2008年11月20日雅思A類作文解析

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小作文是2個bar圖。有或沒電視在bedroom,use 電腦對children的成績的影響。
    大作文是:As we know,international travel has become cheaper, more and more countries open their doors and more tourists go abroad for traveling.
    Do the advantages of the increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
    今天的小作文波瀾不驚,沒有特別大的變化,從此也告訴我們真的是要把真題弄熟悉,類似的談到小孩學(xué)習(xí)的題目出得非常多,各位可以在我的專欄上仔細(xì)看看。
    大作文也屬于很有特點的題目,從歸類上來說,這個文章屬于很常規(guī)的題目,可以歸在文化交流這一類,那么這類文章如果考到,要如何入手呢?我們的思路可以這樣展開:
    首先,文化包括語言,風(fēng)俗,宗教和節(jié)日。我們可以挑其中的兩個到三個方面去寫??梢詫憞H旅游會因為文化的不同而造成沖突。優(yōu)點可以寫促進文化交流。
    其次,可以寫國際旅游的經(jīng)濟因素,如當(dāng)?shù)厝藭迷p或者收比正常更高的費用,造成沖突。優(yōu)點可以寫促進經(jīng)濟發(fā)展。
    上面的思路也可以只寫文化交流或者經(jīng)濟交流,也都可以優(yōu)缺點都寫。下面給出兩個結(jié)構(gòu),供大家參考:
    A. 文化+經(jīng)濟 考試大
    1. 簡述題目,改寫題目,說明這個問題優(yōu)缺點并存
    2. 從文化角度去說明國際旅游的優(yōu)點,有助于不同文化的交流,舉例可以舉語言教育的進步,如雅思本身就是一種語言交流的例子;也可以講旅游使得不同的節(jié)日得以傳播,例如春節(jié)和圣誕的傳播。缺點可以說國際旅游使得某些弱勢文化趨于消失,例如某些人很少的民族趨向于滅亡,旅游帶來強勢文化會加劇這一進程。(注意,重點在于講事實,而不是去過多評論這些現(xiàn)象本身。)
    3. 從經(jīng)濟角度去說明國際旅游帶來的優(yōu)點在于促進旅游目的地的經(jīng)濟發(fā)展,也可以促進旅游出發(fā)國的消費,促進全球經(jīng)濟的交流和進步。缺點可以說會使得某些已經(jīng)非常落后的經(jīng)濟被外來的經(jīng)濟所同化和吞噬。
    4. 總結(jié)說明國際旅游的優(yōu)缺點并存而且很多時候確定也不容忽視,但是國際旅游作為無煙行業(yè)的優(yōu)勢不容忽視。
    B 文化examda
    1.說明文化的內(nèi)涵,改寫題目,點出優(yōu)缺點并存的事實。
    2.語言交流和國際旅游的關(guān)系,某些語言可能會消亡。
    3.宗教,生活方式的交流也有賴于國際旅游的進步,但是不同的生活方式和風(fēng)俗也可能帶來巨大的沖突。
    4.總結(jié),說明優(yōu)點多于缺點,加強交流和教育可以減少缺點而增加優(yōu)點。
    下面用A套路來寫一篇文章,給大家參考,也可以參考新東方寫作教程的第164頁。
    As we know,international travel has become cheaper, more and more countries open their doors and more tourists go abroad for traveling.
    Do the advantages of the increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
    With the tremendous thriving and growth of both economy and cultural diversity, international travel has already jumped onto the level of the leading industries. Many would argue that its advantages have already dispersed disadvantages, and many others negate this view.
    The advantages from international travel are multifarious and prevalent. As we can see in many metropolis, people with different tongues and dialects are swarming from many different countries, many of them may dwell in these strange cities for decades and deliver their own cultures and languages as well.Together with this communication brought by international travelling , people would get accommodated with many other life styles. For example, you now can find many French wines in nearly every corner in the world, for travellers would ask for this beverage when they find they are available.But we can not neglect the disadvantages of this industry either. Many nationalities may be eliminated for this cultural expansion. They may try to learn something modern and finally lose their mother language, which may already be on the verge of extinction.
    Another aspect of its advantages root from the economical part. Travelling means to spend much more than those days at home, and these money surely attracts many governments to appeal as many tourists as possible.However, we have to save some lag-behind economies as well,they may be weak before those investment from many other developed economies.
    At the end of a day, we can list many other advantages and disadvantages in both culture and economy. But one thing we know for sure is that we can try our best to remove those disadvantages through hard work in cooperation and conciliation, we can also amplify our advantages after long years of persistence.