近年來全國高考英語書面表達(dá)的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：第五檔（很好）：“覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容；應(yīng)
用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致；應(yīng)用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊；達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的?！?BR> A. 表達(dá)技巧
1.使用較高級(jí)的詞匯；
2.使用較豐富的句式；
3.使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞
B. 相關(guān)練習(xí)
（一）.用高級(jí)詞匯替換下面劃線的部分
1.你應(yīng)該與眾不同.
You should be different.
2.自行車對人很重要.
Bicycles are important to man.
3.他是個(gè)聰明的學(xué)生.
He is a clever student.
4.你嚇我一跳.
You surprise me!
5.我很害怕.
I am afraid.
6.這件工作挺難的。
That is a difficult job.
7.最后他了解到了所有的事情。
He learned about everything at last.
8.感謝你不辭辛苦地幫助我。
I should thank you for taking so much trouble to help me.
9.幾天前，我碰巧遇到了一個(gè)老朋友。
Several days ago, I happened to meet an old friend of mine.
10.我突然想出了一個(gè)好注意。
Suddenly I thought out a good idea
(二).按要求改寫下列句子:
1.If time permits，I’ll come to help you.(用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)改寫)
2. To my surprise, the boy knows so many things. (使用名詞性從句)
3. When it is heated, ice will turn into water (用過去分詞)
4.She did not know what had happened until she had read the news in the newspaper. (使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)
5. I passed the English exam because of your help. (用虛擬語氣）
6. I won’t believe what you say. (使用狀語從句)
7. The student is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (用定語從句)
8. It is great fun to play games with the children. (用感嘆句)
9. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）
10.He had no sooner come back from Kunming than he was sent to Beijing.(使用倒裝句
11. They suggest that the meeting be put off. (改被動(dòng)語態(tài))
（三）常用的連接詞
1. 表示遞進(jìn);在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容： 另外，還有：what is more; besides; also; moreover; in addition
2. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系： 但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.
3. 表示因果關(guān)系： 因?yàn)?，因此，所? since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result;
4. 表示條件關(guān)系： 如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless 否則: or else 5. 表示時(shí)間關(guān)系： 當(dāng)… 的時(shí)候 : when ; while 在…之后: after 在…之前: before
直到: until 一…就… : as soon as 后來， 然后: later; afterwards 不久: soon 近來: lately; recently 自從… :since 從那時(shí)起: from then on
6. 表示特定的順序關(guān)系：首先， 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next最后: finally; in the end
7. 換一種方法表述：換句話說: in other words; that is to say;
8. 進(jìn)行舉例說明：例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as
9. 用于陳述事實(shí)：實(shí)際上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact 跟你說實(shí)話 : to tell you the truth
10. 對一個(gè)話題進(jìn)行總結(jié)： 總而言之，總的來說: on the whole; in short;
(3) all in all; in general; in a word 其它常用到的副詞：Therefore ; otherwise ; finally ; furthermore ;Thus ; namely ; although ; afterwards ; personally;
請?jiān)谙铝芯渥又校ㄩg）填上恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞或意思有聯(lián)系的短語
1. I was reading the teacher came in.
2. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. ________, the film is usually
more interesting, and it is easier to follow.(2006高考作文 浙江)
3. Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenient and comfortable. ______________, they can save money for other purpose. ____they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. ________, others prefer to go out for traveling _____ since it can increase their knowledge.(2006高考作文 陜西)
3. Do you agree with my arrangement ? ________ , do write to me soon.
4. We can go downtown and do some shopping. __________, we can pay a visit to some places of interest.
5.I shared the cost of the gas with my friends .___________, I saved $80.
(四) 利用不同的表達(dá)方式表達(dá)同一個(gè)意思的練習(xí)
1.我學(xué)英語和法語。
I learn English and French./I learn both English and French ./Besides English, I also learn French./Apart from English, I also learn French./I learn not only English but also French./I learn French as well as English./I learn English and French as well.
2.他盡力地來幫我。
He did/tried his best to help me./ He did what he could to help me./ He did all/everything (that) he could to help me./ He did as much as he could to help me./ He did as much as possible to help me.
3.我決不嫁給你.
I will never marry you./ Never will I marry you./ I would jump into a well if you would marry me./ I will marry anybody but you./ If you were the last man in the world, I would remain single./If you were the last man in the world, I would go to temple./You are the last man I would marry.
4.這小孩懂得多，我們深感驚訝。
The little boy knows so many things that we feel surprised.（so …that句型）
It is that the little boy knows so many things that surprise us.（強(qiáng)調(diào)句型）
The little boy knows so many things which surprise us. （定語從句）
What surprises us is that the boy knows so many things. （主語從句）
That the boy knows so many things surprise us. （主語從句）
We are surprised that the little boy knows so many things （賓語從句）
Much to our surprise , the little boy knows so many things.(運(yùn)用插入語或固定短語)
5.他昨天下午才來這里的.
He came here yesterday afternoon./He didn’t come here until yesterday afternoon.
Not until yesterday afternoon did he came here./It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here.
（五）書面表達(dá)示例
1.云南省教科文組織某考察團(tuán)正在曲靖某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員，請根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡要介紹這個(gè)村的情況：
1）大?。航?50戶人家，約1000口人。
2）變化：過去很窮，80年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了?，F(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。
3）教育：原來的學(xué)校很小，現(xiàn)已經(jīng)過改建。新建的教學(xué)樓有6層，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學(xué)齡兒童在此免費(fèi)就讀。
注意：（1）要點(diǎn)齊全，前后連貫。（2）詞數(shù)：100－120之間。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school! ① This village is very small. It has nearly 150 families and about 1000 people. It used to be very poor. ② It has changed a lot since 1980 ③. People here ④ are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look.
In the past, the school here was very small ⑤. ⑥ Now it has been rebuilt. ⑦ The newly built teaching building has 6 stories ⑧. It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨ They enjoy free education in it.
⑩ Thank you.
改進(jìn)后的文章:
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school ! ① This village is a small one with/which has nearly 150 families and about 1000 people. It used to be very poor. ② However, it has changed a lot since 1980 ③ and has been developing very fast. ④ People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look.
In the past, the school here was very small ⑤ and most children couldn’t afford to go to school. ⑥ But now it has been rebuilt ⑦ and the newly built teaching building ⑧ which has 6 stories is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨ What’s more, they enjoy free education.
⑩ May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you.
2．(2007年高考全國卷I)書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
假定你是李華，希望通過外籍教師Peter找一個(gè)英語筆友。請寫一封短信，描述一下你理想中筆友的條件，并說明為什么選這樣的筆友。具體條件包括：1． 年齡； 2． 性別； 3． 愛好（旅游、運(yùn)動(dòng)、寵物等）。
注意：1．詞數(shù)100 左右；
2． 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3． 開頭語已為你寫好。
Dear Peter,
I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
用較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致；應(yīng)用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊；達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的?！?BR> A. 表達(dá)技巧
1.使用較高級(jí)的詞匯；
2.使用較豐富的句式；
3.使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞
B. 相關(guān)練習(xí)
（一）.用高級(jí)詞匯替換下面劃線的部分
1.你應(yīng)該與眾不同.
You should be different.
2.自行車對人很重要.
Bicycles are important to man.
3.他是個(gè)聰明的學(xué)生.
He is a clever student.
4.你嚇我一跳.
You surprise me!
5.我很害怕.
I am afraid.
6.這件工作挺難的。
That is a difficult job.
7.最后他了解到了所有的事情。
He learned about everything at last.
8.感謝你不辭辛苦地幫助我。
I should thank you for taking so much trouble to help me.
9.幾天前，我碰巧遇到了一個(gè)老朋友。
Several days ago, I happened to meet an old friend of mine.
10.我突然想出了一個(gè)好注意。
Suddenly I thought out a good idea
(二).按要求改寫下列句子:
1.If time permits，I’ll come to help you.(用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)改寫)
2. To my surprise, the boy knows so many things. (使用名詞性從句)
3. When it is heated, ice will turn into water (用過去分詞)
4.She did not know what had happened until she had read the news in the newspaper. (使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)
5. I passed the English exam because of your help. (用虛擬語氣）
6. I won’t believe what you say. (使用狀語從句)
7. The student is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (用定語從句)
8. It is great fun to play games with the children. (用感嘆句)
9. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）
10.He had no sooner come back from Kunming than he was sent to Beijing.(使用倒裝句
11. They suggest that the meeting be put off. (改被動(dòng)語態(tài))
（三）常用的連接詞
1. 表示遞進(jìn);在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容： 另外，還有：what is more; besides; also; moreover; in addition
2. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系： 但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.
3. 表示因果關(guān)系： 因?yàn)?，因此，所? since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result;
4. 表示條件關(guān)系： 如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless 否則: or else 5. 表示時(shí)間關(guān)系： 當(dāng)… 的時(shí)候 : when ; while 在…之后: after 在…之前: before
直到: until 一…就… : as soon as 后來， 然后: later; afterwards 不久: soon 近來: lately; recently 自從… :since 從那時(shí)起: from then on
6. 表示特定的順序關(guān)系：首先， 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next最后: finally; in the end
7. 換一種方法表述：換句話說: in other words; that is to say;
8. 進(jìn)行舉例說明：例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as
9. 用于陳述事實(shí)：實(shí)際上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact 跟你說實(shí)話 : to tell you the truth
10. 對一個(gè)話題進(jìn)行總結(jié)： 總而言之，總的來說: on the whole; in short;
(3) all in all; in general; in a word 其它常用到的副詞：Therefore ; otherwise ; finally ; furthermore ;Thus ; namely ; although ; afterwards ; personally;
請?jiān)谙铝芯渥又校ㄩg）填上恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞或意思有聯(lián)系的短語
1. I was reading the teacher came in.
2. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. ________, the film is usually
more interesting, and it is easier to follow.(2006高考作文 浙江)
3. Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenient and comfortable. ______________, they can save money for other purpose. ____they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. ________, others prefer to go out for traveling _____ since it can increase their knowledge.(2006高考作文 陜西)
3. Do you agree with my arrangement ? ________ , do write to me soon.
4. We can go downtown and do some shopping. __________, we can pay a visit to some places of interest.
5.I shared the cost of the gas with my friends .___________, I saved $80.
(四) 利用不同的表達(dá)方式表達(dá)同一個(gè)意思的練習(xí)
1.我學(xué)英語和法語。
I learn English and French./I learn both English and French ./Besides English, I also learn French./Apart from English, I also learn French./I learn not only English but also French./I learn French as well as English./I learn English and French as well.
2.他盡力地來幫我。
He did/tried his best to help me./ He did what he could to help me./ He did all/everything (that) he could to help me./ He did as much as he could to help me./ He did as much as possible to help me.
3.我決不嫁給你.
I will never marry you./ Never will I marry you./ I would jump into a well if you would marry me./ I will marry anybody but you./ If you were the last man in the world, I would remain single./If you were the last man in the world, I would go to temple./You are the last man I would marry.
4.這小孩懂得多，我們深感驚訝。
The little boy knows so many things that we feel surprised.（so …that句型）
It is that the little boy knows so many things that surprise us.（強(qiáng)調(diào)句型）
The little boy knows so many things which surprise us. （定語從句）
What surprises us is that the boy knows so many things. （主語從句）
That the boy knows so many things surprise us. （主語從句）
We are surprised that the little boy knows so many things （賓語從句）
Much to our surprise , the little boy knows so many things.(運(yùn)用插入語或固定短語)
5.他昨天下午才來這里的.
He came here yesterday afternoon./He didn’t come here until yesterday afternoon.
Not until yesterday afternoon did he came here./It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here.
（五）書面表達(dá)示例
1.云南省教科文組織某考察團(tuán)正在曲靖某鄉(xiāng)村參觀考察。假定你是接待人員，請根據(jù)下列提示以發(fā)言稿的形式簡要介紹這個(gè)村的情況：
1）大?。航?50戶人家，約1000口人。
2）變化：過去很窮，80年后變化很大。人們生活比以前好多了?，F(xiàn)已舊貌換新顏。
3）教育：原來的學(xué)校很小，現(xiàn)已經(jīng)過改建。新建的教學(xué)樓有6層，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有學(xué)齡兒童在此免費(fèi)就讀。
注意：（1）要點(diǎn)齊全，前后連貫。（2）詞數(shù)：100－120之間。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school! ① This village is very small. It has nearly 150 families and about 1000 people. It used to be very poor. ② It has changed a lot since 1980 ③. People here ④ are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look.
In the past, the school here was very small ⑤. ⑥ Now it has been rebuilt. ⑦ The newly built teaching building has 6 stories ⑧. It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨ They enjoy free education in it.
⑩ Thank you.
改進(jìn)后的文章:
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school ! ① This village is a small one with/which has nearly 150 families and about 1000 people. It used to be very poor. ② However, it has changed a lot since 1980 ③ and has been developing very fast. ④ People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look.
In the past, the school here was very small ⑤ and most children couldn’t afford to go to school. ⑥ But now it has been rebuilt ⑦ and the newly built teaching building ⑧ which has 6 stories is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨ What’s more, they enjoy free education.
⑩ May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you.
2．(2007年高考全國卷I)書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
假定你是李華，希望通過外籍教師Peter找一個(gè)英語筆友。請寫一封短信，描述一下你理想中筆友的條件，并說明為什么選這樣的筆友。具體條件包括：1． 年齡； 2． 性別； 3． 愛好（旅游、運(yùn)動(dòng)、寵物等）。
注意：1．詞數(shù)100 左右；
2． 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3． 開頭語已為你寫好。
Dear Peter,
I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.