短文改錯(cuò)練習(xí)講解一1

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Read the article below about training .
    ●In most of the lines 34-45 there is one extra word . It is either grammatically incorrect or
    doesn’t fit in the meaning of the text . Some lines, however, are correct .
    ●If a line is correct , write CORRECT on your Answer Sheet .
    ●If there is a extra word in the line , write the extra word in CAPITAL LETTER on your Answer Sheet.
    ●The exercises begins with two examples , (0) and (00) .
    Examples
    0 THAT
    00 CORRECT
    THE COST OF NOT TRAINING
    0 Training is not a cost . It’s an investment . It really doesn’t matter that what we pay
    00 for an investment . What is relevant is what we get in return . One of the easiest
    34 ways is to put an organization’s future at risk would be to view training primarily as
    35 a cost , and therefore provide with substandard training that operates only as a
    36 temporary solution . Many companies attempt to quantify as the results of training. For
    37 example , a person paid $50,000 a year who wastes just one hour a day costs the
    38 organization between $6,250 per year . So if the organization sends 25 people for
    39 training and they all receive the same benefit , this would equal from $156,250
    40 savings per year . A few of years ago , training , apart from showing employees
    41 what the basics of doing the job , was an optional extra for most organizations .
    42 Today this is no longer than the case . If we continue doing what we do in the same way ,
    43 most of us and our organizations will become obsolete within the five years . This is
    44 because of our competitors are helping their staff to become more effective through
    45 training . They understand that if the real price of not training is the company falling
    behind as a result .
    練習(xí)一:34 IS 35 WITH 36 AS 37 CORRECT
    38 BETWEEN 39 FROM 40 OF 41 WHAT
    42 THAN 43 THE 44 OF 45 IF
    詳 解:00 that和what不能夠同時(shí)用作賓語從句的連詞,根據(jù)句意,應(yīng)該刪去that。
    34 不定式作定語,后面已經(jīng)有謂語動(dòng)詞would ,所以is是多余的。
    35 provide是及物動(dòng)詞,經(jīng)常用于provide…with…結(jié)構(gòu)。
    36 quantify是及物動(dòng)詞,所以as是多余的。
    37 這一行沒有錯(cuò)誤。在這個(gè)句子中paid $50,000 a year是過去分詞短語作后置定語,who wastes just one hour a day是定語從句,句子的謂語是costs 。這個(gè)句子比較復(fù)雜, 要注意其句子結(jié)構(gòu)分析。
    38 between經(jīng)常和and連用.本句也沒有“在…..之間”之意。