我國大學(xué)學(xué)費(fèi)太高，依據(jù)就是學(xué)費(fèi)與國民人均年收入之比。美國與英國處于差不多的水平，所以放在一起說就可以了。該段共分三句話，第一句將比例描述出來，第二句作出比較——中國家庭負(fù)擔(dān)的大學(xué)學(xué)費(fèi)是英美國家的十倍之多。第三句進(jìn)一步說明我國大部分家庭感覺負(fù)擔(dān)較重，有些家庭根本就負(fù)擔(dān)不起。
第二段提出解決辦法，第一句是模板句，之后分兩方面來說。第一方面說的是減少高等教育的成本，分為兩個方面，一是減員增效，二是消除腐敗。第二方面說的是高教管理體制的改革。國家應(yīng)加強(qiáng)高等教育的投資，并合理配置這些資金。
最后一段是總結(jié)，說解決大學(xué)學(xué)費(fèi)成為沉重負(fù)擔(dān)問題正值其時(shí)，全面改革勢在必行。
心得：
提綱中如果出現(xiàn)文章主題，一定要把握住，這直接了文章的謀篇布局。
描述圖表時(shí)不一定要面面俱到，只要抓住重點(diǎn)即可。
寫原因或解決辦法的段落時(shí)條理一定要清楚，一般分為三點(diǎn)(也有兩點(diǎn)或四點(diǎn)的情況)，不一定是權(quán)威的，我們并非是專門研究該問題的專家，閱卷老師也不會太苛求，只要符合情理即可。關(guān)鍵是語言表達(dá)一定要準(zhǔn)確，如果要拿高分就一定要有出彩的。