「要求」
一個英文報紙要求你寫一系列有關(guān)中國民俗的文章,比如節(jié)日、飲食,使外國朋友更加了解中國。第一篇介紹春節(jié)。其內(nèi)容如下:
春節(jié)是中國最重要的節(jié)日。
春節(jié)人們非常開心,有很多事要做。
春節(jié)還有很多傳統(tǒng)節(jié)目。
「范文」
The Spring Festival
The most important Chinese festival of the year is Spring Festival. It's the first day of the lunar year.
People are very happy in Spring Festival. They often have large dinners and watch special programs on TV with the family on the Lunar New Year's Eve. On the Lunar New Year's Day, people pay visits to relatives and friends. Children are very happy, too. They are in new clothes, and usually get some money, which is put in a red paper envelope from elder people.
In Spring Festival, you can see a lot of traditional programs too, such as lion dancing or dragon dancing. They wish people a happy New year and a bright future. It's very interesting.
「評語」
介紹性文章先要把該說的都說到。比如這一篇文章,關(guān)于春節(jié)的事有很多,講起來可長可短,但最重要的部分應(yīng)該放在開頭說,也即先說清楚春節(jié)是什么。然后在第二段中介紹有關(guān)的習(xí)俗的大致情況。最后再附帶說一說相關(guān)的事,比如娛樂項目。分清主次,也是寫短文的關(guān)鍵。
一個英文報紙要求你寫一系列有關(guān)中國民俗的文章,比如節(jié)日、飲食,使外國朋友更加了解中國。第一篇介紹春節(jié)。其內(nèi)容如下:
春節(jié)是中國最重要的節(jié)日。
春節(jié)人們非常開心,有很多事要做。
春節(jié)還有很多傳統(tǒng)節(jié)目。
「范文」
The Spring Festival
The most important Chinese festival of the year is Spring Festival. It's the first day of the lunar year.
People are very happy in Spring Festival. They often have large dinners and watch special programs on TV with the family on the Lunar New Year's Eve. On the Lunar New Year's Day, people pay visits to relatives and friends. Children are very happy, too. They are in new clothes, and usually get some money, which is put in a red paper envelope from elder people.
In Spring Festival, you can see a lot of traditional programs too, such as lion dancing or dragon dancing. They wish people a happy New year and a bright future. It's very interesting.
「評語」
介紹性文章先要把該說的都說到。比如這一篇文章,關(guān)于春節(jié)的事有很多,講起來可長可短,但最重要的部分應(yīng)該放在開頭說,也即先說清楚春節(jié)是什么。然后在第二段中介紹有關(guān)的習(xí)俗的大致情況。最后再附帶說一說相關(guān)的事,比如娛樂項目。分清主次,也是寫短文的關(guān)鍵。