「要求」
假設(shè)五月一日，你在市體育館（the city stadium）觀看了一場(chǎng)足球比賽。請(qǐng)你寫一短文，利用你平日最喜歡的球賽，記敘比賽經(jīng)過。
「范文」
A Football match
In the morning of May 1st， a football match took place between Shen Hua Team and Guo An Team in the city stadium. When I got there the stand was already packed with spectators.
The match was exciting. A home player got hold of the ball and kicked it miles over the bar. Towards the end of the match， a forward got a chance to give the ball a hard kick and it skidded straight into the back of net over the goalkeeper.
The crowd went wild， laughing， jumping and shouting loudly.
When I was on my way home， my heart was still full of excitement.
「評(píng)語」
本文要求寫一記敘文，所以作者首先交待了時(shí)、地、人物（參賽隊(duì)員）后，選取了兩個(gè)主要場(chǎng)景表明了球賽的激烈和觀眾的激動(dòng)面貌。比賽情況采用的細(xì)節(jié)描寫很生動(dòng)。文末點(diǎn)題使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更顯完整。
假設(shè)五月一日，你在市體育館（the city stadium）觀看了一場(chǎng)足球比賽。請(qǐng)你寫一短文，利用你平日最喜歡的球賽，記敘比賽經(jīng)過。
「范文」
A Football match
In the morning of May 1st， a football match took place between Shen Hua Team and Guo An Team in the city stadium. When I got there the stand was already packed with spectators.
The match was exciting. A home player got hold of the ball and kicked it miles over the bar. Towards the end of the match， a forward got a chance to give the ball a hard kick and it skidded straight into the back of net over the goalkeeper.
The crowd went wild， laughing， jumping and shouting loudly.
When I was on my way home， my heart was still full of excitement.
「評(píng)語」
本文要求寫一記敘文，所以作者首先交待了時(shí)、地、人物（參賽隊(duì)員）后，選取了兩個(gè)主要場(chǎng)景表明了球賽的激烈和觀眾的激動(dòng)面貌。比賽情況采用的細(xì)節(jié)描寫很生動(dòng)。文末點(diǎn)題使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更顯完整。