「要求」
國慶節(jié)前夜,學生會組織了一場文藝演出。你作為學生會時報的通訊員要對這一活動作一報道。有關信息如下:
時間:國慶節(jié)前夜 地點:學校的大禮堂 會場布置:舞臺燈火輝煌,四個大紅燈籠從天花板上吊下來 演出內容:歌曲、舞蹈、器樂演奏和短劇 其中最精彩的節(jié)目(第一個節(jié)目:學校合唱隊表演的兩首贊美祖國的大合唱 第二個節(jié)目:六個女生表演的民族舞蹈:《紅綢舞》 最后一個節(jié)目:女高音獨唱。演出進入高潮。)
「范文」
The Performance
On the ove of National Day a performance sponsored by the Student's Union was held.
The first program was a chorus. The curtain rose and the band began to play music. The chorus of our school sang two songs in praise of our motherland. The singing was so loud and majestic that the whole hall echoed.
Next came a traditional Chinese dance. Six girls moved and spung racefully on the stage, waving red ribbons. All the audience were carried away.
With one item after another performed, the audience became more and more excited.
Then the last program——a female solo pushed the performance to its climax. To the accompaniment of piano, she sang in her sweet voice. When she was over, a storm of applause broke out in the hall. The singer had to answer the curtain call several times.
The winderful performance lasted far into the night.
「評語」
本文對國慶節(jié)前夜的一次演出作了一個簡短報道。文章首先交代了時間、地點,并描寫了舞臺上的喜慶氣氛。接下來寫了三個最精彩的節(jié)目,之間銜接過渡自然。用的筆墨雖不多,但詳略得當,內容完整、語言簡練,描寫生動。
國慶節(jié)前夜,學生會組織了一場文藝演出。你作為學生會時報的通訊員要對這一活動作一報道。有關信息如下:
時間:國慶節(jié)前夜 地點:學校的大禮堂 會場布置:舞臺燈火輝煌,四個大紅燈籠從天花板上吊下來 演出內容:歌曲、舞蹈、器樂演奏和短劇 其中最精彩的節(jié)目(第一個節(jié)目:學校合唱隊表演的兩首贊美祖國的大合唱 第二個節(jié)目:六個女生表演的民族舞蹈:《紅綢舞》 最后一個節(jié)目:女高音獨唱。演出進入高潮。)
「范文」
The Performance
On the ove of National Day a performance sponsored by the Student's Union was held.
The first program was a chorus. The curtain rose and the band began to play music. The chorus of our school sang two songs in praise of our motherland. The singing was so loud and majestic that the whole hall echoed.
Next came a traditional Chinese dance. Six girls moved and spung racefully on the stage, waving red ribbons. All the audience were carried away.
With one item after another performed, the audience became more and more excited.
Then the last program——a female solo pushed the performance to its climax. To the accompaniment of piano, she sang in her sweet voice. When she was over, a storm of applause broke out in the hall. The singer had to answer the curtain call several times.
The winderful performance lasted far into the night.
「評語」
本文對國慶節(jié)前夜的一次演出作了一個簡短報道。文章首先交代了時間、地點,并描寫了舞臺上的喜慶氣氛。接下來寫了三個最精彩的節(jié)目,之間銜接過渡自然。用的筆墨雖不多,但詳略得當,內容完整、語言簡練,描寫生動。