A Football match

字號(hào):

「要求」
    假設(shè)五月一日,你在市體育館(the city stadium)觀看了一場(chǎng)足球比賽。請(qǐng)你寫一短文,利用你平日最喜歡的球賽,記敘比賽經(jīng)過。
    「范文」
    A Football match
    In the morning of May 1st, a football match took place between Shen Hua Team and Guo An Team in the city stadium. When I got there the stand was already packed with spectators.
    The match was exciting. A home player got hold of the ball and kicked it miles over the bar. Towards the end of the match, a forward got a chance to give the ball a hard kick and it skidded straight into the back of net over the goalkeeper.
    The crowd went wild, laughing, jumping and shouting loudly.
    When I was on my way home, my heart was still full of excitement.
    「評(píng)語」
    本文要求寫一記敘文,所以作者首先交待了時(shí)、地、人物(參賽隊(duì)員)后,選取了兩個(gè)主要場(chǎng)景表明了球賽的激烈和觀眾的激動(dòng)面貌。比賽情況采用的細(xì)節(jié)描寫很生動(dòng)。文末點(diǎn)題使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更顯完整。