Yesterday was my birthday, because some 1____________
of my classmates send me presents. Mother 2______________
prepared for a tea party for me. I invited all of 3______________
them to come and took part in it. The tea 4. ______________
party began at half past six. There was cold 5. ______________
drinks and refreshments. We ate, talking and 6. ______________
laughed. We felt that they were the happiest 7. ______________
men in the world. Time passed quick. In 8. ______________
a twinkling, clock on the wall struck nine. 9. ______________
We could not but say "Good-bye" to one another. 10. ______________
答案：
1.because 改為so. 前面是因，后面是果。
2. send改為sent 時間是yesterday，應該用過去式。
3. 去掉第一個for prepare 為直接準備，prepare for是間接準備。
4. took改為take take和前面的come為平行結構，是省略了to的動詞不定式。
5.was 改為were there be 結構的主語在其后，cold drinks是復數(shù)，謂語動詞用復數(shù)。
6. talking改為talked 三個動作是連續(xù)不斷的動作，不是分詞短語做狀語。
7.they改為we 人稱用錯，我們感到我們是世界上最快樂的人。
8. quick改成quickly 應該用副詞修飾動詞passed。
9.clock前加the clock后有on the wall限定。
10.正確。
of my classmates send me presents. Mother 2______________
prepared for a tea party for me. I invited all of 3______________
them to come and took part in it. The tea 4. ______________
party began at half past six. There was cold 5. ______________
drinks and refreshments. We ate, talking and 6. ______________
laughed. We felt that they were the happiest 7. ______________
men in the world. Time passed quick. In 8. ______________
a twinkling, clock on the wall struck nine. 9. ______________
We could not but say "Good-bye" to one another. 10. ______________
答案：
1.because 改為so. 前面是因，后面是果。
2. send改為sent 時間是yesterday，應該用過去式。
3. 去掉第一個for prepare 為直接準備，prepare for是間接準備。
4. took改為take take和前面的come為平行結構，是省略了to的動詞不定式。
5.was 改為were there be 結構的主語在其后，cold drinks是復數(shù)，謂語動詞用復數(shù)。
6. talking改為talked 三個動作是連續(xù)不斷的動作，不是分詞短語做狀語。
7.they改為we 人稱用錯，我們感到我們是世界上最快樂的人。
8. quick改成quickly 應該用副詞修飾動詞passed。
9.clock前加the clock后有on the wall限定。
10.正確。