網(wǎng)友Camden2002今天上午給我發(fā)來一篇英文文章，作者是美國一所大學(xué)的英語講師，內(nèi)容則是美國大學(xué)生常犯的十大語法錯(cuò)誤（top ten grammar problems）。Camden2002網(wǎng)友建議我把這篇文章翻譯出來，讓國內(nèi)的英語學(xué)習(xí)者看看，美國大學(xué)生常犯的這些錯(cuò)誤，我們自己是否也常犯。這個(gè)建議非常好，不過我最近比較忙，各位的時(shí)間也很寶貴，所以我只把這十大語法錯(cuò)誤的大意翻譯出來，供各位參考一下。另外請(qǐng)注意：在下面的十組例句中，第一句是病句，第二句則是改正過來的句子。
一、句子之間缺少過渡性的單詞或詞組
① Salmons swim upstream， they leap over huge dams to reach their destination.
② Salmons swim upstream， and then they leap over huge dams to reach their destination.
二、省字號(hào)（'）的濫用
① the government's plan
② the plan of the government
三、代詞之間的性、數(shù)、格不一致
① Everyone has their homework.
② Everyone has his （or her） homework.
四、主句與從句的順序不當(dāng)
① Some of the new dot-com millionaires found out the party was over， after the NASDAQ value dropped by over two thirds.
② After the NASDAQ value dropped by over two thirds， some of the new dot-com millionaires found out the party was over.
五、雙重否定
① Barely no one noticed that the pop star lip-synched during the whole performance.
② Barely anyone noticed that the pop star lip-synched during the whole performance.
六、修飾語、插入語的位置不當(dāng)
① The forest fire， no longer held in check by the exhausted firefighters， jumped the firebreak.
② No longer held in check by the exhausted firefighters， the forest fire jumped the firebreak.
七、意義含糊的先行詞
① The band members collected his and her uniforms.
② The band members collected their uniforms.
八、介詞和冠詞的濫用
① The project of the government reduces the costs of production of the private firms.
② The government project reduces the production costs of private firms.
九、句子缺少成分
① When aiming for the highest returns， and also thinking about the possible losses.
② When aiming for the highest returns， investors also should think about the possible losses.
十、忘記斷句
① I do not recall what kind of printer it was all I remember is that it could sort， staple， and print a packet at the same time.
② I do not recall what kind of printer it was. All I remember is that it could sort， staple， and print a packet at the same time.
一、句子之間缺少過渡性的單詞或詞組
① Salmons swim upstream， they leap over huge dams to reach their destination.
② Salmons swim upstream， and then they leap over huge dams to reach their destination.
二、省字號(hào)（'）的濫用
① the government's plan
② the plan of the government
三、代詞之間的性、數(shù)、格不一致
① Everyone has their homework.
② Everyone has his （or her） homework.
四、主句與從句的順序不當(dāng)
① Some of the new dot-com millionaires found out the party was over， after the NASDAQ value dropped by over two thirds.
② After the NASDAQ value dropped by over two thirds， some of the new dot-com millionaires found out the party was over.
五、雙重否定
① Barely no one noticed that the pop star lip-synched during the whole performance.
② Barely anyone noticed that the pop star lip-synched during the whole performance.
六、修飾語、插入語的位置不當(dāng)
① The forest fire， no longer held in check by the exhausted firefighters， jumped the firebreak.
② No longer held in check by the exhausted firefighters， the forest fire jumped the firebreak.
七、意義含糊的先行詞
① The band members collected his and her uniforms.
② The band members collected their uniforms.
八、介詞和冠詞的濫用
① The project of the government reduces the costs of production of the private firms.
② The government project reduces the production costs of private firms.
九、句子缺少成分
① When aiming for the highest returns， and also thinking about the possible losses.
② When aiming for the highest returns， investors also should think about the possible losses.
十、忘記斷句
① I do not recall what kind of printer it was all I remember is that it could sort， staple， and print a packet at the same time.
② I do not recall what kind of printer it was. All I remember is that it could sort， staple， and print a packet at the same time.