第四部分 寫作
PartA
66．【高分范文】
Mr．Smith，
Congratulations for your 1Oth wedding anniversary! Thanks for inviting me to your 1Oth wedding anniversary．I’d like to go to your party at Park Hotel．but I have to go to Beijing for business on that day so I’m afraid I couldn’t attend your party．I hope that won’t bother you．I will bring a present for you from Beijing．And my wife and I will visit you after my coming back．Wish you have a good time．And congratulations again!
Have a goodtime!
Yours respectively，
Wang Lin
【寫作點(diǎn)金】
本文是一封取消預(yù)約的信函.因?yàn)楸緛?lái)是說(shuō)好去參加別人結(jié)婚10周年紀(jì)念，即使去不了我們也應(yīng)該向?qū)Ψ奖硎咀ＹR.然后再說(shuō)自己為什么不能去參加聚會(huì)，并表示歉意.
在寫作時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)氣一定要誠(chéng)懇.在信的結(jié)尾要向?qū)Ψ皆俅伪硎咀ＹR，這樣才顯得有禮貌.
【高頻詞句】
1．congratulations表示祝賀的這個(gè)詞必不可少.
2．I have to go to Beijing for business on that day so I’m afraid I couldn’t attend your party．我那天要去北京出差，所以恐怕我去不了你們的聚會(huì)了.
3．I hope that won’t bother you．我希望你們不要介意.
4．And my wife and 1 will visit you after my coming back．從北京回來(lái)后我和妻子將登門拜訪.
Part B
67．【高分范文】
Almost every family in cities drink pure water nowadays．It has become a fashion．Why do people drink pure water instead of common water? The main reason is that pure water is good for Our health．Besides，drinking pure water is more convenient，because pure water can be drunk directly．
Some people would ask why drinking pure water is good for our health．As we know，water pollution is very serious now．So drinking common water doesn’t sound so safe as before．Pure water is absolutely clean because it doesn’t contain any mineral element．Also some certain mineral in water will do harm to our bodies when it is taken too much．At this point，pure water should he our choice．
Besides all above．pure water also tastes good．You should have a try if you haven’t ever drunk pure water before．
【寫作點(diǎn)金】
在寫這篇作文的時(shí)候，首先可以以很多人都喝純凈水來(lái)引出主題.這篇文章的重點(diǎn)是純凈水對(duì)身體有好處.我們可以就所了解的知識(shí)分條來(lái)闡述.因?yàn)檫@是一篇介紹性文章，所以在語(yǔ)言方面要平實(shí).
【高頻詞句】
1．It has become a fashion．這已經(jīng)成為一種時(shí)尚.
2．Besides，drinking pure water is more convenient，because pure water can be drunk directly．除此之外，喝純凈水比較方便，因?yàn)榧儍羲梢灾苯雍?
3．As we know．water pollution is very serious now．眾所周知，水污染現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)很嚴(yán)重了.
4．So drinking common water doesn’t sound so safe as before．所以喝普通的水不如以前那么安全了.
5．Also some certain mineral in water will be harmful to our bodies when it is taken too much．有些礦物元素?cái)z人太多會(huì)對(duì)身體有害.
6. Besides all above．．．除了以卜所述…
PartA
66．【高分范文】
Mr．Smith，
Congratulations for your 1Oth wedding anniversary! Thanks for inviting me to your 1Oth wedding anniversary．I’d like to go to your party at Park Hotel．but I have to go to Beijing for business on that day so I’m afraid I couldn’t attend your party．I hope that won’t bother you．I will bring a present for you from Beijing．And my wife and I will visit you after my coming back．Wish you have a good time．And congratulations again!
Have a goodtime!
Yours respectively，
Wang Lin
【寫作點(diǎn)金】
本文是一封取消預(yù)約的信函.因?yàn)楸緛?lái)是說(shuō)好去參加別人結(jié)婚10周年紀(jì)念，即使去不了我們也應(yīng)該向?qū)Ψ奖硎咀ＹR.然后再說(shuō)自己為什么不能去參加聚會(huì)，并表示歉意.
在寫作時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)氣一定要誠(chéng)懇.在信的結(jié)尾要向?qū)Ψ皆俅伪硎咀ＹR，這樣才顯得有禮貌.
【高頻詞句】
1．congratulations表示祝賀的這個(gè)詞必不可少.
2．I have to go to Beijing for business on that day so I’m afraid I couldn’t attend your party．我那天要去北京出差，所以恐怕我去不了你們的聚會(huì)了.
3．I hope that won’t bother you．我希望你們不要介意.
4．And my wife and 1 will visit you after my coming back．從北京回來(lái)后我和妻子將登門拜訪.
Part B
67．【高分范文】
Almost every family in cities drink pure water nowadays．It has become a fashion．Why do people drink pure water instead of common water? The main reason is that pure water is good for Our health．Besides，drinking pure water is more convenient，because pure water can be drunk directly．
Some people would ask why drinking pure water is good for our health．As we know，water pollution is very serious now．So drinking common water doesn’t sound so safe as before．Pure water is absolutely clean because it doesn’t contain any mineral element．Also some certain mineral in water will do harm to our bodies when it is taken too much．At this point，pure water should he our choice．
Besides all above．pure water also tastes good．You should have a try if you haven’t ever drunk pure water before．
【寫作點(diǎn)金】
在寫這篇作文的時(shí)候，首先可以以很多人都喝純凈水來(lái)引出主題.這篇文章的重點(diǎn)是純凈水對(duì)身體有好處.我們可以就所了解的知識(shí)分條來(lái)闡述.因?yàn)檫@是一篇介紹性文章，所以在語(yǔ)言方面要平實(shí).
【高頻詞句】
1．It has become a fashion．這已經(jīng)成為一種時(shí)尚.
2．Besides，drinking pure water is more convenient，because pure water can be drunk directly．除此之外，喝純凈水比較方便，因?yàn)榧儍羲梢灾苯雍?
3．As we know．water pollution is very serious now．眾所周知，水污染現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)很嚴(yán)重了.
4．So drinking common water doesn’t sound so safe as before．所以喝普通的水不如以前那么安全了.
5．Also some certain mineral in water will be harmful to our bodies when it is taken too much．有些礦物元素?cái)z人太多會(huì)對(duì)身體有害.
6. Besides all above．．．除了以卜所述…