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網(wǎng)友作文三:
    To: Ms Gedad
    From: Mr Fenliny來源:考試大
    Date: 4th August, 2008
    Subject: Reply to the invitation
    Room 204,**Road
    Minhang District
    Shanghai,http://ks.examda.com
    China (右上方)
    Thank you for your letter, Ms Gedad. We are very interested in your suggestion which[1] shown in the letter. And drama[2], I think, will be a quite good opportunity to have a further contact.
    The only little problem is the date of invitation because my schedule has been full this week. Could you check your agenda and make a change if possible? I'd like to hear your satisfied answer ASAP.
    Best wishes!
    your sincerely,
    Fenliny
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    [1]Which is/was shown
    [2]改成動名詞要好一些。 Attending a drama
    網(wǎng)友作文四:
    Dear Goddard,
    I have received the letter of Aug.7 and thank you for your letter[1] .
    I'm interested in your suggestion about our date [2] on Aug.10.I'd like to accpect your invitation to have a moive with you. I think we would have a nice day.
    Unfortunately,I need to meet my client on Aug.10,and I'm afraid that I have much work that week. Should we meet at 6.00 on Aug.14 afternoon. We could have dinner first if you're available.
    I'd like to hear you soon.[3]
    Best wishes.[4]
    Fenlini來源:考試大網(wǎng)
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    [1]合成一句好不好? Thanks for your letter on Aug.7th.
    [2]這是用在單身男女約會用的,咱們好像還不知道對方是否是單身哦! Appointment
    [3]I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
    [4]Sincerely yours
    網(wǎng)友作文五:
    Dear Angela,
    Thank you very much for your kind invitation. I'm very interested in the suggestions you mentioned about and hope to discuss with you on the details.
    I would be very pleased to enjoy your invitation for the drama. It's so kind of you.(去掉)
    Unfortunately, I have a big meeting with my boss on next Monday and i am unable to meet you on that day. Next Tuesday to Friday is possilbe for me. I would be greatful if you could tell me the suitable date for you.
    I look forward to hearing from you.
    Thanks and Best regards[1] .
    Fiona Caihttp://ks.examda.com
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    [1]Sincerely yours