奧運(yùn)會(huì)涌現(xiàn)出了無(wú)數(shù)的激情冠軍，也誕生了一個(gè)又一個(gè)的悲壯英雄。民調(diào)評(píng)出的敬佩的2008年北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)非冠軍運(yùn)動(dòng)員，美國(guó)名將馬修·埃蒙斯射失金牌，重蹈2004年雅典覆轍的“壯烈”一幕，至今讓人為之扼腕嘆息，而發(fā)自賽場(chǎng)的英文報(bào)道也透著那么一種悲傷和無(wú)奈：這就是體育！
Chinareceivesmen'sriflegoldfromEmmonsagain
Thescenewasreminiscenttotheonefouryearsago.
AmericanshooterMatthewEmmonsjustneededa6.6tobecrownedinthemen's50-meterriflethreepositionsattheBeijingOlympicGames.
Buthemadea4.4.
Gonewasthegold,eventhesilverandthebronze.
ThechampionbecameChineseshooterQiuJian,with1272.5points.FollowinghimwasJurySukhorukovfromUkrainewith1272.4andworldrecordholderRajmondDebevecfromSloveniawith1271.7points.
Advancingintothefinalwith1175points,onepointbehindtheleadingDebevec,the27-year-oldAmericanshootergota9.7inthefirstshot,whilethe45-year-oldSlovenianshotasurprising7.7andwashencedroppedtosecond.
Emmonsfurtherenlargedhisleadingadvantagebymakingsevenofthefollowingeightshotsaboveorequalling10.
Whilethe33-year-oldQiuexperiencedsomeupsanddownswithhisscoresfluctuatingfrom8.8to10.6.Butoriginallyrankedfourthwith1173points,hemanagedtoclimbtothethird.
Beforethelastshot,topfourwereEmmons,Sukhorukov,QiuandDebevec,withtheirgaps3.3points,0.1pointsand1.6pointsrespectively.
Sukhorukovfiredinthelastshot,a9.8.
Debevecmadea10.8.
Qiu,thesecondtolasttoopenfire,collecteda10.0,surpassinghisUkrainianrival.
ItwasthemomentforEmmons.
FouryearsagoinAthens,theshooter,withanobviousadvantageandwasjustoneshotawayfromthegold,hadhislastbulletplungedintoanothershooter'stargetandsawthegoldwonbyChineseshooterJiaZhanbo.
Thistime,heneededjusta9.2tobreaktheOlympicrecordof1275.1byDebevecanda6.6tobeatQiuandwinthegold,andeveryoneheldbreathtoseethemanstagingacomeback.
Hefired.
Thetargetwasright.
Butspectatorsletoutanexclamation.
Likeenchanted,henotchedupastunning4.4andplungedtothefourth.
Afterseveralsecondsofbewilderment,audiencescheeredandapplaudedfortheluckyChinesechampion,whohimselfgazedatthescreenofscoreindisbelief.
EmmonsthrewhimselfintothearmsofhiswifeKaterina,whojustwonagoldandasilverfromtheBeijingOlympics.
在這則報(bào)道中，有幾個(gè)地方值得我們?cè)诮窈蟮臅?shū)面表達(dá)中借鑒和模仿：
倒裝句傳遞的情感
第四段使用了一個(gè)完全倒裝句，“Gonewasthegold,eventhesilverandthebronze.”把它用在“Buthemadea4.4.”這樣的結(jié)果出現(xiàn)之后，凸現(xiàn)出了一種無(wú)奈嘆息的情感。一般而言，倒裝句的作用一是為了強(qiáng)調(diào)，二是為了語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)的需要。
簡(jiǎn)單句帶來(lái)的“跌宕起伏”
報(bào)道最后部分在描述埃蒙斯最后一槍?zhuān)鹋岂R上到手的時(shí)候連續(xù)使用了幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單得不能再簡(jiǎn)單的句子，沒(méi)有使用什么修飾，但卻令人感到窒息：
Hefired.
Thetargetwasright.
Butspectatorsletoutanexclamation.
Likeenchanted,henotchedupastunning4.4andplungedtothefourth.
…，…
這樣的描述扣人心弦，也讓人經(jīng)歷了大喜大悲。在適當(dāng)?shù)牡胤?，合理使用短句，既可以讀起來(lái)上口，又可以調(diào)整語(yǔ)篇的寫(xiě)作色彩。
記敘的高超手法
整篇報(bào)道在文章結(jié)構(gòu)上有“亮點(diǎn)”。一是題目和#高考# #指導(dǎo)高三英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)：一句倒裝萬(wàn)般感嘆#引發(fā)聯(lián)想，時(shí)光倒轉(zhuǎn)；二是首尾呼應(yīng)，先交代結(jié)果，后述過(guò)程。我們?cè)诟呖贾杏龅接洈⑽捏w的書(shū)面表達(dá)，往往寫(xiě)不生動(dòng)，這篇報(bào)道可以說(shuō)給了我們一個(gè)很好的參照，耐人回味。
Chinareceivesmen'sriflegoldfromEmmonsagain
Thescenewasreminiscenttotheonefouryearsago.
AmericanshooterMatthewEmmonsjustneededa6.6tobecrownedinthemen's50-meterriflethreepositionsattheBeijingOlympicGames.
Buthemadea4.4.
Gonewasthegold,eventhesilverandthebronze.
ThechampionbecameChineseshooterQiuJian,with1272.5points.FollowinghimwasJurySukhorukovfromUkrainewith1272.4andworldrecordholderRajmondDebevecfromSloveniawith1271.7points.
Advancingintothefinalwith1175points,onepointbehindtheleadingDebevec,the27-year-oldAmericanshootergota9.7inthefirstshot,whilethe45-year-oldSlovenianshotasurprising7.7andwashencedroppedtosecond.
Emmonsfurtherenlargedhisleadingadvantagebymakingsevenofthefollowingeightshotsaboveorequalling10.
Whilethe33-year-oldQiuexperiencedsomeupsanddownswithhisscoresfluctuatingfrom8.8to10.6.Butoriginallyrankedfourthwith1173points,hemanagedtoclimbtothethird.
Beforethelastshot,topfourwereEmmons,Sukhorukov,QiuandDebevec,withtheirgaps3.3points,0.1pointsand1.6pointsrespectively.
Sukhorukovfiredinthelastshot,a9.8.
Debevecmadea10.8.
Qiu,thesecondtolasttoopenfire,collecteda10.0,surpassinghisUkrainianrival.
ItwasthemomentforEmmons.
FouryearsagoinAthens,theshooter,withanobviousadvantageandwasjustoneshotawayfromthegold,hadhislastbulletplungedintoanothershooter'stargetandsawthegoldwonbyChineseshooterJiaZhanbo.
Thistime,heneededjusta9.2tobreaktheOlympicrecordof1275.1byDebevecanda6.6tobeatQiuandwinthegold,andeveryoneheldbreathtoseethemanstagingacomeback.
Hefired.
Thetargetwasright.
Butspectatorsletoutanexclamation.
Likeenchanted,henotchedupastunning4.4andplungedtothefourth.
Afterseveralsecondsofbewilderment,audiencescheeredandapplaudedfortheluckyChinesechampion,whohimselfgazedatthescreenofscoreindisbelief.
EmmonsthrewhimselfintothearmsofhiswifeKaterina,whojustwonagoldandasilverfromtheBeijingOlympics.
在這則報(bào)道中，有幾個(gè)地方值得我們?cè)诮窈蟮臅?shū)面表達(dá)中借鑒和模仿：
倒裝句傳遞的情感
第四段使用了一個(gè)完全倒裝句，“Gonewasthegold,eventhesilverandthebronze.”把它用在“Buthemadea4.4.”這樣的結(jié)果出現(xiàn)之后，凸現(xiàn)出了一種無(wú)奈嘆息的情感。一般而言，倒裝句的作用一是為了強(qiáng)調(diào)，二是為了語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)的需要。
簡(jiǎn)單句帶來(lái)的“跌宕起伏”
報(bào)道最后部分在描述埃蒙斯最后一槍?zhuān)鹋岂R上到手的時(shí)候連續(xù)使用了幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單得不能再簡(jiǎn)單的句子，沒(méi)有使用什么修飾，但卻令人感到窒息：
Hefired.
Thetargetwasright.
Butspectatorsletoutanexclamation.
Likeenchanted,henotchedupastunning4.4andplungedtothefourth.
…，…
這樣的描述扣人心弦，也讓人經(jīng)歷了大喜大悲。在適當(dāng)?shù)牡胤?，合理使用短句，既可以讀起來(lái)上口，又可以調(diào)整語(yǔ)篇的寫(xiě)作色彩。
記敘的高超手法
整篇報(bào)道在文章結(jié)構(gòu)上有“亮點(diǎn)”。一是題目和#高考# #指導(dǎo)高三英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)：一句倒裝萬(wàn)般感嘆#引發(fā)聯(lián)想，時(shí)光倒轉(zhuǎn)；二是首尾呼應(yīng)，先交代結(jié)果，后述過(guò)程。我們?cè)诟呖贾杏龅接洈⑽捏w的書(shū)面表達(dá)，往往寫(xiě)不生動(dòng)，這篇報(bào)道可以說(shuō)給了我們一個(gè)很好的參照，耐人回味。