212：If a goal is worthwhile, then any means taken to attain it is justifiable.”
Undeniably, it is during the process of continuously pursuing goals that h
uman civilization has developed and enhanced. Recently, there increasingly arise much concern about whether any means taken to attain a worthwhile goal is justifiable. Some people claim that it is reasonable to do anything to achieve it if only the goal was worthwhile. While in my opinion, the key point lies in first, the norm of judging whether the goal is actually worthwhile, and second, the validity of the means to achieve it.(有這樣的用法嗎？有的話就很好了。)
First of all, the most direct and effective way to determine whether a goal is worthwhile is to weigh the benefits of achieving it against its cost----- to us as well as to others.好觀點。In order to aptly illustrate this point, let’s take a chemistry factory for a specific example. With respect to a factory, to make the maximum profit via reducing the cost is naturally a worthwhile goal, which is favorable to factory owners, the employees, and even to the customers since the price of the products will be correspondingly lower with the decreasing of the cost to produce them. Nevertheless, at the same time, it may bring some questions such as the noise may disturb the quietness of the residents around the factory, and more importantly, the poisonous chemic gases may threaten the health of the residents.(這些毛病和減低cost有什么關(guān)系？我說過很多邊了。粒子要詳細一點。和主題集中一點。比如：為了減小開支，factory沒有treat polluted water就排放了。為了減少開支，factory沒有采取合適的安全措施啊。為了增加效率，讓工人晝夜加班，很疲勞，容易出事故。雇用童工等等。) That is to say, the goal is unreasonable and the factory has to draw a proper portion of incomes to treat the noise and the waste. Accordingly, it is necessary and indispensable to take others’interests into consideration when one to set up a valuable goal.我感覺看下來，觀點不夠集中。我覺得這里你說的并不是什么是決定一個goal是否有worthwihile.而是說，不出力噪音和廢水來節(jié)約開支是不可取的。你說呢？我認為這里可以從可持續(xù)發(fā)展的例子來說。但是你如果在nevertheless后加點東東的話就會好多了。
Furthermore, during the process of achieving the goal, one must assure that his or her behavior is within the law and the human morality.好觀點。For instance, a student who aims to be the number one of the class can only by means of studying hard or promoting the study effectiveness rather than making tricks in the exams.好。In a matter of fact, any goal realized by means of lawless intrigues may turn to be futile and ignoble. For supporting examples one need look no further than the Watergate Scandal. In order to be reappointed to be the President of America, Nixon had done something disgraceful in the vote, and later in order to disguise his active role in the Watergate cover-up, he even abused his presidential power to hamper the investigation of Watergate. When ultimately all these were exposed, Nixon had no choice but to resign. Consequently, on matter however great and worthwhile a goal is, the most fundamental principle is that all that one do to achieve it should be legal and virtuous.漂亮。要再來一段就好了，味道正濃的時候突然沒了。就來the validity of means來說。比如，是，現(xiàn)在是要保護環(huán)境，可是關(guān)掉全部工廠可行嗎？人類是要搞定aids,可是用所有的錢來搞它可以嗎？小行星是有很多礦物質(zhì)，可是現(xiàn)在人類有能力開采嗎？可以用反問的方式也很有說服力的。
In sum, it is essential to realize that a worthwhile goal means not only the more benefits of fulfilling it but also as few as possible disadvantages brought to others, and only by doing our utmost within the law and human morality, can the goal efficiently completed.句子漂亮
Undeniably, it is during the process of continuously pursuing goals that h
uman civilization has developed and enhanced. Recently, there increasingly arise much concern about whether any means taken to attain a worthwhile goal is justifiable. Some people claim that it is reasonable to do anything to achieve it if only the goal was worthwhile. While in my opinion, the key point lies in first, the norm of judging whether the goal is actually worthwhile, and second, the validity of the means to achieve it.(有這樣的用法嗎？有的話就很好了。)
First of all, the most direct and effective way to determine whether a goal is worthwhile is to weigh the benefits of achieving it against its cost----- to us as well as to others.好觀點。In order to aptly illustrate this point, let’s take a chemistry factory for a specific example. With respect to a factory, to make the maximum profit via reducing the cost is naturally a worthwhile goal, which is favorable to factory owners, the employees, and even to the customers since the price of the products will be correspondingly lower with the decreasing of the cost to produce them. Nevertheless, at the same time, it may bring some questions such as the noise may disturb the quietness of the residents around the factory, and more importantly, the poisonous chemic gases may threaten the health of the residents.(這些毛病和減低cost有什么關(guān)系？我說過很多邊了。粒子要詳細一點。和主題集中一點。比如：為了減小開支，factory沒有treat polluted water就排放了。為了減少開支，factory沒有采取合適的安全措施啊。為了增加效率，讓工人晝夜加班，很疲勞，容易出事故。雇用童工等等。) That is to say, the goal is unreasonable and the factory has to draw a proper portion of incomes to treat the noise and the waste. Accordingly, it is necessary and indispensable to take others’interests into consideration when one to set up a valuable goal.我感覺看下來，觀點不夠集中。我覺得這里你說的并不是什么是決定一個goal是否有worthwihile.而是說，不出力噪音和廢水來節(jié)約開支是不可取的。你說呢？我認為這里可以從可持續(xù)發(fā)展的例子來說。但是你如果在nevertheless后加點東東的話就會好多了。
Furthermore, during the process of achieving the goal, one must assure that his or her behavior is within the law and the human morality.好觀點。For instance, a student who aims to be the number one of the class can only by means of studying hard or promoting the study effectiveness rather than making tricks in the exams.好。In a matter of fact, any goal realized by means of lawless intrigues may turn to be futile and ignoble. For supporting examples one need look no further than the Watergate Scandal. In order to be reappointed to be the President of America, Nixon had done something disgraceful in the vote, and later in order to disguise his active role in the Watergate cover-up, he even abused his presidential power to hamper the investigation of Watergate. When ultimately all these were exposed, Nixon had no choice but to resign. Consequently, on matter however great and worthwhile a goal is, the most fundamental principle is that all that one do to achieve it should be legal and virtuous.漂亮。要再來一段就好了，味道正濃的時候突然沒了。就來the validity of means來說。比如，是，現(xiàn)在是要保護環(huán)境，可是關(guān)掉全部工廠可行嗎？人類是要搞定aids,可是用所有的錢來搞它可以嗎？小行星是有很多礦物質(zhì)，可是現(xiàn)在人類有能力開采嗎？可以用反問的方式也很有說服力的。
In sum, it is essential to realize that a worthwhile goal means not only the more benefits of fulfilling it but also as few as possible disadvantages brought to others, and only by doing our utmost within the law and human morality, can the goal efficiently completed.句子漂亮