人類社會(huì)的永恒話題, 對比論述突出好處,比如堅(jiān)持不懈, 打敗自我,團(tuán)隊(duì)精神,為人真誠,實(shí)事求是從正面列舉該積極事物的好處,克服困難, 征服挑戰(zhàn), 完善自我,走向成功,創(chuàng)造輝煌從反面列舉沒有這個(gè)積極事物時(shí)的不好, 郁悶迷茫, 無成就感和前進(jìn)動(dòng)力, 失敗挫折感最后要談兩點(diǎn)建議措施和聯(lián)想美好未來.
話題：堅(jiān)持不懈——在失敗的時(shí)候堅(jiān)持, 做好每一件小事為成功做好準(zhǔn)備.
首段：四句話，描述圖畫，表明圖畫發(fā)人深思。
As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述圖畫. The most striking feature is 圖畫重點(diǎn)信息.
描述圖畫兩句，第一句宏觀表明圖畫的視覺效果。 第二句表明的圖畫的特色是什么。
There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
此句子表明圖畫所微妙傳達(dá)的象征含義，發(fā)人深思，十四個(gè)單詞增加亮點(diǎn)，彌補(bǔ)首段字?jǐn)?shù)不足，為下文點(diǎn)名觀點(diǎn)作好鋪墊
Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon that which plays an active part in our society.
二段：七句話，揭示象征含義，從正反兩方面論述該積極事物的重要性。從正面列舉該積極事物的好處,克服困難, 征服挑戰(zhàn), 完善自我,走向成功,創(chuàng)造輝煌從反面列舉沒有這個(gè)積極事物時(shí)的不好, 郁悶迷茫, 無成就感和前進(jìn)動(dòng)力, 失敗挫折感，而且要舉例證明使觀點(diǎn)具體化，并以倒裝并列句結(jié)尾，畫龍點(diǎn)睛。
As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息
profoundly indicates that perseverance is momentous （重要的） and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds.任何積極話題必然與成功有聯(lián)系，成功是衡量該話題是否積極的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。該段首句設(shè)置爆發(fā)力句型，增加氣勢，讓老師給出很高的第一印象分，借此開頭很有特色。
Perseverance means that people can persist on when they face the difficulty and prepare every detail for the coming success.定義法論述：毅力—在困境中堅(jiān)持，做好細(xì)節(jié)，準(zhǔn)備成功；
It is perseverance that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success.強(qiáng)調(diào)并列句是英語的句型，大氣磅礴。此萬能句子是任何積極事物都可以幫助我們克服困難,征服挑戰(zhàn),走向成功.
Unless we stick to our dream,（適當(dāng)把主題詞進(jìn)行同義替換）we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated.
雙重否定句子從反面論證宏觀說明危害性，如果缺乏該積極事物就生活郁悶挫折被競爭所淘汰。
To account for the above mentioned topic, several reasons can be put forward as mentioned below.
To begin with
In addition
Last but not the least
No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below.
（舉例證明把for example 寫成十四個(gè)很有特色，而且表明下面的例子很重要，又增加一分，老師看了這么多for example，審美疲勞，老師一看該句，一定激動(dòng)。
Many capable people who have the burning desire to win fail to achieve their goals just because they don't persist （是堅(jiān)持的同意改寫）especially when they face the music.
Many people who……just because……想成功但失敗因?yàn)樗麄儾荒軋?jiān)持特別是遇到困難的時(shí)候，
Only by being perseverant can they guarantee a success and have a strong will to always challenge themselves.指的是永遠(yuǎn)成功
倒裝并列句在段落末尾寫，增加氣勢，第二段結(jié)尾很重要，不要晚節(jié)不保。倒裝句在結(jié)尾補(bǔ)充再好不過。此句很萬能，表明只有該積極事物讓我們永遠(yuǎn)成功；
三：5—6句話，承上啟下總結(jié)上文，兩點(diǎn)建議，展望美好未來
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to persevere than to despair.
From ……承上啟下, 引起下文, 多達(dá)二十五個(gè)單詞的總結(jié)句 表明無論做大事小事，難事容易事，都需要積極事物支持我們。
It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to cultivate confidence and to pursue the coming goals.
建議措施的總起句子, 引起下文，被動(dòng)句子很有風(fēng)采.
On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to imagine about the colorful future. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to punish ourselves in certain ways if we fail to hold on to our dream.
結(jié)構(gòu)很清晰,sensible 表明建議很理性, 從反方面再談很辨證.
However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
這個(gè)閃光的萬能句多達(dá)25個(gè)單詞，強(qiáng)調(diào)實(shí)踐的重要性.而且還有諺語,表明建議用于實(shí)踐。
話題二：打敗自我，不斷改正自身缺陷吸收別人長處，完善自我，自信面對人生；
1Defeating ourselves or Defeating others
Defeating ourselves——fight with our defects——perfect ourselves——confident——perseverant——have a better understanding of ourselves
As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述圖畫. The most striking feature is 圖畫重點(diǎn)信息. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息 profoundly indicates that defeating oneself rather than the other competitors is momentous （重要的） and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. You have to fight with your own shortcoming and perfect yourself as much as possible. It is defeating ourselves that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. Unless we defeat ourselves, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many people who do not have faith in themselves always lose the match. Only by defeating ourselves can they make full use of their advantages and have a strong will to always challenge themselves.
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to have a better understanding of oneself. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make yourself more competitive in the society. On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to enrich our minds. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be more perseverant. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
3. Team work 一個(gè)人蓋樓房很辛苦, 很多人在一起建, 他們臉上有很多笑容.
As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述圖畫. The most striking feature is 圖畫重點(diǎn)信息. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息 profoundly indicates that team work is momentous （重要的） and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. Unless we cooperate sincerely, , we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people's opinions and benefits. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be active in taking a more tough job and always helpful and honest to other people. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
4. 對別人真誠，有禮貌，無私奉獻(xiàn)，謙虛為人
Genuineness and cordiality are rewarding
As is vividly depicted in the picture, a young man with a suitcase under his arm is stretches his hand to greet himself reflected in the mirror. The most striking feature is his image in the mirror is smiling at him sincerely. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that his smile can be reflected as tenderly as his real smile profoundly indicates that genuineness and cordiality are momentous （重要的） and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. It is corporation with the team with great zeal that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. Unless we are genuine to others, we will not be acknowledged, appreciated and respected by the others No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many capable people who always care about his way of thinking will be living a dull, depressing life.Only by being genuine to others can they win other people's trust and can they reward the support, sympathy .
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to cooperate with others with great zeal It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make it work. On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to imagine everyone to be our friends not enemies. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to examine our behaviors to make sure they will not hurt others. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
5.選擇工作，實(shí)事求是，量體裁衣，因地制宜
The fittest is the best
As is vividly depicted in the picture in the left picture a man A carrying a spanner. He seems very delighted and energetic although wet over with sweat. The most striking feature is…………………There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that the two man in different social positions have different attitudes toward life profoundly indicates that the fittest is the best to anyone who wants to enjoy their life. It is fitting the job that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. Unless we choose the job that fit us, we will make a mess out of our life. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many capable people who have the burning desire to win choose a admirable employment and suffer great illnesses.
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to choose job that can be done within his capability. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make it work. On the one hand, we should be sensible to find what we are skillful at and make a plan about the future. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to change to another job if it does not fit us.However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
話題：堅(jiān)持不懈——在失敗的時(shí)候堅(jiān)持, 做好每一件小事為成功做好準(zhǔn)備.
首段：四句話，描述圖畫，表明圖畫發(fā)人深思。
As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述圖畫. The most striking feature is 圖畫重點(diǎn)信息.
描述圖畫兩句，第一句宏觀表明圖畫的視覺效果。 第二句表明的圖畫的特色是什么。
There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
此句子表明圖畫所微妙傳達(dá)的象征含義，發(fā)人深思，十四個(gè)單詞增加亮點(diǎn)，彌補(bǔ)首段字?jǐn)?shù)不足，為下文點(diǎn)名觀點(diǎn)作好鋪墊
Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon that which plays an active part in our society.
二段：七句話，揭示象征含義，從正反兩方面論述該積極事物的重要性。從正面列舉該積極事物的好處,克服困難, 征服挑戰(zhàn), 完善自我,走向成功,創(chuàng)造輝煌從反面列舉沒有這個(gè)積極事物時(shí)的不好, 郁悶迷茫, 無成就感和前進(jìn)動(dòng)力, 失敗挫折感，而且要舉例證明使觀點(diǎn)具體化，并以倒裝并列句結(jié)尾，畫龍點(diǎn)睛。
As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息
profoundly indicates that perseverance is momentous （重要的） and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds.任何積極話題必然與成功有聯(lián)系，成功是衡量該話題是否積極的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。該段首句設(shè)置爆發(fā)力句型，增加氣勢，讓老師給出很高的第一印象分，借此開頭很有特色。
Perseverance means that people can persist on when they face the difficulty and prepare every detail for the coming success.定義法論述：毅力—在困境中堅(jiān)持，做好細(xì)節(jié)，準(zhǔn)備成功；
It is perseverance that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success.強(qiáng)調(diào)并列句是英語的句型，大氣磅礴。此萬能句子是任何積極事物都可以幫助我們克服困難,征服挑戰(zhàn),走向成功.
Unless we stick to our dream,（適當(dāng)把主題詞進(jìn)行同義替換）we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated.
雙重否定句子從反面論證宏觀說明危害性，如果缺乏該積極事物就生活郁悶挫折被競爭所淘汰。
To account for the above mentioned topic, several reasons can be put forward as mentioned below.
To begin with
In addition
Last but not the least
No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below.
（舉例證明把for example 寫成十四個(gè)很有特色，而且表明下面的例子很重要，又增加一分，老師看了這么多for example，審美疲勞，老師一看該句，一定激動(dòng)。
Many capable people who have the burning desire to win fail to achieve their goals just because they don't persist （是堅(jiān)持的同意改寫）especially when they face the music.
Many people who……just because……想成功但失敗因?yàn)樗麄儾荒軋?jiān)持特別是遇到困難的時(shí)候，
Only by being perseverant can they guarantee a success and have a strong will to always challenge themselves.指的是永遠(yuǎn)成功
倒裝并列句在段落末尾寫，增加氣勢，第二段結(jié)尾很重要，不要晚節(jié)不保。倒裝句在結(jié)尾補(bǔ)充再好不過。此句很萬能，表明只有該積極事物讓我們永遠(yuǎn)成功；
三：5—6句話，承上啟下總結(jié)上文，兩點(diǎn)建議，展望美好未來
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to persevere than to despair.
From ……承上啟下, 引起下文, 多達(dá)二十五個(gè)單詞的總結(jié)句 表明無論做大事小事，難事容易事，都需要積極事物支持我們。
It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to cultivate confidence and to pursue the coming goals.
建議措施的總起句子, 引起下文，被動(dòng)句子很有風(fēng)采.
On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to imagine about the colorful future. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to punish ourselves in certain ways if we fail to hold on to our dream.
結(jié)構(gòu)很清晰,sensible 表明建議很理性, 從反方面再談很辨證.
However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
這個(gè)閃光的萬能句多達(dá)25個(gè)單詞，強(qiáng)調(diào)實(shí)踐的重要性.而且還有諺語,表明建議用于實(shí)踐。
話題二：打敗自我，不斷改正自身缺陷吸收別人長處，完善自我，自信面對人生；
1Defeating ourselves or Defeating others
Defeating ourselves——fight with our defects——perfect ourselves——confident——perseverant——have a better understanding of ourselves
As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述圖畫. The most striking feature is 圖畫重點(diǎn)信息. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息 profoundly indicates that defeating oneself rather than the other competitors is momentous （重要的） and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. You have to fight with your own shortcoming and perfect yourself as much as possible. It is defeating ourselves that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. Unless we defeat ourselves, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many people who do not have faith in themselves always lose the match. Only by defeating ourselves can they make full use of their advantages and have a strong will to always challenge themselves.
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to have a better understanding of oneself. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make yourself more competitive in the society. On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to enrich our minds. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be more perseverant. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
3. Team work 一個(gè)人蓋樓房很辛苦, 很多人在一起建, 他們臉上有很多笑容.
As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述圖畫. The most striking feature is 圖畫重點(diǎn)信息. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重復(fù)上面的圖畫信息 profoundly indicates that team work is momentous （重要的） and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. Unless we cooperate sincerely, , we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people's opinions and benefits. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be active in taking a more tough job and always helpful and honest to other people. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
4. 對別人真誠，有禮貌，無私奉獻(xiàn)，謙虛為人
Genuineness and cordiality are rewarding
As is vividly depicted in the picture, a young man with a suitcase under his arm is stretches his hand to greet himself reflected in the mirror. The most striking feature is his image in the mirror is smiling at him sincerely. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that his smile can be reflected as tenderly as his real smile profoundly indicates that genuineness and cordiality are momentous （重要的） and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. It is corporation with the team with great zeal that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. Unless we are genuine to others, we will not be acknowledged, appreciated and respected by the others No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many capable people who always care about his way of thinking will be living a dull, depressing life.Only by being genuine to others can they win other people's trust and can they reward the support, sympathy .
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to cooperate with others with great zeal It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make it work. On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to imagine everyone to be our friends not enemies. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to examine our behaviors to make sure they will not hurt others. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
5.選擇工作，實(shí)事求是，量體裁衣，因地制宜
The fittest is the best
As is vividly depicted in the picture in the left picture a man A carrying a spanner. He seems very delighted and energetic although wet over with sweat. The most striking feature is…………………There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that the two man in different social positions have different attitudes toward life profoundly indicates that the fittest is the best to anyone who wants to enjoy their life. It is fitting the job that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. Unless we choose the job that fit us, we will make a mess out of our life. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many capable people who have the burning desire to win choose a admirable employment and suffer great illnesses.
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to choose job that can be done within his capability. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make it work. On the one hand, we should be sensible to find what we are skillful at and make a plan about the future. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to change to another job if it does not fit us.However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.