高分必備:新托福寫作加分點1

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一、句式變化
    1. 變換句子的開頭結(jié)構(gòu)
    名詞做主語
    介詞短語作狀語
    副詞作狀語
    狀語從句
    分詞短語作狀語
    形容詞短語作狀語
    主語從句
    不定式短語做主語或狀語
    動名詞做主語
    To begin with, even in such areas as computer science, where it is estimated that much of what a student learns today will be obsolete in just five years, an advanced degree and the education it represents will continue to be of benefit. Unlike undergraduate education, which is divided into a number of small educational units every term, post-baccalaureate education is concentrated on deeper learning in fewer areas. Moreover, most graduate education requires extended, critical focus on complex issues or research projects. And even if the technical information relevant to completing a graduate-level project becomes outmoded, the learned critical methods and problem-solving approaches will not.
    2. 使用不同的句型結(jié)構(gòu)
    Today’s education system places too much emphasis on students’ desires rather than their needs. Accordingly, students are searching for the easy way out, and educators are willingly conspiring with them. As opposed to this trend, I would argue that students should study what is presented to them rather than what is desired by them. Not only should educators determine the curriculum, but also they should strive to insure that each individual student truly gains from his/her education, rather than just breezes through it.
    二、承上啟下
    1. 表示結(jié)論
    in conclusion
    in sum
    to conclude
    to sum up
    2. 表示肯定程度
    certainly
    clearly
    obviously
    plainly
    apparently
    surely
    undoubtedly
    naturally
    for certain
    for sure
    of course
    never
    always
    possibly
    perhaps
    likely
    probably
    potentially
    presumably
    to some extend
    in a large sense
    generally speaking
    in a sense
    generally
    in some sense
    normally
    ideally