范文:I Am a Cat

字號(hào):

「要求」
    以“I Am a……”為題,描寫一種動(dòng)物,寫出其基本習(xí)性、特點(diǎn)。(100字左右)
    「范文」
    I Am a Cat
    I am a cat. I am pretty and always wear a soft fur coat. I also wear soft shoes and can walk noiselessly.
    I dislike mice. They are a great nuisance to people. Whenever and wherever there are mice, I will catch them and kill them.
    I like to stay at home and play with a ball of string. I always sleep in the day time and get up at night. I can see clearly in the dark.
    I'm lazy and greedy sometimes. I steal fish and catch birds to eat. But people still like me.
    「評(píng)語(yǔ)」
    寫這類文章要發(fā)揮一定的想象力。本文用擬人、比喻等手法,生動(dòng)活潑,如“fur coat”、“soft shoes”等十分有趣。文字通順,沒(méi)有什么毛病,但可能太簡(jiǎn)單了些,句式上應(yīng)該有所變化。