短文改錯(cuò)練習(xí)講解二1

字號(hào):

●Read the article below about customer loyalty .
    ●In most of the lines 34-45 there is one extra word . It is either grammatically incorrect or
    doesn’t fit in the meaning of the text . Some lines, however, are correct .
    ●If a line is correct , write CORRECT on your Answer Sheet .
    ●If there is a extra word in the line , write the extra word in CAPITAL LETTER on your Answer Sheet.
    ●The exercises begins with two examples , (0) and (00) .
    Examples
    0 CORRECT
    00 IT
    INCREASING CUSTOMERS LOYALTY
    0 Customers are not revolutionaries. They are attracted to be the certainty of knowing that
    00 what they buy it will be good value for money or will perform a particular task effectively.
    34 They are cautious but their loyalty , without once achieved , is the key to business success.
    35 Brands can help to create customer loyalty by providing us a signpost to certainty and
    36 safety . Ideally , when a customer sees off a product , it leads to a range of positive thoughts
    37 so that the product is being bought . Unfortunately , only a small number of products have
    38 reached to this level . While everyone in business is aware of the need to attract and
    39 retain customers , that they often overlook the second , more important , half of the
    40 equation . In the excitement of beating against the competition and securing orders,
    41 managers often fail to ensure that the customer remains a customer . It has been
    42 estimated that since the average company loses between 10 to 30% of its customers
    43 every year and this only recently have organizations started to wake up to these lost
    44 opportunities and to calculate the financial implications . Established customers often
    45 buy more and, in the addition , they may also provide free word-of-mouth advertising.
    練習(xí)二:34 WITHOUT 35 US 36 OFF 37 BEING
    38 TO 39 THAT 40 AGAINST 41 CORRECT
    42 SINCE 43 THIS 44 CORRECT 45 THE
    詳 解:00 what是buy的賓語(yǔ),所以it是多余的。
    34 句意為“一旦得到”句中的without為干擾詞。
    35 并不是為“我們”提供,所以u(píng)s是多余的,實(shí)際上是為customers提供。
    36 See off是“為……送行”的意思,用在這里不合適,應(yīng)該去掉off。
    37 這里要用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)的一般形式,being多余。
    38 Reach是及物動(dòng)詞,它與get to / arrive at / arrive in不同。
    39 這是一個(gè)主句,上一行的while是從句.所以應(yīng)該去掉that, 否則沒(méi)有主句40 Beat是及物動(dòng)詞, against是多余的。
    41 這一行沒(méi)有錯(cuò)誤。
    42 這是一個(gè)主語(yǔ)從句。用了since 則句子不可以做主語(yǔ)了。
    43 這是一個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句, this在句中是多余的。
    44 這一行沒(méi)有錯(cuò)誤。
    45 In addition是固定結(jié)構(gòu),中間沒(méi)有定冠詞